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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww hun this was beyond beautiful...tooo painful heart-wrenching but at the same time sooo heart-touching intense fab sweet cute lovely...surely u know how to leave us speechless spellbound!


Thank you so much for this marvellous piece again...



Lots of love hugs,
Spandana


Thanks to you for reading this ;)
Hugs πŸ€—
And thank you for whatever you did for EDKV ❀️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb


Thanks to you for reading this ;)
Hugs πŸ€—
And thank you for whatever you did for EDKV ❀️


Aww how sweet but no need of thanks yaar..We all are One EDKV Family πŸ€—
Edited by sptrno - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sptrno



Aww how sweet but no need of thanks yaar..We all are One EDKV FamilyπŸ€—


πŸ€— ❀️
No seriously I don't know if season 2 will ever happen but your efforts are commendable!
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Posted: 7 years ago
As she tentatively opened her eyes, yawning lightly she was spellbound by the sight she met. Curled up next to her was her best friend cum husband...daydream look in your eye's..!

But then dreams were like those expensive toys you see behind the showcase and as many times you pass in front of it the craving increases and so does the void in your heart...Heart Breaking..! (ShraMan n beyond)

at the end of the day she always found him...! Edkv...meant to be 😳

She was not that person anymore and she wouldn't commit the same mistakes...! That's my girl...😊

Tum phirse jaa rahi thi na ?" He looked at her accusingly, his voice heavy, something she wanted to put on his freshly waken up state but deep down she knew that it was just the heaviness of his heart resurfacing...
When you feel my heat,,
Look into my eyes,,
It's where my demons hide..!

She hated to see him like this, all defeated, his shoulders plumped down, perhaps it was the best friend side which resurfaced, she couldn't see Shravan defeated in front of anyone even if it was her.
And I, I hate to see your heart break,,
I hate to see your eyes get darker as they close,,
But I've been there before..!

"Shravan, itni jaldi tumhara picha nahi jodon gi." A smile grew on her face as he looked down, his cheeks colouring. Shravan Malhotra was flustered and she liked the fact that she was behind it... aww...!☺️

Bohot khush naseeb ho tum jo itni khubsoorat dulhan mili."...indeed..!

When he was away from her, it was easy for him to draw her portrait, to categorize her the way he wanted, to paint her in any colour... yes,,it is...but closer u get,,better u know..!

Here is Sumo version2.0 exclusively for u Mr. Malhotra..! Hold her close..!

He had tried time and again to deny it, but as his eyes fell on her, laughing, her head slightly thrown back, her eyes twinkling, Shravan Malhotra realised that he was falling in love with her. All over again... was he ever out of love..!πŸ˜‰

From there, he stepped up his self-preservation plan...
Don't get too close,,
It's dark inside,,
It's where my demons hide..!

Once, she fell asleep on the dining table, waiting for him...😭

She was proud of him, after all she was the one who had pushed him, to no end...! Adoration..!

Sajna hai mujhey Sajna ke liye...! Gestures..!

As she processed to arrange the collar of his shirt, she stumbled forward but he was quick to recover and secured his hands around her waist...Tum mujhey kabhi girne nahi doge..!

He had trimmed his bear, she never told him, but she liked it that way, it accentuated his already sharp features...it's Sumo or the fangirls...!πŸ˜›

Perhaps, that's why he had been that distant over the course of the week. He had found someone else, or he just couldn't bear to look at her or both...
She smiles through a thousand tears,,
And harbors adolescent fears..!
She dreams of all,,
That she can never be..!
She wades in insecurity,,
And hides herself inside of me..!


She had scared him...To love at all,is to be vulnerable..!

She stomped on his foot, earning a glare from him, before making herself comfortable in the car. πŸ˜†

He was always fascinated by her, he claimed to know her, but just a glimpse of her tattoo and he found himself willing to know more about her, curiosity nudging him...😳

"Pehle mujhe Sumo bolo." She insisted like a kid...
Now,,,that's the beauty...taking reader's by surprise..! From cute antics to earnest desires !!πŸ‘

"Chalo sojao ab." He said arranging the t-shirt.

"Your hair are sooo soft." She looked dreamily at him.
"I was dying to do this." She admitted as her fingers found purchase in the back of his head.

"If I ask you for something, will you give it to me?"... I held by breath! !
So he nodded wordlessly...😳
"Mujhe mera Shravan wapas dedo."Her eyes turned softer as she spoke the words, her voice above than a whisper...! Omg! I had lump in my throat!

He was alone and a failure. He may be the most successful lawyer of his generation, but from the inside he was hollow, empty...
When your dreams all fail,,
And the ones we hail..!
Are the worst of all,,
And the blood's run stale..!

"Please." She said looking straight in the eyes...

His heart constricted in his chest and it felt like someone had punched him into the stomach. She thought that he had forgotten her, he had tried again and again. But does someone even forget themselves? Even in a myriad of people, his eyes would find her, so forgetting her ? Erasing his existence seemed easier...
I wanna hide the truth,,
I wanna shelter you..!
But with the beast inside,,
There's nowhere we can hide..!

"Kho gayi." He simply said.
"Meri waja se na?" She asked. He didn't say anything. They just looked into their eyes for the longest time... it's like summary of everything that has transpired so far..!

"Nahi toh.".. armour on!

"Kis haq se rokta? Wo haq mene khud kho diya tha." He said clenching his fist, his jaw tense...regret!

She completely leaned into his embrace, her face buried in the crook of his neck. His arms tightened around her waist as he placed his cheek on top of her head...
Sunai deti hai jiski dhadkan,wo tumhara dil hai ya hamara dil hai..!!

You have slayed it like anything! !

I hope I hv not bored you with such a long comment..!facepalm!
And if I may ask for a p.m..! πŸ˜ƒ


Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

As she tentatively opened her eyes, yawning lightly she was spellbound by the sight she met. Curled up next to her was her best friend cum husband...daydream look in your eye's..!
Sumo's morning was made ;)


But then dreams were like those expensive toys you see behind the showcase and as many times you pass in front of it the craving increases and so does the void in your heart...Heart Breaking..! (ShraMan n beyond)
Indeed

at the end of the day she always found him...! Edkv...meant to be😳

She was not that person anymore and she wouldn't commit the same mistakes...! That's my girl...😊

Tum phirse jaa rahi thi na ?" He looked at her accusingly, his voice heavy, something she wanted to put on his freshly waken up state but deep down she knew that it was just the heaviness of his heart resurfacing...
When you feel my heat,,
Look into my eyes,,
It's where my demons hide..!
Beautiful lines!

She hated to see him like this, all defeated, his shoulders plumped down, perhaps it was the best friend side which resurfaced, she couldn't see Shravan defeated in front of anyone even if it was her.
And I, I hate to see your heart break,,
I hate to see your eyes get darker as they close,,
But I've been there before..!

"Shravan, itni jaldi tumhara picha nahi jodon gi." A smile grew on her face as he looked down, his cheeks colouring. Shravan Malhotra was flustered and she liked the fact that she was behind it... aww...!☺️

Bohot khush naseeb ho tum jo itni khubsoorat dulhan mili."...indeed..!

When he was away from her, it was easy for him to draw her portrait, to categorize her the way he wanted, to paint her in any colour... yes,,it is...but closer u get,,better u know..!

Here is Sumo version2.0 exclusively for u Mr. Malhotra..! Hold her close..!
Will he realise that ?

He had tried time and again to deny it, but as his eyes fell on her, laughing, her head slightly thrown back, her eyes twinkling, Shravan Malhotra realised that he was falling in love with her. All over again... was he ever out of love..!
Never ;)
πŸ˜‰

From there, he stepped up his self-preservation plan...
Don't get too close,,
It's dark inside,,
It's where my demons hide..!
I love this

Once, she fell asleep on the dining table, waiting for him...😭

She was proud of him, after all she was the one who had pushed him, to no end...! Adoration..!

Sajna hai mujhey Sajna ke liye...! Gestures..!

As she processed to arrange the collar of his shirt, she stumbled forward but he was quick to recover and secured his hands around her waist...Tum mujhey kabhi girne nahi doge..!
Tabby yaar memories <3

He had trimmed his bear, she never told him, but she liked it that way, it accentuated his already sharp features...it's Sumo or the fangirls...!
Both !
πŸ˜›

Perhaps, that's why he had been that distant over the course of the week. He had found someone else, or he just couldn't bear to look at her or both...
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">She smiles through a thousand tears,,
And harbors adolescent fears..!
She dreams of all,,
That she can never be..!
She wades in insecurity,,
And hides herself inside of me..!</font>

<font size="2">
</font>
She had scared him...To love at all,is to be vulnerable..!

She stomped on his foot, earning a glare from him, before making herself comfortable in the car.πŸ˜†

He was always fascinated by her, he claimed to know her, but just a glimpse of her tattoo and he found himself willing to know more about her, curiosity nudging him...😳

"Pehle mujhe Sumo bolo." She insisted like a kid...
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Now,,,that's the beauty...taking reader's by surprise..! From cute antics to earnest desires !!πŸ‘</font>

"Chalo sojao ab." He said arranging the t-shirt.

"Your hair are sooo soft." She looked dreamily at him.
"I was dying to do this." She admitted as her fingers found purchase in the back of his head.

"If I ask you for something, will you give it to me?"... I held by breath! !
So he nodded wordlessly...😳
"Mujhe mera Shravan wapas dedo."Her eyes turned softer as she spoke the words, her voice above than a whisper...! Omg! I had lump in my throat!

He was alone and a failure. He may be the most successful lawyer of his generation, but from the inside he was hollow, empty...
<font size="2">When your dreams all fail,,
And the ones we hail..!
Are the worst of all,,
And the blood's run stale..!</font>

"Please." She said looking straight in the eyes...

His heart constricted in his chest and it felt like someone had punched him into the stomach. She thought that he had forgotten her, he had tried again and again. But does someone even forget themselves? Even in a myriad of people, his eyes would find her, so forgetting her ? Erasing his existence seemed easier...
<font size="2">I wanna hide the truth,,
I wanna shelter you..!
But with the beast inside,,
There's nowhere we can hide..!
</font>
<font size="2">
</font>
"Kho gayi." He simply said.
"Meri waja se na?" She asked. He didn't say anything. They just looked into their eyes for the longest time... it's like summary of everything that has transpired so far..!

"Nahi toh.".. armour on!

"Kis haq se rokta? Wo haq mene khud kho diya tha." He said clenching his fist, his jaw tense...regret!

She completely leaned into his embrace, her face buried in the crook of his neck. His arms tightened around her waist as he placed his cheek on top of her head...
Sunai deti hai jiski dhadkan,wo tumhara dil hai ya hamara dil hai..!!

You have slayed it like anything! !

<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">I hope I hv not bored you with such a long comment..!facepalm!</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">And if I may ask for a p.m..!πŸ˜ƒ</font>



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You can't ever bore me with your comments they are mood lifting. I was actually waiting for it. I love reading the lines you put, just love it!
As for the pm I sent you a buddy request so you'll get one ;)
You seriously need to stop making me smile like this, mom gets the wrong idea πŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
A question. How many years it had been since Nirmala left ? 11 or 12 ? If we go by the calculation it's 11 but in an episode Ramnath says 12, so little confused.
Edited by KitkitMkb - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome chapter...very emotional.. You made me cry😭
From last update i thought shravan will try to save this marriage but in this update it was totally opposite Sumo was trying to fix everything
Shravan's insecurities are beautifully penned..
"Pehle mujhe Sumo bolo"..Drunk Sumo is so cute
Really like the part where sumo says that she misses her shravan..
Excited for next part..Plz continue soon
And Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Awesome chapter...very emotional.. You made me cry😭
From last update i thought shravan will try to save this marriagebut in this update it was totally oppositeSumo was trying to fix everything
Shravan's insecurities are beautifully penned..
"Pehle mujhe Sumo bolo"..Drunk Sumo is so cute
Really like the part where sumo says that she misses her shravan..
Excited for next part..Plz continue soon
And Thanks for the pm😊


He tries to but then realise that he is falling for her so in order to not get hurt he pulls this kind of stunt.
You are welcome!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb


He tries to but then realise that he is falling for her so in order to not get hurt he pulls this kind of stunt.
You are welcome!


When we will get next chapter.. ??? Really waiting for new chapter...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: kranti



When we will get next chapter.. ??? Really waiting for new chapter...


In the week hopefully :)
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