ShraMan SS: Being Loved - Chapter 14 - Link updated - Page 24 - Page 5

ERMAGERD I just tatted reading this and I love it so much! The way in which you've expressed every emotion, har ek pal itna haseen likha hai
Can't wait for more!!!

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I must say this is the most beautiful story about shraman on this forum and it's better than the show too. The way you have handled and penned shraman characters, their emotions it shows that you know what shravan is or what sumo is.

It is so wonderful to read your story which leaves a longing in my heart to realise how the writers had spoiled our Shraman in the serial. But I make up for it as I imagine each and every dialogues of yours being spoken by our leads.

This story of yours has finally managed to satisfy my expectations of the Shraman story that I wanted . ..it's difficult to describe the beauty of your narration...what a depth . ...Take a bow...you have arrived 👏👏👏

Fabulous update!!

Woh,it was a wonderful update worth the wait!!! You have brought out the inner feelings of Shravan so beautifully!!!! Eager to read the next part!!!

Awesome update...ramu Kaka's pov was hilarious🤣

hajnal dear thanks for the pm.. n yeah when I came back, my inbox was really full.of pm's ...thanks to u amazing writers :). this ss when I had read first two parts, I was speechless... really didn't know how to react, as I was lost in it completely... n third part was amazing as well.. oh bahadur ji. ..felt pity for him...the way you wrote about his tension. , fear it was hilarious...was laughing like hell ...n how shravu realised his feelings n then told him that he'll take care of his kitchen as sumo will be with him.. n then whoa so shravu didn't meet nirmu, before that ramu came ...n after that fiasco, something was fishy between sumo n ramu n shravu realised it.. how nirmu called n asked sumo whether she talked him about her or not aha that time I felt so bad for nirmu .. felt pity for her n finally sumo consoled her... she's in dilemma herself how to brought up all this in front of shravu .. n then the shraman talk was so cute ...how he asked whether she'll be late n she assured she wont... loved it... both wants to ask n confess... he wants to ask what's cooking on between her n ramu n on other hand she wants him to let know about his parents reality... beautifully written hajnal... I must say you're going to be a rising star of this forum ... waiting for next pm dear... pls update soon...:)