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You are an amazing writer.
Both Suman and Shravan's emotions were beautifully penned down.
The show ignored many aspects. But I m glad you are taking them into account.
Waiting for the next update
Originally posted by: imshveta
Thank you, it's an awesome update.
All their emotions, feelings and their mutual understanding beautifully penned down.
You are right, the makers fell short of explaining many things, this situation being one of them. And I am so glad that your are trying in your own way to do that here.
You write beautifully and you should do it more often.
Amazing piece of work!!
And dear Hajnal, i agree with every word of yours in your note and I'm so glad that we are here to get what we deserved...
Originally posted by: reshmanair356
IF was playing games, hence commented below😊
Originally posted by: reshmanair356
This!!
See you wanted your readers to shout this, I do it or rather you made me do it 😊Reshma aka my PR, your starting with 'THIS!'... Haha, yes, this is what I wanted, thank you for always giving me the reactions I hope to get! 🤗This was a beauty!!...you gave us a fair overview, why we could not fathom Suman's obstinate obsession with her independence. That in spite of the fact that we ourselves are pretty independent as women ...it wasn't explained in the series and you gave us that twist here to make the whole PCT demolition saga much more relatable.Shravan was used to playing her savior since the time he knew her. So he goes ahead and does what comes naturally to him..provide a net for her before she even falls. His hurt when she does not accept his extended hand is so touching here, his confusion as to what has changed the dynamics between them was so beautifully pointed out...if he could be a first point contact when disaster struck her during their childhood , what could possibly define him as 'anyone' now.Can I say 'THIS!' to what you wrote too? Because that's actually what I wanted to achieve with this chapter, Suman's need for independence and Shravan's confusion wasn't clear in EDKV at all, to many it appeared as if they were being arrogant or childish, not all of the viewers could get him/her and that's why his/her actions and reactions were misunderstood. I am glad I could clear that point.The most beautiful moment of this update was when while handing over the property papers to her, Shravan said that it wasn't a help, it was something that he could do. As a friend, when our loved one is grieving, you end up doing everything that you can..what a melting moment there!!I agree, again, Shravan's attitude has always had the aura of 'it's not help, I am doing this because I can', every time something happened, from him fighting the case for Tiwari Killa to smalls gestures, it never felt as if he was 'helping', it was more like he is doing the most natural thing to him. The reason why he never understood why she wouldn't let him and bring all the 'self-respect' thing... (But I have something in mind for that too! 😃)You made Shravan read the papers before he fought the case, that's really becoming of a big lawyer that he was touted to be.Haha, how could I not, I mean, the PTC episode may have made him look like an incompetent and careless lawyer, added to Suman madam's 'it's all because of your father', AT LEAST we remember that Shravan Malhotra is a badass lawyer. After all, apart from everything he did after coming to India, he had worked in London for a few years after completing his education <- Read it as without his Mahan of so powerful lawyer father's influence, help and 'guidance'I STILL can't get over that episode!This update was exquisite, almost like all other of your works.The last paragraph...speechless there.You are a beautiful author..know that👏
Originally posted by: nuttynuts
Lovely story. So close, yet so far. I hope they get through this one together. Update soon!
Originally posted by: lizzy1299
You are an amazing writer.
Both Suman and Shravan's emotions were beautifully penned down.The show ignored many aspects. But I m glad you are taking them into account.Waiting for the next update
Originally posted by: pinky.padda
wowthis was amazingwhat will sumo do nowwill she take shravans help or notand what will ramu docannot waitcontinue soon
Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
I am often not able to comment because you kind of leave me speechless 😆
Haha, I do? I am glad then! 😆
On a serious note, I really wanted to thank you. I don't know if it has to do with the fact that vacations are near or the fact that I see other shows still going on but I've been missing EDKV a lot, lately. Every time you write something it's like someone gave me a part of my show and I can't explain how incredible that feels.That's so sweet of you, thank you, and I am glad I am able to do that because I know what you are talking about! I think each one of us feels so empty and misses EDKV every time we are reminded of how we should have had it for longer than we did. I hope I will be able to keep giving you the lil bit I can and I hope you will keep enjoying my writing! 🤗About that note, when the show was on air, you could easily decipher two clans : one, which thought that Shravan didn't deserve to be with Sumo after everything he had done and in the other hand some people thought the contrary.But here you make me feel for both of them, something the show couldn't keep doing till the end.Haha, that's true! We all were divided by the way we perceived things, and I am so glad that you think I was able to make you feel for both of them because I have countless times feared that I won't be able to balance it.
Despite its flaws, it will always stay the most special from me, so thank you for continuing what was promised to us.
Please never ever stop writing on them 🤗 ❤️That's true! Despite all the flaws, EDKV and ShraMan are precious to us and I am glad we have found a way to enjoy them together...Haha, Thank you for demanding that, I won't! 🤗
Those quotes in the beginning of your chapters tell me that you are an ardent reader, any suggestions ?
In dire need of good books 😆
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