ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31 - Page 5

hii dear...just loved dis part...very very emotional..

Lovely update...just loved shraman scsne..and nanu reaction on finding them

Fabulous update dear..
ShraMan convo ...superb

Omg... beathtakingly beautiful. ..😳

man u made me cry...I was literally crying throughout reading the chapter...man wat a confession...both were dying in grief...badly hurt mentally n physically... n extremely emotionally... he lost three lovable persons at one night n on the other hand she was molested badly by that monster... the fear, the grief, the pain, the realization, the relief, the trust, the unbroken trust. the way you described all this I'm speechless... was surrounded by grief of edkv ending as it ended abruptly... but this chapter made me realise that this is something they should've shown in the show... the pain that was killing them badly... the grief that had surrounded them badly... hats off... thanks so much for such a wonderful ss ...waiting for next part... n yeah will read ur other ss too...

have send u a buddy on Pearl white n a hajnal too a long ago...waiting for pm's ... thanks for appreciating my comments...m glad u liked it... n yeah about this chapter I've to describe a lil more... the bond that they shared since childhood is something you can't describe in words... she went to check the door n felt his presence...he too felt it was her... how broken they're both but still consoled each other...embraced each other ...held each other at bad times...rescued each other as always...n she knew he's the one she could trust blindly n he too could...she'd trust that on him that she's safe with him... n nanu ...one of my fvrt character's ...he knew wat his granddaughter felt, wat she needed n wat bond shraman shared... touched my heart completely this chapter yar. .thanks a lot...

Buddy, this was love!
This gradual rebuilding of the lost bond and healing touches soothing the torn souls was magical.
I was spellbound with that scene of Shraman leaning onto one-another, it felt as if these two were the only souls in the world.
Dosti aur pyaar se badh ke kuch alag hi nata hai inka. Something which is undefined yet so palpable. Wish the cvs had worked on this.

Shravan sitting out there with no where to go. That solitary broken husk of a man simply hanging there with neither a wish nor a destination. A haunting picture was created with so few a words.

And Sumo, that warrior doll who kept on with the strong facade but was crumbling under the pressure. And amidst all she was dealing, she was equally worried for her friend.

And the moment these two came together, they found a semblance of peace together.

The night spent together expressed so many feels that any physical expression will naught.

Please extend this into a fanfic.

You are a lovely writer.

Siimply beautiful... 👏 n a bit emotional 😭
but i loved it... 😉

No hope in liking it.
I loved it .
Read it twice , cried twice.

What did you do there ?
That was beautiful.

Shravan's self blame .
Sumo being there for him.

Both guilty for their weakened relationship.
'You were too late for me while I gave up too early for you.'
*sigh*
So beautiful <3

Their hug.
The assurance that whatever the circumstances would be , they would be there for each other.

This was heartwarming.
Waiting for more.
-God bless.