Man, this was absolutely brilliant!! Super awesome sauce!!
You caught the vein of the issue so intricately.
Shravan's and Ramnath's mistakes do not absolve Suman and Nirmala of their share of mistakes.
The confrontation was epic, a true masterpiece. You handled the delicate father-son relationship along wulith the feelings of betrayal, guilt and defeat so poignantly.
Shravan got to show his ruthlessness yet he could not keep a hold on his emotions. And Nirmala has been a lousy mother and nothing can make her a true-blue abla nari, haye bechari. I absolutely hated her for showering all her love on that Chomu. She had already given up Shravu in her heart. I dont even want a Niru- Shravan confrontation because frankly she doesnt deserve a second of Shravan's time. But on second thoughts, bring it on for he needs to purge it out.
Shravan's abandonment issues were so well written. And Sumo also did not have him on her priority list. His misty eyes, his burly vision and that defeated stance... Is he going towards a breakdown??
I kept imagining Namik enacting the scene... It gave me goosebumps.
Wish this was the canon version...
Loved it...
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