I could have sworn that I had commented on this ...so imagine my shock when I don't see it here..IF must have crashed the exact moment I decided to comment. ..nonetheless, here I am😃
You know. .when he had gone to the hotel to serve Nirmala the notice meant for Aditya. ..asking him to stay away from.Sumo, I had thought that you wouldn't be able to come up with a scene more beautiful, but after reading this , I can safely say that you have surpassed yourself ...it was a classic confrontation, one where he spat out every last bit of bitterness that he might have had harboured in his life.
Each accusation hurled was meaningful just as each justification provided was meaningless.
What nailed the update was when Shravan told Nirmala how the second time she appeared in his life took away his father from.him. That was the turning point in the series as well. A well.meaning and well involved father who had as much as thanked Suman for being an anchor to his son during the plane crash scare had turned into a businessman asking Suman to pawn her love in return of a smooth wedding for her sister.
Shravan was right, the one whom she left behind was her husband, not his father.
How his mother's unexplained egress and her unwanted arrival hampered his love life is another tragedy of this story
and man. .you gave me my vengeance there with that emotional outburst of his.
So he had finally sought his salvation. .it actually lay in letting everyone go...letting Suman go. .and someday I plan to write a drabble on this, on him letting his Sumo go out of his system thereby liberating him. I have no clue what ending you have planned for this story, but believe me when I say this, I have loved this story with fervour 😳
What an update!! Kudos to that mind of yours👏
Edited by reshmanair356 - 6 years ago
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