ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31 - Page 16

Spandana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#151

Awww you always leave us speechless spellbound with your beautiful wonderful amazing pieces!

Thank you so much dear

Love,

Spandana

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Asi Jain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#152

Please continue the story soon A.Hajnal. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#153

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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Aur.HajnalPM

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Posted: 7 years ago

#154

Add/buddy this account If you don't want to miss out the updates as I 'only' PM the people who are in the pending/PM list of this account. Thank you! 😳

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reshmanair356

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Posted: 7 years ago

#155

So spellbound am I by the dedication from my most favourite writer, that I am totally at a loss of words to comment 😳 , major fangirl moment happening here...I would have hugged you tight out of excitement had you been around🤗, I literally squealed to read my name up there!!

Shravan asked Sumo not to make him regret staying back and that's what I always feared. If he did stay back, would it be the end of her opting for everything but him in life? I always wanted him to ask Suman that.

The confrontation was mind blowing. Really, why would he care about his mother's marital status for her absence in his life could not be compensated by a mere change in her last name.

A point that I never thought of was that he would be actually living in a guilt of his father never remarrying for his sake, speaks of your brilliance as a writer. That must have been a strong reason for his blind devotion to his dad's dictum. It actually makes sense.

Koi rishta nahi raha, na dard ka, na nafrat ka - the side effect of a heartbreak is this numbness that you feel. Shravan didn't feel anymore and nothing else could be more heart wrenching.

I am curious now to know what would Shravan answer.

There was a fun poll a couple of weeks back to know who was the most liked Shravan. ..and this Shravan of yours was the one who won hearts. .why you ask..because he is simply the best 😳

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reshmanair356

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Posted: 7 years ago

#156

P.S. I am diligent with my PR duties 😃

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deltadawn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#157

The most awaited update on IF for all of us.

I don't know if you ever view any of the polls or voting posts. but this one always wins hands down. and Rightly so.

I thought this argument was explored in every way possible till date but Hanjnal ka POV jitna sahi hoga utna aur koi ho hi nahi sakta.

Why would he care. He was a teenager who had ot face people, his peers asking about family. At some point in his life. What would he have answered? My mom passed away? they are separated! While the mind keeps laying the dirty words and their hidden meanings... bhaag gayi! she is still Mrs. Malhotra is a slap at this moment. It cannot fix anything. He doesn't remember why he went inside his closet but the lawyer inside him is alive and kicking.

Sumo is getting surprises from the Malhotras like there is no tomorrow. Will eagerly await the answer to Nimmo's question. So she did hear him.

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
P.S. I am diligent with my PR duties 😃

Net connection problems, but I had in my mind that I have to do it because I remembered you reminding me last time and once I was done with it, I saw your reminder, I laughed so much... You are too sweet and so kind!!! 🤗

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: reshmanair356
So spellbound am I by the dedication from my most favourite writer, that I am totally at a loss of words to comment 😳 , major fangirl moment happening here...I would have hugged you tight out of excitement had you been around🤗, I literally squealed to read my name up there!!
You are too sweet and kind... And tight and long hugs back to you... I am glad and grateful to you for your support and love... 🤗

Shravan asked Sumo not to make him regret staying back and that's what I always feared. If he did stay back, would it be the end of her opting for everything but him in life? I always wanted him to ask Suman that.

I have something in mind, you will get it, just wait for a few chapters... 😉

The confrontation was mind blowing. Really, why would he care about his mother's marital status for her absence in his life could not be compensated by a mere change in her last name.

A point that I never thought of was that he would be actually living in a guilt of his father never remarrying for his sake, speaks of your brilliance as a writer. That must have been a strong reason for his blind devotion to his dad's dictum. It actually makes sense.

Ramnaath did a very good job with his guilt trips, remember the scene where he was going on how he could have married as he was young and rich but didn't because of Shravan - he was a master of manipulation, whenever he saw Shravan wavering or using his brain, he used that point to remind him how much he has done for him... I had that point in mind ever since I saw that scene...

Koi rishta nahi raha, na dard ka, na nafrat ka - the side effect of a heartbreak is this numbness that you feel. Shravan didn't feel anymore and nothing else could be more heart wrenching.

I am curious now to know what would Shravan answer.

There was a fun poll a couple of weeks back to know who was the most liked Shravan. ..and this Shravan of yours was the one who won hearts. .why you ask..because he is simply the best 😳

There was? Wow, aww, you guys are too kind... But I have to agree because even if he is written by me, in the end, he IS Shravan... And Shravan is a very loveable...

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priety.priti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#160

Oh God what an update dear😭

i was waiting for your update from really long time and here you came with such a bang update 👏👏

i hope sumo can keep her promise not to make him regret again😕

ramnath still thought why his son is so stubborn please someone should show him mirror what he is getting was the outcome of his own actions only 😡

shravan's accusations on his parents was really true how can they think all will be done in the way they thought😲

perfect dialogue dear this is my one of the fav FF thank you for such a powerful update ⭐️

and in the end you left in cliffhanger, please update soon this time😳

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