ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31 - Page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago
Next chapter post kar do na dear!!!
Iam dying to read it...
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is really nice yaar... Sumo has no answer to Shravan's questions...
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Posted: 7 years ago
A/N:- Thank you guys for being so sweet and for loving the story so much! I am in middle of real life stress and internet crisis, as soon as the problem is fixed, I will surely update... Try my best to update within the next week! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago


Oh. No hurry there...take your time to come back...I am sure all will be well and we will get a fantastic update. ..like they say..the darkest nights produce the brightest stars ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Its ok buddy...
Take your time and come back with a bang..!! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

I am a self proclaimed number one fan of yours😳
And would you believe it if I tell you that I remembered you even yesterday?
I read this the second you posted it, coz C & R is closest to my heart after yours. I am sure about that!


I loved this update to say the least. There are only so many words one can use to express love.
Shravan must be proud of his heart, it's been broken, played with, teased, burned and bruised multiple times but it still works. Suman is an enigma I never really understood even back in the series.
But the one statement that defined her actions was when Shravan told her ' I was a thing to give up back then, and I am a thing to be given up now'.

I am glad she is trying hard to stop him. A big applause for the Ramnath Nirmala's conversation...much needed exchange of accusations and realizations there.

To sum up, such a brilliant chapter can only come from a brilliant writer like you👏
Hope you update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Add/buddy this account If you don't want to miss out the updates as I 'only' PM the people who are in the pending/PM list of this account. Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh God you are seriously Brilliant in bringing the depth in the characters...

Love Shravan and sumo's confronatation... I don't have words how to Express how beautifully you penned down everything...

Ramnath realising his mistake and want to clear everything about them to Shravan so that he can start believing womens because if your Mother left you there is no reason for you to believe any other women... so nirmala saying the truth is very much needed...

Good that sumo is trying to stop Shravan from running away from problems because by running away he won't get anything, so it is better he faces the problem...

Absolutely wonderful 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow this is a marvellous piece...
Shravan is really broken due to betryal from everyone and he doesn't want to go through the same pain again and again and that's why he is running away from it... But he should realise that is not the solution, he won't get piece by moving away. ..
Sumo is right saying that he should confront everyone, yell at everyone, then only the problem can be solved...

Ramnath and nirmala conversation was very much needed. .. They need to realise it is due to their broken relationship and nirmala leaving him, he became the man that he is now, who don't believe women or respect them.. .

Really you are getting in to depth of every relationship, you are a wonderful writer 👏
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