Originally posted by: .SardiKiDhoop.
I know exactly what you mean by HSSH kinda sweet because I'm feeling just as contently warm and fuzzy on the inside while reading this as I did when I watched that movie for the first time!Loved the first two chapters, your AU work is really satisfying to read and I especially needed this after what the current, emotionally-draining track of the show is putting us all through. I'm also glad you're writing the rest of this in English because my knowledge of Hindi is quite limited, even more so when I'm reading, haha.The dialogue is flawlessly written as always - you keep SO well to the characterization and I honestly feel like I'm watching the whole thing playing out right in front of me. I loved how the first person Shravan went to see was Sumo and that little reunion was too cute - how they simply went about as though pretending it wasn't like they hadn't seen each other in 3 years and how annoyed Sumo got by the end of it. Pushkar and Priya were my faves throughout, loved his teasing and her motherly little talk with Sumo. And the second chapter just brought such a huge smile to my face, especially when Sumo ran up the stairs and hugged him without warning. And I'm also quite enjoying her reactions to the not-so platonic hug and Shravan's "naked" comment haha - I'm looking really forward to how they're going to navigate their way into this phase of their relationship, keep writing! <3
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