SS : Ek duje k vaaste Part 2 on page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello lovely anijalians ...i m bak with another Short story.

Dere will b two parts ...tell me how it was.



Aniket n Tejal were working independently in Mumbai. Aniket is a successful FD n tejal helps him out. Aniket has been noticing dat tejal was not paying him much attention sumtimes because of work and sumtimes because of family (the entire mazumdar family is in ahemdabad). Aniket thot of a plan to revive luv in the relation . He has been making tejal feel that he is hiding sumthing. Tejal's was getting suspicious day by day.

One such day,tejal reached home n aniket was pretending dat he is chatting wid sum1 on phone. As soon as she entered d room , aniket cuts d call. Tejal just heard :"Gud bye jaan". Tejal (in kitchen):"sumthing is cooking up in his mind'.but what ?? I need to find out'is he having..""Nahin tejal wat r u thinking ..he loves u a lot".

Aniket was happy as his plan has started working . Tejal has started doubting him. Tejal n aniket in the room sleeping. Aniket intentionally moved out. He knew dat tejal will notice dat. Tejal soon realized dat aniket was not dere . She moved out of the room . As soon as aniket saw tejal moving out of the room , he took his phone :"dun worry anu'u know.."(and then he pretended like he was caught on seeing tejal).

Aniket immediately hangs up n says :"Arrey tejal 'what happened . how cum u r here". Tejal :"Aniket 'who were u chatting wid ". Aniket:"No1 important '.my frend Anuj called ..chalo come on lets go to sleep."

He went to his room alongwith tejal. Tejal now was very sure about sumthing fishy going on in her house.

Next morning was a Sunday . Tejal was at home , she thot to herself:"I need to chk his phone'who was he talking to '.i heard clearly he said Anu not anuj".

Tejal went to dere room. Aniket was in the washroom n tejal took his mobile . Now she got d biggest shock of her life. For past 2 weeks aniket has been in contact wid a girl "anu". She then checked messages. Another shock came. Aniket has send an:"I love u " message to anu n it was a positive reply from d other side.

Now tejal was totally angry n getting mad. She took her bat n shouted Aniket . Aniket was also shocked as he was not expecting such a quick response . Aniket came out wearing a Dark blue formal shirt with a fawn color trousers. Aniket:"Y ru shouting ,,'wat happened ".

Tejal showing him d bat:"Aniket 'just tell me who is Anu. Listen I m actually gonna bang ur head if u r not gonna say truth". Aniket was shocked. He said:"Relax tejal'.dere is no Anu '.i told u na".

Tejal :"Acha dere s no anu 'den tell me how r dese messages coming wid d name Anu n most importantly u hv been chatting wid dat girl for past 2 weeks'.who s she 'dere s no point hiding d fact".

And then the third shock. Instead of repenting for his mistakes . Aniket was laughing . Dis tym he cudnt control his laughter. Tejal's anger was on cloud 9. She went near to him. Tejal :"Aniket mazumadar '.u r so dead". She was about to him wid the bat . Aniket held her hand :"R u crazy'wait listen to me first".

Tejal:"Yes I m going mad 'who will not 'after learning dat her husband is having an affair." Aniket held her tightly. He took d bat n put it near d cupboard . Tejal was trying to free herself. In the process She lost her balance. Both of them fall on the bed with aniket being on top of Tejal.

Tejal was trying to get up but aniket didn't let her. Aniket(very firmly):"Tejal relax'..i m not letting u go nywhere until u listen to me'.so keep quite." He held her hand n den confessed:"Listen I was not talking to ny Anu'." Tejal:"Ok den whose number is dat ,the number from which u received dose messages".

Aniket:"U dun trust me 'do 1 thing call on the number.."Tejal called d number n it was tejal's phone rang. Tejal was surprised.

Aniket got up n sat on the bed . Aniket:"I just wanted to revive d Love in our relation'so I thot of a plan. I thot of making u jealous. I saved ur number wid a new name'Anu' . All dis while I hv been using ur mobile n den deleting ur chat history n message history. So u also didn't come to know about it ". Saying dat he said:"Tejal madam 'u fall in my trap". He started laughing. Tejal also laughed . Dey both hugged each other.

After d hug session , aniket left for sum work.

Tejal who was in home after aniket left:"Mr aniket mazumdar '..u r gonna pay for what u did". She smiled fishily.



PS: Hit a like ...Next part coming soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Takiya phaad. tablatod Os ji.. I 🤣d when Tejal took her "bat" to hit Aniket.. Typical TEJAL.. LOL
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u debo paul ...

typical tejal ...was intentional ...next part will b put tomorrow
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the Aniket.. Kaash hamara Aniket bhi itna romantic hota..
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Originally posted by: Debalina_Paul

Loved the Aniket.. Kaash hamara Aniket bhi itna romantic hota..


seriously yaar ...
i wish he was romantic

i was wondering today : dat all hit jodis faced a lot of problems(dey fought ..dey hated each other n ultimately fall in luv)

but dis is first pair ...who fall in luv so easily...i think dat s y dey r nt dat popular
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tani23


seriously yaar ...
i wish he was romantic

i was wondering today : dat all hit jodis faced a lot of problems(dey fought ..dey hated each other n ultimately fall in luv)

but dis is first pair ...who fall in luv so easily...i think dat s y dey r nt dat popular


I think the same too.. No drama in their relationship. No hardship except Sanki's disapproval of Tejal.. So, people thought "isme kya dekhna".. and left seeing them.. 😕
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Originally posted by: Debalina_Paul


I think the same too.. No drama in their relationship. No hardship except Sanki's disapproval of Tejal.. So, people thought "isme kya dekhna".. and left seeing them.. 😕


i think dey shud have shown sum problems in the relation itself ...other then sanki n mk

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yes.. Like a third person.. As ur story goes..

A girl should fall very hard for Aniket.. Tejal will get some time to spend in her own relationship rather that worshipping her MIL round and round...
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Originally posted by: Debalina_Paul

Yes.. Like a third person.. As ur story goes..

A girl should fall very hard for Aniket.. Tejal will get some time to spend in her own relationship rather that worshipping her MIL round and round...


koi to vamp ho in dono k beech ...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tani23


koi to vamp ho in dono k beech ...




vamp nahi bhi ho toh chalega.. I just want Tejal to be insecure of her position. usse toh bohot garv hai apne position in Aniket's life pe.. wohi thoda dagmaga jaye toh, acccha lagega.. some round twists in the story.. 😊
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