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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Taani, very nice update.. how on earth did I miss this?? So beautiful story.. Aww!! Pm me next time..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: tani23

Thanks for liking
Arnav ki deewani is busy thinking abt arnav dese days???
where were u????



Sorry for late replay
I'm too busy cox my school start n have to do lots of work in home to n i don't have much time to come in forum i just check inbox that it!
sorry ya

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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: ArnavKiiDeewani



Sorry for late replay
I'm too busy cox my school start n have to do lots of work in home to n i don't have much time to come in forum i just check inbox that it!
sorry ya


its okay i ws just pulling ur legπŸ˜†


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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Madhura2105

Awesome update dearrriieee ...

bantering AniJal ... were adorable ... 😳


make them fall in pyaar ... jaldi se πŸ˜‰

continue really very soon πŸ˜ƒ


Pyaaar Shyaar is coming soon in next parts😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cool.Vidya

Taani, very nice update.. how on earth did I miss this?? So beautiful story.. Aww!! Pm me next time..


Thanks a ton Vidya for liking d creations

will PM u d next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6: The sweet memories
Aniket calls shashwat after dropping tejal. Aniket:"Hey bro! i m nt coming to PG tonite. Mom Dad n Anjie di are coming to meet me n u Email me fresher's nite videos n pics.I want to show it to di." Shashwat (teasing):"u want to show Tejal's pic to di ". Aniket:"Oye ...do as i say okay...n i say shut up".he hangs up.
Aniket enters his house. His parents Mr Nikhilesh and mrs Sanyukta Mazumdar are in the house to welcome their dear son. Aniket: (entering the place) greated his parents by touching dere feet. Nikoo:"My son seeing u after a long tym n tell me have u made ny GF now?". Sanyukta:"Wat s dis Niks ...U r asking d same question again...u know aur son . If he hs nt made a GF for past 2 yrs.. how cn he make 1 in just 2 months."
Aniket:"Dad Mom ...cn u pls stop ur GF theory a..."(before he cud complete d sentence Anjali interrupted:"Dad u know my little bro ...he s a unique member of our family...I dun noe y he fears to enter in relationships..." Anjali came n hugged her small brother. Aniket:"Hey di...howz u ...n wat abt Nitin??". Anjali :"Nitin is lost case now ...i m presenly Single Bhai".

After some time : Aniket's house
Every1 sat for dinner n dey asked aniket to join dem . Aniket sat wid dem but he was already full(Dinner date wid tejal). Sanyukta:"Aniket y r u nt having nything??". Aniket:"Mom ...actually i already had my dinner ...Day b4 yeasterday ws Fresher's nite n me n a frend of mine won d Prince n princess title ...so me n Tejal went for Dinner.". Anjali:"Tejal is a nice name ...(smiled )". Aniket:"U people carry on wid dinner ...i m going to my room ...anjie u come upstairs after dinner..i ll show u d fresher's nite pics n videos".

On the other handTejal's Room:

Tejal was very happy. She was still with aniket in her dreams. After freshen up, She was sitting in front of mirror n thinking about the nite. She was day dreaming at 12 midnite. She thot:"Have i overreacted wen aniket called me green chilly ...wasie he is so sweet ..he cheered me up n also promised me dat he wont call me Green Chilly now in public...He s not dat bad as i thot him to b wen we first met".

Vaibhavi entered d room and she was continuosly talking about "how she n nachiket spent d eve" but tejal seemed not interested in Vaibhavi presently.
Vaibhavi:"Tejal see nachiket gifted me dis ring ...its pretty na ...".Tejal:(without seeing):"hmmm". Vaibhavi:"Wat hmmm...arrey speak properly"...n den she realized dat Tejal is smiling n thinking about sumthing.
Vaibhavi:"Tejal where r u lost ...darling??? Tejal Tejal "(she shouted) Tejal:(suudenly came out of the dream world)::"arrey Vaibhs how ws ur evening...nachiket came here rite???". Vaibhavi:"First Tell me ...what r u thinking about...lemme guess Aniket n ur dinner date(smiled)". Tejal gave expression as if she ws caught red handed ..but she said:"y will i think about him..".
Vaibhavi:"Okay so u r nt thinking about aniket den were u blushing so badly...n u were also lost in ur own world".
Tejal:"Listen vaibhavi he s a gud frend n nothing more then that". Vaibhavi:"Have i said so???"

Aniket's room:
He ws playing with his guitar n was trying to sing a nice song which he wrote :
Kya kahun main yaar
Dill kyun hain bekarar
Chaya hain Khumaar
Kya Yahi hain pyaar. (EDSKHPH ANijal SOng)

just then anjali entered d room. Anjali :"OMG sum1 is singing a love song ...kya baat ...for Whom Bhai".Aniket:"For whom means what ...u know dat i like to write poetry". Anjali:"I noe but this tym deres sumthing different ...its romantic n i cn feel dat song is coming from u r heart." Aniket:"Anjie u r a die heart romantic that is y u saying so...now cum here i ll show u sumthing." Aniket opened his Laptop n started showing college pics. Aniket:"U noe she is Green Chilly as in Tejal...I told u dat a junior of mine made me realize d pros n cons of ragging..she s d one." Anjali:"OMG she s Tejal ...n she become a gud frend of urs". Aniket:"Gud nahin Very gud frend". Anjali noticed d shine in aniket's eyes while he was telling her about tejal.
Anjali lukingat 1 of the Fresher's nite pic commented :"I dun like her much...see she doesnt even have a nice collection ...d way she s dressed up is so tacky..."B4 she cud have completed Abiket interrupted :"Arrey di how can u say dat...her dress is so nice...she ws luking so pretty dat day n for a while i even cudnt take my eyes off her. U r studying FD dat doesnt mean u cn judge ny1 else's fashion sense...".
Anjali :"Relax, i ws just trying to judge ur true feelings for her...Aniket u like her rite???? Otherwise u wud definitely nt defended her like dis...". Aniket (who was caught in his own words):"Di its nothing like dat ...Me n Tejal are just gud frends...". Anjali:"Lier...u cant lie to me ...i m ur elder sis...so pls dun hide it from me."

Tejal's room:
Tejal:"Vaibhavi u r thinking " a bit more" ...Now get out i want to sleep "
Tejal pushed vaibhavi out of her room. Tejal while sleeping thot "Whatever vaibhs ws saying...ws dat correct!!!"..On another thot "Tejal relax...vaibhavi is an idiot,...she always think about love romance!!" Tejal went to sleep.

Aniket's room:
Aniket:"Anjie go ...dere s nothing b/w me n tejal n now pls go ...i want to sleep." Aniket:(to himself 1ce anjie ws out)"Whatever she ws saying ...no aniket ...ur family is desperately waiting for u to b in a relationship...anjie di has lost it ".
Aniket went to sleep.

It was raining outside n he woke up. He was surprised to see Tejal in his garden. She was completely enjoying rains. Tejal:"Aniket come lets dance in rain." Aniket:"Tejal how cum u r here ...n come inside u will get cold".
Tejal dragged aniket outside. She started playing with aniket. Aniket was enjoying her company. Aniket noticed tejal who was enjoying rains. Aniket hugged her from her back. A cold vibe ran across her body.
She turned towards aniket and she slipped on the ground. Aniket who was holding her cudnt maintain his balance n he also fall.
Aniket was on top of tejal n both were laughing. Aniket soon started luking at tejal who was still laughing. Tejal soon realized aniket staring at her. Both of them shared an eyelock. Aniket bent forward n kissed her on her

forehead. Tejal's heart was beating very fast.She closed her eyes . Aniket bent down to kiss her and

BANG.

he fell from his bed. He was holding his pillow.

Aniket:"WT,...what is hapening aniket ...Tejal NO!! NEVER!!!...dis s all because of anjie di ...She n her stupid romance. Aniket come on sleep."




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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
What??😲😲😲 U made Aniket fall down from bed?? 😲😲😲


Ouch!! I got hurt.. 😭😭 My back is aching..😭😭

U stupid.😑😑 I was enjoying the flow of the story smoothly when u jerked me out of my dreams.😲😲. I felt as if I fell off the bed..😭 😑😑

U Naughty little girl..😑 U can't do this to me..😭 Get my Anijal romance back on track soon.πŸ˜›πŸ˜› Its an order.. πŸ˜›

Now I'm going to read the whole episode again (excluding the last part, huh!!).. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

P:S- A very nice episode Tani partner.. I loved it..
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Edited by Debalina_Paul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Thank u debo for liking d part

are u still in Anijal land


my anijal wont fall in luv so easily





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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tani23

Thank u debo for liking d part


are u still in Anijal land


my anijal wont fall in luv so easily



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice episode Taani.. But My opinion goes with Debo. I also felt as if suddenly my romantic dreams crashed with the "BANG"..😭

Can I say something?? I really don't like the name of Aniket's sister,"Anjali". Somewhere it reminds me of IPKKND's Anjali. I don't like that show and while reading your update, the face of Anjali character was flashing in my mind.. 😡

I hope u didn't mind. And no offence to any IPKKND show fans lurking here. It was just my opinion. 😊
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