MAKING THE FIRST MOVE - a naked soul : JABIR FF - COMPLETED - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
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THE LOGIC ! - LUSTING OR LOVING !



“ That's enough kabir ! what was that ?” Pooja tried to talk some sense into him.

He remained unfazed. Eyes on road.

“ look !You have been acting strange since last week ! I didn’t complain. But this is limit. What was that?”

No reaction.

“I have tried everything. If there is some problem. You have to speak up. But this behavior of yours…….” She trailed off

No reaction.

“you know !I am planning to enroll in cryptography course. May then I can understand your army codes.”

She tried to be funny – failing bad.

No reaction.

“ kabeer ! I am talking to you. Avoiding me won’t do anygo-“

“ Pooja “

FINALLY ! pooja thanked the almighty.


Kabir interrupted in between. His voice was low but confident.


Pooja stopped immediately. She was dying to hear his voice.


Since last three days he only spoke when absolutely necessary and that too only to otherpeople.

She didn't even receive that. But she knew she has no right to complain or feel hurt.

But as a wife she has a right to share his problems. she will not give up.

He breathed heavily. Eyes never leaving the road.

“ I am driving. Please shut up so we can reach home in single piece.” -

Pooja stared at him. No ! that was not a joke. She was dumbfounded at his statement.

“That’s it! enough is enough ! yes she cares for him but not at the cost of her self respect. She can take care of him in other ways as well. It’s just a simple condition – no communication – then so be it. It is what it is.”


She made up her mind.


If he doesn't want to talk to her. She doesn’t care as well. She will not make any effort from this moment.

If he can do whatever he wants – so can her.

Taking deep breathes she closed her eyes. She remembered all the good things kabir has done for her.

She convinced herself that he is still that nice person. And he don’t deserve to be killed like his father.


She smiled to herself. And then she turned on the radio :

The song tuned in :

Aaj phirtum pe pyaar aya hai………..

“ wow ! I love this song ”


Pooja Exclaimed in excitement and looked out of the window.

Immediately her mood becomes light. The soft and cold wind was flowing through her hair and she closed her eyes feeling the scenery outside.

“ tooteto toote teri bahon mein ese ….shakhon se patte behaya….. –”

She started singing and humming from time to time. Her voice was soft yet sexy. SONG EFFECT

“bikhreto bhikhre aur simte tumhi me …… tuhi mera sab le gaya…….”

kabir’s mind played the video of the song for him.

And his heart adviced that each word out of pooja’s mouth was meant for him.

But he knew better than that.

He was going gaga.

He knew it’s only his imagination. She doesn't have the slightest idea of his salacity.

He sent a silent prayer to the god’s above to take him home as soon as possible and end his misery.

“ na fikarna sharaammmm….. na lih- ”

“NA LIHAAAAJ…. EK BAR AAAYYYY-“

She opened her eyes hearing her own voice echoing in the car.

She turned and found kabir’s hand retreating from radio.

She gaped at kabir.

“ my fav lines !! ” - she whispered sadly.


“ I hate that song” - kabir replied not believing his own words.

She turned on the radio without heeding any attention to him. The song was already over.


She changed the channel and smiling again listening melody and assume her previous position - looking outside the window.

It was an item song this time.

“ kundimat khatkao raja….seedha andar aao ra-“

Pooja was ready for this already. She simply turned on the radio again and waited.

“ aao raja…” - her voice more husky than the singer’s.

Kabir shifted uncomfortably.

He switch it off again.

She turned it on again.

Off

On

Off

On

Off

On

Off

On

Channel changed.

“so friends, look at the climate outside……”

She glanced at kabir frowning.

He didn't move this time.

so this is for all the love bird out there enjoying the weather ….. cause everybody falls in love …”

Kabir’s grip tightened on wheel just like every other muscle in his body.

But this stupid RJ is far better than pooja’s seducing voice.


Kabir closed and opened his eyes frequently to shook off those indecent thoughts.

He needs to control himself. This is wrong.

The poor girl has no idea.

She is worried for -- HIM.

And he --for her.


He needs to protect her.

keep her safe.

Safe From him.


Lately he had grown hypersentive capabilities. He is now a - POOJA DETECTING DEVICE.


He can sense her.

When she enters in his vicinity – he feels goosebumps.


God ! He can even smell her. Jasmine and strawberries. HMmmmmmmm.

And his heartbeat rises again.


A simple touch lights up fire and can set his hormones racing.

She had no idea what effect she is causing on him.

As a matter of fact, he , himself had no idea.


And now he is turned on again - because she is singing those obscene songs.


This is the latest development. He didn’t know he was capable of being aroused by someone's voice.

In fact he started to think that it’s not his problem. It’s actually hers.

Her existing is enough to seduce him.

He wondered if Pooja had any idea about her seducing skills.

Amma told him she was in love.

He shrugged it off as a joke.

But he wanted to be 100% sure - lest he be forcing her into marriage while her heart belongs to someone else.

He needed to test her.

So he started observing her. Little more than usual. And thenfamily members started thinking otherwise.


He remembered he had to give a tough speech to jay when he started pushing him onto her.

It is all because of that.


It was plainly platonic in the beginning.

He started liking her like a friend.


But then one day everything changed.

As if a ghost inside him rose from a long sleep.

And now that ghost is hungry – the never ending appetite.

Kabir felt his body tightening. He remembered her reaction.

when it all started.

She frozed under his fingers.


His body refused to obey his orders. He felt so guilty.

Poor women never said anything.

He felt so perverted.


He has been touching her unnecessarily since then - against his own will – defying any logic.


How can he tell her that?

How can he-share his problem with the PROBLEM HERSELF?!

Pooja stay away from me because I am going insane.

Fervid.

I can attack you any time and might just eatyou up …RAW.

Kabir practiced mentally.

Is he even allowed to confess like that.

Legally?

How debauched that sound -- even to himself. He felt compunction.

So he did what's best for both of them.


He needed to maintain his distance. And he did.

he can never hurt her.


She is confused for now but soon she will get habitual.

And he will become ---- BETTER!

He is just besotted with her.

That’s all.

Vague Physical attraction.

Moderate physical attraction.

Nothing less.

Nothing more.

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now this was second last update. i'll try to post earlier skipped chapter. not promising anything.

i am on watapp now !! thanks to maivelli !!

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/199122557-making-the-first-move

find me on watpadd and rate and comment please.

waiting for responses.

regards.

Edited by Tanu221 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Kaval05

Thank you for the pm

Enjoyed readimg this story. Sometimes people around you are more observant of what is going between to people

Looking to read more

sorry for prying. but i needed to know if people actully like my work or i am just wasting my time.

i needed reviews.

thanks for reading and replying.

keep reading the next part and do share your views.🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Oh god👏

Awesome loved it yrr!!!! Please please update soon!!!!

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#34

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Oh god👏

Awesome loved it yrr!!!! Please please update soon!!!!

well that's very kind of you...... you have always liked my post earlier also.

i will posting a sizzling romantic scenerio in next part. a flashback.

this is my first time trying that kind of scene so please do reply your views. !!


also till then i think you can read my adiya os.

it is written a little differently. one night scenerio.

i got really nice reviews on that. i think you will enjoy that.

/forum/bepannaah/4992813/adiya-os-pt1

keep reading.❤️

with love and regards ...🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I tried to find your story give me your user name or share the link plz

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: maivelli

I tried to find your story give me your user name or share the link plz

https://www.wattpad.com/user/tanu156

hey ! i also search for jabir or ebss but i couldn't find my story there.

why is that so ..... my story is not showing

between thanx again.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#37

OBSCENE THOUGHTS AND A FLASHBACK

Kabir walked into the kitchen to have some water.

He took a sip and turned to find her entering the kitchen.

She didn't saw him.

She was busy recovering the sprawled pallu of her saree,

She then bring it all in the front to tug it in her waist.

Kabir eyes automatically followed her hands and glued to the white skin - exposed on side of waist.

When her fingers touched her own skin – kabir’s thoughts clouded.

He cerebrates the possibility of having his fingers - there - instead of hers.

What if……………

his thoughts trailed off and he started floating towards her.

Because the floor was moving, running beneath his feet.

He is yet to understand the reason for diminishing distance.

He just knew that he didn’t move.

Why would he ? right ?

So it wasn't his responsibility when he found Pooja staring at him in surprise the next second.

He was moving in a trance when his shoes slipped over the smooth tile.

He could have helped himself - holding the kitchen slab –

But

He let the gravity do the honor.

Knowing that his dive will be a golden opportunity to be closer to her.

So next moment he found himself hanging by his shirt and a hovering Pooja surprisingly eyeing him.

Regaining balance again he noticed his water spilled over her.

Pooja was stroking the water off her.

Before his horse sense can stop him - kabir stepped forward.

“let me help you………….”

He heard someone saying.

He swear he didn't say that.

And

Yet Pooja was staring at him…………… like that.

And then just like his mouth was working on its own - his hand followed the same course.

He tried to rub off the water but felt more like massaging it.

He grant his hand to linger for more than necessary.

Occupying more space than vital.

Her –soft –silky – smooth –glowing – blooming – ALMOST EDIBLE skin.

He felt her going stiff.

His eyes travel from her waist to her face in slow motion.

Taking in every scenery on its way.

She let out a whimper which sounded more like a moan.

She had her eyes closed.

Her moan rouse kabir’s concealed expertise into action.

His fingers started playing piano over her bare skin.

His Every moment planted a motley expression on her face.

He reveled in the canvas of emoticon – mesmerized – spell bounded.

Her face was already crimson red and turning a new and darker shade with every passing second.

He wished the time would stop.

He wished to stand there forever.

He wished she will never open her eyes.

He wished to see every expression she possess.

Every expression prompted by him.

Then she turned her face to side.

Her chest was moving up and down heavily.

And then

Then – she did something –

Something that would change his life forever.

He will never be same again.

He will never be that decent innocent and controlled kabir again.

She ………..

She was……

She bit her lower lip.

Kabir feel hot and and cold at the same time.

Every cell in strain.

He was searing with desire.

An impulse.

To touch her

And touch her some more.

To grasp her.

His hands swing upwards.

He was going to touch her face.

All reasoning screeching otherwise.

But his hands refused to register.

Just before he could touch her chin.

She opened her eyes.

And her face started to change.

A gala of expressions.

He studied each one.

Quizzical

Slack jaw

Sullen

Taut

Pleading

Thoughtful …..

.

.

.

.

.

.

.

.

And then it went…….

Vacant

She straighten up and gave a brooding smile.

“ hey kabir! do you need anything - I am making coffee wou - ”

She couldn't finish.

He retreated his hand which was hanging in the air just near her jawline.

Then he walked past her at a brisk speed.

It was bravest and wisest decision of his life.

To run away.

He didn’t let himself think any further and declared to himself

“keep your distance from her.”

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i am not getting much response. but i still tried this.

let me know.

happy reading people.

Edited by Tanu221 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#38

This is just perfect 😍😍😍😍 please do more of it... .please please please ...you're doing much better job then the real serial writers 🖤

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Originally posted by: mahiaana

This is just perfect 😍😍😍😍 please do more of it... .please please please ...you're doing much better job then the real serial writers 🖤

thank you so much !! i was just thinking about giving up.

lack of responce is really demotivating.

but i'll write one more chapter.......... let's see if you like that as well....

thank you once again .

happy reading dear❤️

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Really good parts, enjoyed it alot

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