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Posted: 8 years ago
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Next morning Mrityunjay was sitting quietly in front of the laptop pretending he was working.


"Mrityunjay... son get ready. You have to go to your in-laws' house today. Tara is ready. "


"Mom, I got some urgent work from the office. So I will not be able to come."


"Mrityunjay... any how you have to go there!" she said sternly and left the room.
Tara heard this.

"If you are angry with me, tell me, why you are making others angry? You don't want to come to my parents' house? Fine. Don't come. Why are you making excuses? I will go there alone. I will be waiting for you Mrityunjay. If you care for me, you will come."
Saying this with teary eyes, Tara left for her parents' home which was two hours away from there.



"Tara, I can't see tears in your eyes..."
He ran his fingers through his hair in regret.


After Tara left, he closed his laptop and was keeping it on the table when he saw a paper lying under the table. He picked it up. He didn't want it to be a letter but it was indeed a letter...
A love letter.
He didn't want to read it but as he was controlled by his mind, he started reading it.


Dear Love,

After college, I had left all the hope that we will ever meet. But as it's said those who are meant to be together to meet anyway.

There was no contact with you for two years and suddenly one day you came to my house with a marriage proposal!!!
That day I felt I got everything that I wanted.

My five-year-old love was accepted in such a way that I had never expected.
The past two years I lived with a hope that by any chance if I ever get to hear from you, but God was too generous to me. He gave you to me.



His heart ached reading this.
"Ahh... Yug proposed to her for marriage!!"

He was hurt even more after reading about the proposal.
"If he loved her then why didn't he marry her?"

"If I would have been the person who she loved in college, I would have never have let her go. I would have proposed to her in front of the whole world."

"He proposed to her. But she married me. Why??"

It was becoming confusing for Mrityunjay to understand what went wrong between Tara and Yug that they didn't get married. Since yesterday his brain was not in a position to understand anything so he left thinking about it and again started reading the letter.


But the next few lines he read very fast. He read the next part of the letter, again and again, to confirm whether he was reading it right or it was just his imagination. After reading it ten times, he was still in disbelief if what was written was true. He took a short breath and read it loud enough to hear himself but this time slowly, reading each word with a slight pause between them.


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Edited by Archi21 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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For all these years I always assumed that you loved Radha because your friendship with her seemed more to me than just friendship and because of that I never expected anything from you. But the day when you came with your family to my house with the marriage proposal, I felt I was the luckiest person on Earth. That day I pinched myself a hundred times to confirm it was real and not a dream.


I was granted the only wish of my life. This is my third letter to you. In all my letters I never mentioned your name. The reason was only one that I never had authority on you but from now on, I have. Today after our engagement I can call your name. I am yours and only yours. God had shown mercy on me and He sent you to me when I almost lost all hope. You came at the right time and saved me from losing myself. I loved you from my first day of college but never got the courage to say it but today I will say, "I love you Mrityunjay."

Yours and only yours,
Tara.



After reading the last few lines aloud for the fifth time, he smiled for a second then his face turned serious in complete disbelief on knowing he was the one who Tara loved.

He took the letter in front of his eyes and started reading it again lovingly. This time his heart was filled with love instead of an agony, each word of the letter sounded to him as if Tara was saying them in front of him.




"Yes," he said slowly reading the date on the letter.

"Yes, we got engaged on this date."
There was a spark in his eyes which were sad fifteen minutes ago.



"Yes, I went with Mom-Dad to her family two years after finishing college."
He chuckled.



"In each line she mentioned me!!!"
He was reading the letter taking time to adore each word written by his wife to him.


"How stupid I am!" he said knocking his head.

"I am dumb," he said reading the last lines of the letter.

His eyes were filled with love. When he lifted his eyes to see Tara, he found himself alone in his room and remembered her sad face. Her last words were echoing in his head.
"I will be waiting for you Mrityunjay. If you care for me you will come."
There was complete silence in the room.






At her parents' house, Tara was sitting quietly surrounded by chattering neighbours. Everyone was asking her about her in-laws, like
"How are they?"
"Are you comfortable there?"

Tara was replying to them with a smile. She didn't want to say a word at all but she had to answer them.

Then one of the aunties asked, "And how is Mrityunjay?"


She replied in a low voice, "He is fine."


Her heart which was already drowned in sorrow because of Mrityunjay's unknown anger finally broke. Her eyes were filled with tears, but she controlled them into her eyes. And as soon as the neighbours left, a drop from her eye escaped on to her cheeks. She immediately went to her room saying she was feeling tired and kept her burdened head on the same soft pillow which was her best friend in all her good and bad days and sobbed.


But she quickly wiped her tears as her mother would see her swollen eyes and would easily come to know that something was wrong. To keep herself busy, she left the bed and switched on the radio kept on her study table and started opening random drawers of the table to just do some work when her hand grabbed an old photo. It was a photo after winning a singing competition in college. She was standing beside Mrityunjay and he was smiling. Her eyes which had decided not to shed a single tear got wet again.




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Story: Archi21😳
Editor: ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️

Thanks for readingπŸ˜ƒ
Please leave your commentsπŸ˜ƒ




Edited by Archi21 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Mrityunjay is now making up excuses not to go to his in-laws' house!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Tara heard this and was hurt and left saying if he cares for her he would come!!!!

What a dialogue Tara said but Mrityunjay still remained quiet!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

He cannot see tears in Tara's eyes but he cannot win over his mind which cannot let go of Tara's supposed past!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Mrityunjay found Tara's third letter to her lover and started reading it!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Very bad that he seems to have forgotten all his manners and is again reading her letter!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Tara was so happy that her only wish was granted and he came to her house with his marriage proposal!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

This duffer is still thinking of Yug!!!!

He has seriously gone mad and it is sick he is thinking of Yug proposing to Tara!!!!

He seems to have a weak memory and his ego is not letting him remember the incidents clearly!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Well she did love you in college but you did not propose to her in front of the whole world!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

But at least you did something right because of which she is with you!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Now the idiot is thinking why Tara married him if Yug proposed to her!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Tara had assumed that Mrityunjay loved Radha but that was not true!!!!

At least he did one sensible thing which was coming to her house with the proposal and I have to appreciate him for this!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Finally Mrityunjay got to know that it was all about him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

If Tara hadn't written his name then it seems like Mrityunjay would have gotten Tara married again!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

He just can't believe what he is reading and so is reading it again and again!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Thank God his brain is now working again and he has become normal!!!!!

Dimaag ki batti jali and Mrityunjay remembered his engagement date!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Yes you are dumb, sab ko pata hai, naya kya hai??😳 😳 😳 😳

But now Tara is not here and the duffer better go and apologize to her!!!!!

Poor Tara is upset but has to sit between those chattering neighbours and answer them!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

She was trying to compose herself but seeing their old photo couldn't hold herself anymore!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Now it is Mrityunjay's turn to make it up to Tara and manao her with his loving style!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was awesome!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
thanks.
will read soon n comment.

thanks for PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely Superb Awesome update!!!πŸ‘ πŸ˜›
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!!πŸ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Part - 4

Superb Update ⭐️⭐️⭐️

So the tension continues to the next morning ..
And MJ refused to go Tara's home
Tara heard and also felt hurt πŸ˜’
He would come if he cared saying she left 😳

MJ couldn't see tear at her eyes but couldn't win to his mind also
So here was the 3rd from Tara to her unknown love ...

Tara sounded so happy that her only pray was granted πŸ˜› 😊
After two year of finishing college he came and proposed for marriage πŸ˜ƒ

Uffo duffer !!! you still think about Yug πŸ˜•
His has weak memory and his ego vanishes the rest 😳
WOW !! he thought if he could be the person who Tara loved πŸ₯±

And also thought so why she married him ... πŸ˜†
Socho socho πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

OH !!! finally he got something that cleared his jammed brain .
And he couldn't believe what he was reading πŸ˜†
Reading 10 times !!!!

Tara assumed MJ liked Radha but that was not true 😊
MJ had come with his family for the marriage proposal πŸ˜ƒ
Have to appreciate, he had done this sensible work πŸ‘πŸ‘
Awee.. Tara could finally claim MJ to her 😳

Yes... Dimag ki batti jali and MJ remembered his engagement date πŸ˜›
And yes each line she mentioned you 😊
Yes, you are stupid and dumb πŸ˜†
Ahh ... now Tara was not here

Tara was upset but couldn't reveal it to her parents
She was trying to not crying but couldn't hold herself seeing their old photo πŸ˜”
Don't worry your dumb husband will surely do something to make up for all this ... πŸ˜‰

It was a great part Archu πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Sadness, happiness all were here ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Waiting for how MJ going to make up πŸ˜›

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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
NYC update!!!

Mj will be mj... he will not change

Tara is sad & he is in his Lala land

So sad the way Tara goes but Kya dialogue tha kamaal...but is par Bhi yeh Mauni baba hi raha

Kitna galat hai saare manners Bhool Gaya hai...phir letter reading

Seriously, he gone made...now thinking of marriage proposal... sick

Agar Tara ne mj nai Likha hota toh yeh Tara ki doossari shaadi karwa deta

Thank god he became normal


Again Tara is crying when doffur will com and say sorry


Continue...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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NICE update, so finally MJ got to know it is all about him.. well jub shaqq aa jata hai rishte main to ache ache rishte bigadh jate ha.. shukar ha usey pata laga she loves him and now all is fine.. aab MJ ki bari ha jao aur apni biwi ko manao.. with your own loving style.
Thanks for sharing.. keep it coming
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Mrityunjay is now making up excuses not to go to his in-laws' house!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’
He just want way to clean his head

Tara heard this and was hurt and left saying if he cares for her he would come!!!!
She believes in love 😊

What a dialogue Tara said but Mrityunjay still remained quiet!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
MJ was still in his own world

He cannot see tears in Tara's eyes but he cannot win over his mind which cannot let go of Tara's supposed past!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Mind is the one which creates problems😑

Mrityunjay found Tara's third letter to her lover and started reading it!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
You seem quite excitedπŸ˜›

Very bad that he seems to have forgotten all his manners and is again reading her letter!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳
His mind is not functioning properlyπŸ˜†

Tara was so happy that her only wish was granted and he came to her house with his marriage proposal!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, she wasπŸ˜ƒ

This duffer is still thinking of Yug!!!!
Mind is not functioning properlyπŸ˜†

He has seriously gone mad and it is sick he is thinking of Yug proposing to Tara!!!!
Mind is out of controlπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

He seems to have a weak memory and his ego is not letting him remember the incidents clearly!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”
yup😊

Well she did love you in college but you did not propose to her in front of the whole world!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳
She loved, he didn't😊

But at least you did something right because of which she is with you!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
yesπŸ‘

Now the idiot is thinking why Tara married him if Yug proposed to her!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
His mind is now out of orderπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Tara had assumed that Mrityunjay loved Radha but that was not true!!!!
See both at some point in time lost control over their mindπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

At least he did one sensible thing which was coming to her house with the proposal and I have to appreciate him for this!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
MJ you are safeπŸ‘πŸ‘ Shaina is no more angry on youπŸ˜‰

Finally Mrityunjay got to know that it was all about him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Finally!!!!πŸ˜ƒ

If Tara hadn't written his name then it seems like Mrityunjay would have gotten Tara married again!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑
You never knowπŸ˜›

He just can't believe what he is reading and so is reading it again and again!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
Mind needs time to recover from sweet shock πŸ˜›

Thank God his brain is now working again and he has become normal!!!!!
slowly, but yes working againπŸ˜†

Dimaag ki batti jali and Mrityunjay remembered his engagement date!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
He need one gadget to remind him important datesπŸ˜†

Yes you are dumb, sab ko pata hai, naya kya hai??😳 😳 😳 😳
hahahaahaπŸ˜† Sabko pata hai but MJ ko nahi pata naaπŸ˜‰

But now Tara is not here and the duffer better go and apologize to her!!!!!
yes, Madam , as you say MJ will doπŸ˜‰

Poor Tara is upset but has to sit between those chattering neighbours and answer them!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
worst thing

She was trying to compose herself but seeing their old photo couldn't hold herself anymore!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Everything was reminding of her good old days with MJ😭

Now it is Mrityunjay's turn to make it up to Tara and manao her with his loving style!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, yes , he will definitely do that πŸ˜ƒ


This part was awesome!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘





Thanks for loving it so much😳

Thanks for such a long commentπŸ‘
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Posted: 7 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Lovely Superb Awesome update!!!πŸ‘ πŸ˜›
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!!πŸ˜›

Thanks for loving it so muchπŸ˜ƒ

Posting last update soonπŸ˜ƒ
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