MriAra: First Rain ||update PG 13 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
This post I made by mistake!!
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sohag

Again a beautiful update...πŸ‘
It was really fun how Meethi was teasing Tara πŸ˜†
Tara wanted to confirm that he was Neil...πŸ˜ƒ
Waiting for next update...

thank you😳

How can anyone miss such good opportunity of teasing friendπŸ˜‰

Check next update to know what happened nextπŸ˜ƒ
updating tonight😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
😳 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: kumari27

Nice updateπŸ‘

U have nice collection of song!!!!

Waiting for next update!!!!!


Thank you😳

Song Aur main inseparable hainπŸ˜ƒ
thank you😳

Updating tonight😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Nice update it was!!
Tara samaj gayi that he was Neil...
Meethi teased her a lot... aisa mouka kaise chodegi!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Now I wonder Tara kya karegi!!!
Update soon!!

thanks Nira 😳

Tara wants to clear her doubt of both being same😊

Meethi is smart girlπŸ˜‰

Check next update to know Tara kya karegi πŸ˜‰

Updating tonight 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Awww now Tara is feel guilty and ashamed of herself as well for behaving with Neil like this. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

And I love the way Meethi was teasing her irritating Tara a lot.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

And now she is almost confirm that he was Neil.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Let's see what happens next and do upd
ate soon.

thank you 😳

She is 😊

Meethi is smartπŸ˜‰

Yes Tara is almost confirm πŸ˜ƒ

updating tonight😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Tara doesn't want to believe that it was RJ Neil she had met!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”
yes😊

But she cannot ignore the possibility and also she has never seen Neil!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
yes 😳

Meethi is not one to let go of such an opportunity and is teasing her a lot!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
how can anyone miss such good opportunityπŸ˜›

I loved the way Neil narrated the incident and his feelings related to it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
i too loved it 😊

The song is very nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Thanks 😊

Tara is now sure that the guy she met was Neil!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
yes πŸ˜ƒ

I wonder what she will do now!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
check next update πŸ˜‰

This part was awesome!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘






Thanks πŸ˜ƒ 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Previous Update


"Drops of rain were still on her lips. They seemed to me like drops on a rose. A drop of rain was at the corner of her eye which was looking like a pearl. But her deep eyes seemed to be little bit worried as she was again and again looking at her watch. I guess she was getting late. So I offered the umbrella that I had purchased today for mom, to her. "


"First I hesitated thinking what she will think about me. Then I thought let her think what she wants and I offered her the umbrella. I wanted her to accept it and go home. I guess she was confused about how to accept it from a stranger and also she was confused how to return it once she took it. Well I didn't have any plan for how she will return the umbrella. She rejected my offer. How to tell her what I was thinking? Well I can tell you what I thinking. Listen to this track."


~Rim jhim gire sawan sulag sulag jaye mann

Bheege aaj iss mausam mein lagi kaisi ye agan~

"Meethi you are right he was RJ Neil! Now what should I do?"

Tara said sitting hopelessly. Meethi was doing something on the laptop. Tara smiled listening to these lines.

~Mehfil mein kaise kehde kisi se dil bandh raha hai ek ajnabi se

Haye kare ab kya jatan sulag sulag jaye mann

Bheege aaj iss mausam mein lagi kaisi ye agan~

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Editing ⭐️Shaina⭐️

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Edited by Archi21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Small but beautiful update...😊
Now , what will do Tara..???πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Again nice update!
Send Tara direct to RJ cabin & confeont to him just like her character.
Our Tara never thought before to do anythingπŸ˜†
Any way its ur story & u r writing beautifully.

Waiting for next update
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