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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

The guy was really sweet and was trying to help Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, he was πŸ˜ƒ

But Tara was not in the mood of taking his help!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”
yes, because he disturbed her πŸ˜‰

She was overthinking on his helping nature aur kitna aage ka soch liya Tara ne!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
heheheπŸ˜†

I loved the way Meethi teased her about that incident!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
she is sweet 😊

Tara described him very well even though she declared that she didn't notice him!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
yes, Bina notice kiya itna achha describe kiya, socho achhe se dekhti too kya hota πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

This part was very good!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘





Thank U
πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: kumari27

Nice update!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ

So Tara said she didn't notice him BT described well😳

She is overthinking on his helping nature.

Wating for next update.

Thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ

bina achhe se dekhe aisa describe achhe se dekhti tooπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜› 😳

Gusse mein bahut zayada socha Tara ne 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

I loved the way teased her about the boy and the incident. πŸ˜†

Though she declared that she didn't notice him, but she described him briefly. πŸ˜‰
Interesting...
Very nice update...!!
Update soon...!!


Thanks Nira πŸ˜ƒ

Yes, without noticing ye hal hai , so think agar notice karti too πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰

Updating 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sohag

He was helping her , so sweet...😊
but Tara is not in mood of taking helpπŸ˜†
Well , description of him though she didn't notice him...😳
I am waiting for the RJ...πŸ˜‰

Thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ

No one disturbs Tara -is Tara's motto πŸ˜†

Description πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† without noticing πŸ˜›

Your wait will end soon πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: watchdesi1tv

I have no words to express my happiness

Imagining and enjoying all
Thanks Archi
Bohot achi storyline hai
Waiting for next chapter
Mujhe tara ki situation per aik song yad aya
It's from an old movie anurodh

"Aate Jaate Khubsurat Awara Sadkon Pe
Kabhi Kabhie Ittefaq Se
Kitne Anjaan Log Mil Jaatein Hain
Unn Mein Se Kuch Log Bhool Jaatein Hain
Kuch Yaad Reh Jaate Hain
Unn Mein Se Kuch Log Bhool Jaatein Hain"

Thanks dear


Thank U di πŸ˜ƒ 😳

I love that song and movie πŸ˜ƒ and some where that song is inspired me while writing this 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: fraser

nice update,,,,
go on.. with this one

Thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
hi pankhis ...
I hope u had a great weekend

this weekend I had hostel buddies reunion , returned today to my place, so I was not able to update

Sorry for making u wait

Now read the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Part 4

Tara was on the bed trying to make herself relax and forget the incident of that evening.


"Hello friends, this is your RJ Neil. I am extremely sorry for coming late. I know I know I am late and I also know that you are still waiting for me. I am very thankful to you for your love. Muha. ..Muha. . . That's why I am bound to justify myself. You must be thinking I am late because of the rain. That's true but there's more than just the rain. So let's start by listening to this song."

Refer this song,to better understand


~Zindagi bhar nahin bhoolegi woh barsaat ki raat~

"Yes friends, I can't forget today's rain."

~Ek anjaan haseena se mulaqaat ki raat~

"Yes, you are right my friends I met a girl today."


Hearing this, Meethi said, "Wow, see Tara you are not the only one who meets strangers. He too, has met." Then after a pause, she wanted to say something but again seeing Tara's angry face, she stopped.


~Haaye wo reshmi ,Zulfon se barasta paani

Phool se gaalon pe ,Rukne ko tarastaa paani

Dil mein toofan uthaate huey

Jazbaat ki raat

Zindagi bhar nahi bhoolegi~


Tara was enjoying the song. He decreased the volume of the song and said,


"Really friends, these are the perfect words to explain why I was late. I can bet anyone can be late if such a beautiful lady is in front of him." The song continued.


Meethi looked at Tara. She was still not ready to listen to her.

"Tara please let me say one thing and then I will shut my mouth."

Tara said, "Ok."


"What if the man you met today was Neil?"

She was looking at Tara in hope for some response on this. But she didn't show any interest in it.

The song finished.



"So friends, you must have understood what I am saying. When your RJ Neil was coming to the studio to meet you people through this show, finally it started raining. I was enjoying getting drenched in the rain. When I saw her she was enjoying getting drenched in the first rain. She was allowing the rain drops to touch her soft cheeks. And as the song said, they wanted to stay on her cheeks and on her red lips. But most of them slipped from her soft cheeks, and only a few lucky drops were getting the chance to stay there. I was not able to watch her clearly through the visor of the helmet and so I lifted it up. Will tell you more about it but after this song."

Tara turned her face towards the balcony to watch the rain and enjoy the song.


~Dewana hua badal, sawan ki ghata chayi

Ye dekh ke dil jhuma, li pyar ne angdai...

Dewana hua badal. ..~


She was playing with the raindrops when Meethi joined her.

As the song finished, they ran towards the bed to listen to what he was going to say next.



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Editing⭐️ Shania⭐️


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Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
RJ Neil had met a girl today!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Interesting!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

The song is very nice and describes Neil's situation very well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Meethi also realized that the guy who Tara met today was Neil!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

I loved the way Neil was describing this meeting with the girl with such romantic songs!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Not only did Tara notice him but Neil also noticed her and her beauty!!!!

The song is very nice and suits the rain that they both are enjoying!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was lovely!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘





Edited by Shaina_b - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Beautiful update...😊
Finally HE has come...πŸ˜ƒ
He is describing with song , so romantic..❀️
want to see Tara's reaction after listening the whole thing..
Waiting for the next update...
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