MriAra: First Rain ||update PG 13 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: mastaTmohi

I loved it Archu!! Superb just superb! Can't wait to read on



Thanks MohiπŸ˜ƒ

You need to wait for atleast 20 hrs each day for new update πŸ˜‰

πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Tara was getting wet in the first rain of the season!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes πŸ˜ƒ

He gave the right advice and it was nice of him to remind her of the things in her bag!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
heheheπŸ˜†


Meethi ko toh sab kuch romantic lagta hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
yesπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Her comment of Hamara Bajaj was hilarious!!!!🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣
yes that was πŸ˜†

His bike had stopped because of the rain and probably that's why he advised Tara!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, πŸ˜ƒ

But Tara is finding it very funny that his bike stopped working in the rain!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”
she was irritated because of him that's why it was funny for herπŸ˜‰

I am sure this guy is the RJ whose show Tara listens to!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
everyone is guessing same πŸ˜›
I am becoming predictable? πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

This part was good!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘






Thanks πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Wow...loved this part...

Superb...
Waiting for next one...😊



Thanks NiraπŸ˜ƒ

updating soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

"Tara, how do you know about his bike? You asked him?" asked Meethi teasing Tara.


"No, no, no, who cares what happened to him or to his bike! I heard him saying this to someone on the phone. Poor he! He was getting late for his office. I think he must have reached late for his work," said Tara, stretching her legs.


After a pause she said, "He was not that bad as he was ready to give his umbrella to me. But I refused because I didn't want any kind of help from him. Because I know how these boys are. First they help and then they ask for phone number and then they try to become your boyfriend and then..."


"Stop Tara," Meethi interrupted Tara. "You are taking his action in some other direction. He was just trying to help you as it was getting darker. Did he ask for your number?"


"He didn't ask, but if I would have accepted that umbrella then also how would I have returned him his umbrella without his phone number? Then to return him the umbrella I would have to talk to him and meet him again. And meeting him one time was enough for me," Tara tried to justify herself.

The radio:


~Sawan barse tarse dil kyun naa nikle ghar se dil


Barkha mein bhi dil pyaasa hai, yeh pyaar nahi toh kya hai~


"He was that bad looking?" Meethi again teased Tara.


"Who knows?" Tara replied carelessly.


"Come on Tara. A man was standing next to you and you say who knows?" Meethi was not in the mood to leave Tara so easily.


To stop Meethi from teasing and let her enjoy her show peacefully, she said, "He was tall, broad shouldered, long hair, in shorts, had a perfect body. He was wearing a white shirt. His helmet was of a sports bike and before you ask anything about his bike, I want to clarify that I didn't see it and now please stop talking about him."


Meethi was grinning seeing Tara talk about him. Meethi wanted to say something but seeing Tara watching her grinning, she stopped as Tara was very angry.

~Sawan barse tarse dil kyun naa nikle ghar se dil~

The song ended.


*****


Editor: ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️

Next update on page 7

Edited by Archi21 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Nice update!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
So Tara said she didn't notice him BT described well😳

She is overthinking on his helping nature.

Wating for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
The guy was really sweet and was trying to help Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But Tara was not in the mood of taking his help!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

She was overthinking on his helping nature aur kitna aage ka soch liya Tara ne!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

I loved the way Meethi teased her about that incident!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Tara described him very well even though she declared that she didn't notice him!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

This part was very good!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
I loved the way teased her about the boy and the incident. πŸ˜†
Though she declared that she didn't notice him, but she described him briefly. πŸ˜‰
Interesting...
Very nice update...!!
Update soon...!!
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
He was helping her , so sweet...😊
but Tara is not in mood of taking helpπŸ˜†
Well , description of him though she didn't notice him...😳
I am waiting for the RJ...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
I have no words to express my happiness

Imagining and enjoying all
Thanks Archi
Bohot achi storyline hai
Waiting for next chapter
Mujhe tara ki situation per aik song yad aya
It's from an old movie anurodh

"Aate Jaate Khubsurat Awara Sadkon Pe
Kabhi Kabhie Ittefaq Se
Kitne Anjaan Log Mil Jaatein Hain
Unn Mein Se Kuch Log Bhool Jaatein Hain
Kuch Yaad Reh Jaate Hain
Unn Mein Se Kuch Log Bhool Jaatein Hain"

Thanks dear


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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
nice update,,,,
go on.. with this one
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