MriAra: First Rain ||update PG 13 - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Meethi came up with the fantastic idea of going to meet Neil tonight!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
Yes she did πŸ˜ƒ

Aww Neil wanted to stop her but couldn't!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
Bechara...pehle se hi Tara usse galat samjh rahi thi aur agar rukne ko kehta too pit deti πŸ˜†

The song is very nice and perfect for them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes it is 😊

Tara is now thinking ke woh kya kahegi aur kya karegi jab woh Neil se milegi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
dil de bethi hai 😳

The trip and catch scene was so romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Thank U 😳😳

I loved the way they met again!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
Glad to know that u loved itπŸ˜ƒ


Neil revealed his real name Mrityunjay and they are busy looking into each other's eyes!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Sach too kehna hi tha warna baad mein naam ko leke ladai naa ho jaye πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

What a way to start and progress their conversation!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
πŸ˜†
hahaahaπŸ˜‰

The song is very nice and apt for this situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
It is 😊😊

Obviously Meethi would wish for someone for herself after seeing such a romantic couple!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊
jo bhi inhe dekhta wo yehi wish karta 😊

This part was fantastic!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thank U 😳😳😳
It was the perfect ending to this story, rather the perfect beginning of Mrityunjay and Tara's love story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Yes , its beginning of MriAra πŸ˜ƒ

It was awesome and a very cute and sweet story!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thank you 😳



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Superb and perfect end of the OS... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thank U 😳😳😳
Just loved the way they met again and Tara suggested his short name as MJ. 😳 😳 😳

Toofan express jaa ladai RJ se πŸ˜†

I wish you ended up showing something more as you know our thirst never get over..


I knowπŸ˜†πŸ˜† hum greedy MriAra loversπŸ˜ƒ
Do write more on MriAra..
Zaroor ...πŸ˜‰


Glad to know u loved it πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
res πŸ˜†

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Wow last part is just fantastic.
Thanks 😳


basically I'm not sad as the story ends so romantically.
Glad to know ki tum sad nahi hui iski ending se πŸ˜ƒ

MriAra's trip & catch scene... hayee..kya likha hai...
so dreamy and lovely.
wapas aa jao MriAra dreamland se πŸ˜‰

and the one dialogue which MJ said...sooo nice!!!!
Thank u😳

Nice story...
I hope you will be back soon with another nice story of MriAra
pls likhna!!!! :)



Thanks for loving it Nira πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Hopefully new year mein new story mile tumhe πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Khatam hogaya 😭 😭
Yes πŸ˜‰

Abhi to shuro howa tha
Chalo season 2 likh dalo
Ke dil abhi bhara nahin
πŸ˜ƒ

hahaha ,,...greedy MriAra lover πŸ˜›
Next season aap likhna πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Mujhe bhi too as a reader maze lene dijiye😊


Wese bohot acha likha Archi
Plot was too good
Thank u 😳😳

Tara ka neil se milna aur tara kehna bohot bhagaya yaar
oh...ho... aap ko wo pasand aaya πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Full romantic aur thrilling tha
yes πŸ˜ƒ

Thanks for entertaining us with your talent.
Please continue with more
Forum mein bahar ajati hai.
πŸ‘



Thanks for loving it Di πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Koshish hogi ki aage bhi kuch naya doon aap sab ko read karne ke liye πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Zehrin

Oh.. It ends so fast... 😭
yes😊

But the update is super awesome...
Thank u 😳😳

Tara and mj's trip and fall was fantastic...
hehehe ...thank u 😳😳
The songs u chosen for the ffs.. Hayee Kya kahun mein... πŸ‘ 😳
Thank u ji 😳😳😳

Archu.. Pls do continue ur writing.. Bcoz our thirst for mriara ffs or anything they r a part never ends...
With lots of love for mriara...


Thanks dear πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

We are greedy EBIans our thirst for MriAra never ends πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank youπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for sharing, nice song sawan barse tarse dil
i will read it next week πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely song!!!πŸ˜› ❀️
thanks for pm dear!!!πŸ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago
Just read 1st & 2nd parts amd both updates are superb beautifully written!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ˜› πŸ‘
Lovely plot/concept!!!πŸ˜› πŸ‘ ❀️
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