MriAra extended OS: Together Again...||EPILOGUE Update on PG 15|| - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Archi21


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See pari was new born before accident
so 9 months jo leap hua
uske pehele ka time mriara 1st marriage se lekar nimmo ki death tak ko 3-4 months count karo

if u follow this...then approx. 6 yrs pehele om ne tara ko dekha tha (just before marriage dekha hoga)


Ebi mein kabhi purre week 1din hi chalta hai too kabhi ek pal mein 5yrs ka leap

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πŸ‘πŸΌu have a point...


Originally posted by: Archi21

hehe...

i sound like teacher πŸ˜†


meri teachers ye hamesha kehta the..."doubt poocho doubt poocho"- dbt poochne ka matlab hai, class pe so nahin rahi thi...

aapki update achhi tarah se read kiya, hai ki nahin..(tara tune)πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: its-alexandrite


πŸ‘πŸΌu have a point...



meri teachers ye hamesha kehta the..."doubt poocho doubt poocho"- dbt poochne ka matlab hai, class pe so nahin rahi thi...

aapki update achhi tarah se read kiya, hai ki nahin..(tara tune)πŸ˜ƒ



u got why its 6yrs πŸ˜†
tumhari teacher sach kehti hai πŸ˜ƒ
Doubt pucho πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
thank you for coming with followed up chapter...
i love that you are covering all the loopholes of the current track...
more than mriara reunination in this story m waiting for the pari n tara emotional meet...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Archi21

This is my wish ki MriAra ka face-off aise hoo.

But I know hamare CVs kuch aur hi karegeπŸ˜†

They dnt listen to us fans..

Super face off sceneβ­οΈπŸ‘β­οΈ...very interesting u wrote..
but aaj kal EBI say pura interest chalagaya

Good work gundi
regards
Sia

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: fraser

thank you for coming with followed up chapter...
i love that you are covering all the loopholes of the current track...
more than mriara reunination in this story m waiting for the pari n tara emotional meet...


thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ

i have tried my best to write it with full of emotions, but i think its not so emotional πŸ€”
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: sankalp_prapti

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thanks dear πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3



Vedant, Sia's Brother, after hearing the news of Sia being kidnapped, rushed to her. He asked Sia "Who kidnapped her?", "Where he took her?" and other questions that a typical brother cum police asks. Tara told him that she is not Sia. Mannat overheard this conversation.



Vedant inquired Omkar about it, who may have kidnapped Sia and why??


Omkar acted innocent and said, "I don't know. I have always tried to help people and see someone is trying to hurt my Sia." He shed two or three fake tears for effect.


"You don't worry Omkar. I am Sia's brother, I am here to find out who the culprit is." Saying this, Vedant left.


"Brother-sister both are fools. His sister was also not able to catch my act and her brother too can't. Hahaha." He wiped his fake tears.


"How will you kill Tara?" questioned Mannat, who saw all the interaction between Vedant and Omkar.



"Well my sister Mannat, do you think I am such a big fool to kill Tara myself? We need to take precautions that Vedant doesn't talk to Tara before the party. Otherwise Tara's continuous claims of her being Tara not Sia will make Vedant suspicious."


"So, then what have you planned so that Sia's property is transferred to your name and no one doubts you??"


"For that you need to wait till Sia's birthday."



Tara heard all these.


She was frightened by Omkar's plan. She was waiting for the night to end and morning to arrive, when she can meet Pari, her Pari.


Mrityunjay went to Kalavati's den. He wanted to know why Kalavati suddenly changed her plan. He questioned her about the reason for returning Omkar's wife, as he hadn't gotten Fahim's address.


Kalavati explained to him that it is because Fahim is not there and called her man to bring him in. Kalavati's man brought Fahim Chacha, who was brutally beaten up.


Mrityunjay was shocked to see him in this state.

"See this is what you wanted Balli. See I have brought him for you and you are questioning me??" Kalavati faked her tears and again started her fake story blaming Fahim Chacha for all the bad things that happened.

Mrityunjay to make Kalavati believe he had not regained his memory and was still her Balli, held her leg and pleaded her to forgive him as it was his mistake.



Kalavati smirked seeing this.


"That is your place Mrityunjay. I have made your life hell." Kalavati's revenge was getting fulfilled.

On seeing all this, Fahim cried, " Please Kunwar Sahab, don't do this! Don't touch her feet. She is the one who destroyed your family. She is reason for all the difficulties you and Pari are facing."


Kalavati, hearing Fahim's revelation, quickly reprimanded, "Balli don't listen to him. He is trying to protect himself."


"I know Laado who is real and who is fake." Mrityunjay's eyes were glued to Kalavati's face.



"What do you mean Balli...? And why you are looking at me this way?" Kalavati got worried seeing Mrityunjay's eyes, which had something mysterious about them, something which reminded her of the old Mrityunjay and the way his eyes hid a lot of secrets. The same anger that she had seen in Mrityunjay's eyes five years ago was once again reappearing.


Mrityunjay moved towards Fahim.


"Keep him in that room, call the doctor and nurse him. I don't want to kill a half dead man. Once he is fine, I will kill him." Mrityunjay's mouth was saying these harsh words, but his heart was crying seeing his Fahim Chacha in this state.



"Wow Balli..." Once again Kalavati believed Mrityunjay.


Mrityunjay's eyes were fixed on Kalavati. His mind was saying what his heart wanted, "You will pay for your deeds soon Kalavati...very soon."

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Next morning Tara was sitting in her room thinking how she will go to the temple, when Mannat came to her room with breakfast.


"A...a...Please have breakfast..."


"I don't want to eat. Take this away..." She broke the glass kept for drinking water and threatened to hurt herself.


She shouted, "I want to go out...right now... You and your brother have made me a prisoner here..."

"Ok...ok...relax...relax ...I will take you wherever you want...Please drop that glass..." Mannat was quite terrified seeing broken glass in her hand. Because if anything happened to Tara, Omkar would not leave Mannat.

Tara kept that glass on the table.

"Where do you want to go?? We will go there. OK??" She was trying to calm Tara down by fulfilling her wish.

"The temple. It has been a long time since... I am caged in this house, I want to go to the temple."

"Ok. Let's go." She immediately agreed to Tara's demand.


"Till tomorrow I need to bear you, after that ..." A nasty smile spread on Mannat's face.


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"Laado , I am going to the temple with Pari."


"Temple!!! And you??? Why suddenly??? You don't believe in God, right??" Kalavati was shocked to know Balli was going to the temple. She had a million dollar question on her face pack applied face, which was quite frightening. Pari hid behind Mrityunjay seeing Kalavati's face.


"Laado, I am going there to thank him for his help in identifying my enemy." Once again Mrityunjay had taken over Balli; the anger, the agony, the same old Mrityunjay was again appearing in him.

Laado was confused hearing this.

"Arree ...Laado we found our enemy Fahim, so it is our duty to thank God. As you have problem in your legs, so Pari and I will thank him and will also apologize for your absence there."


"Oh...go, go and thank God." She smiled and again continued her beauty treatment.


"Go Mrityunjay, thank God for taking away everything from you." Her evil mind was smirking at this thought.


"Yes Kalavati. I will thank him for saving my Tara and Pari." Thinking this, Mrityunjay left with Pari.

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Thanks for reading.

Editor: ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️
(Thank You for making it readable)

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Edited by Archi21 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Omkar is not wrong and Vedant is indeed very stupid!!!!πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ

Yeh Sia ke birthday pe Omkar ne kya plan kiya hai??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Fahim deserves all he has got as it is because of him that Shekhawat family is dead!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Mrityunjay did a great job of convincing Laado he is still Balli and trusts her!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tara's threat of hurting herself got Mannat to take her to the temple!!!!

Mrityunjay needs to keep up the act aur aise hi agar woh Mrityunjay jaisi baate karta rahega toh Kalavati ko shaque ho jayega!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Looking forward to Tara meeting Pari!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was nice!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘





Edited by Shaina_b - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Awesome mind blowing. And I demand a part 3 pari & Tara meeting soon. Loved how u got inspired by EBI dialogues as well indirectly throwing shoes πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Well written! Archu!! Interesting!! Too gud keep rocking yaar plz update next part soon! Looking forward
Edited by selvi6690 - 10 years ago
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