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Khadeja Akter

@Khadeja

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#491

Confession : Part b

Wow !!! Now MJ called to radio !!!
He wanted to show his feelings to Tara so desperately 😳😳😳
And MJ openly accepted Tara as his love ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Tara was so happy ... 😃😃
She was on 9th cloud 😛

And massages were telling how much MJ wanted her in his life and how much he loves her ... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
The song is perfect for the situation ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Tara felt so lucky that she thanked her mother 😊
Really her mother gave her right advice 😉

So basically MJ asked for a date 😉
And Tara wanted to make him wait... 😎
Good... as MJ made her wait so long 😛

And here MJ had become restless 😆😆

Dadaji is really cool ... 😃
He understood everything...
First he got them married and then gave MJ right advice... 😊😊😊

Now Tara started panicking 😆
Both Tara & MJ became teenager ... 😛

Tara tried to look best for her MJ 😳
And she tied her hair with clutch ao that MJ could untie them 😳
It was so romantic ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Finally Tara left for the destination ...

I am so excited for their meeting or can say romantic date ❤️

Wonderful writing Archu ... 👏👏👏
You described both Tara and MJ's emotion with brilliancy 👏
Keep rocking like this ...
And thanks for all the PM 😊🤗

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: npksk8495

beautifull!!! 😛

Thank you😳

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#493

Originally posted by: npksk8495
Beautifull, lovely & romantic!!! 👏 😛 ❤️
each line of song perfectly describes MJ's feeling!!! 👏 😛 ❤️
eagerly wating for next part!!!
thanks for pm!!! ❤️😃

Glad to know you loved update so much 😃😃

Have some patience for last update😉

Thanks for loving it😃

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#494

part confession a

so finally we r heading to confess...long wait...

mj shld scold himself what he did with tara😉

tara is fuming inside by the behaviour of mj😆

so mj tuned to radio to ease the enviroment...good going...😆

song indeed depecting his position right now ...wow...song is great ...😳

eye contact hua or accident bhi hote hote rah gaya...

i love shy mj ...i can imagine😳

tara is understanding that something happend with mj...so she enquired to dadaji..he gave signal...👏

finallly that moment came ...😳

raghu kaka came with cd...she palyed it..

the lines was mesmerizimg...

Maine woh saans bhi tere liye rakh chhodi hai

Tujhpe ho jayunga qurban tujhe chahunga

Main toh mar kar bhi meri jaan tujhe chahunga"

in lines ko sun kar kaun shocked nai hoga...😳

finally tara heard what she want frm long time...

great chapter👏

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#495

part b...

so tara having butterflies in stomach...😳

again tara got suprise ...she didnt recoverd frm previous one.👏

oh mj ...aaj toh pyaar ki barish hi ho gai...😳

koi mauka nai chhodna chahta hai apne pyaar ke izhaar ka...⭐️

he messaged her so that she will listen or understand the depth of love...😳

she tuned to radio...by that she was hell shockd😆

with every passing lines of song he is messaging her...he dont want to leave any stone unturned👏👏👏

i m loving this mj more than anything else...

so now its tara turn ... sahi hai...itna wait karwaya hai mj ne thoda use bhi dose milna chahiye😆😆

great chapte...it was read worty😆

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#496

double post 😛

Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#497

Reply for part

You Are Mine
Part d

The start was indeed beautiful where both of them were totally engrossed in each other's thought. Tara is sure that she loves him and he has a war between his heart and mind which says that he is in love.

Finally after whole day MJ also admitted that he loves her and reached home. Tara was waiting for the whole day of his arrival and she got ready in her best way. Looking more beautiful than ever. It is the glow of love.

Song you chose was nice.

What's wrong with this man? How can he again think like a stupid who has no brains? Tara was in hurry when she hurt her leg and instead of helping her he was thinking that he should not have come closer to her.

What a fool he is!!!! Even Kaka asked him to help but he turned away and left the place. Dada jee jas to come and he was equally surprised to see him behaving like a stupid.

He even didn't ask about her leg at least once. How can someone change all of a sudden? I can never like such things. Where his love gone all of a sudden? I don't believe his mind. He should just listen his heart only.

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Hi !!! Archu...😊

I have many pending comment
So starting commenting...😉
Hopefully you are not so angry...

I am never with my reader's as I know they will comment when they have time

The Wait : Part a

Sweet Update this was !!!! ⭐️
Title is so perfect 😛
Thank you 😃

MJ was so happy 😉
He just wanted to tell his feelings to Tara 😃
Pure new MJ this was 😳
Yeah this is MJ version 2.0😉

He was also listening to Tara's favorite show 😉
And again your selection of song is so perfect ⭐️
It's Tara's favorite show so his 😊
Glad to know you loved the song 😃

His sketch about Tara was so adorable
MJ confession about how Tara changed him was superb ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
He is great artist😃
It was required for him to express how much she matters to him 😊

MJ asked Yug about proposing Girl 😆
Yug is a smart guy, understood very well 😛
Yeah, everyone is smart in the matter of heart except MJ😉

And Tara was getting angry, MJ called Yug not her... 😆
And sensible students Tara has !!!
Yes😆

Poor MJ went to sleep thinking either Tara would like the arrangements or not 😳
How sweet
Yes 😆

Nice update 👏

Glad to know you loved it so much😃

😃

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

It's really beautiful and suits your Story. 👏 👏

Thank you😃

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#500

Originally posted by: Khadeja

The Wait : Par b

Superb update ⭐️⭐️

MJ was baffled what to do or not 😆
Poor MJ !!!
And MJ's excuse to Vasu he called for congratulating 😆😆😆
And the intelligent group again understood 😉
Kids are intelligent and they know MJ very well 😆

Wow !!! They also said intentionally MJ was coming to station 😃
Tara was happy 😉
Yes ,they are increasing expectations

Tara was waiting ...
But MJ became late .. ouch 😵
And poor Tara became hopeless
She thought he wouldn't come 😔
Yes, she became very sad

Ah .. Finally MJ came 😃
And with bouquet 😛
Tara's waiting had ended 😊
Yes 😃

They lost in other
He gave the bouquet and about tell but a call came 😳
Tara was so eager to listen his feelings ...
But when he opened his mouth 😲
Many problems in life are because of mouth, open or close they create problem 😆

Tara was shocked ...
And MJ you are idiot 😳
Yeah, he is an idiot😡

Great update Archu 👏 👏 👏

Happy to know you loved it😃

Thanks for comment😃

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