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Archana

@Archi21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: BlueJasmine
Hello Nainital! Heard that u hav got two more troubled souls to fix up...take good care of them in your ICU ...try to fix their brain as well...specially of that khadoos Mj...he seems to be more gone case than tara teacherji...and please,keep them in safe distance from tht RP and co. Ok byee...pher milenge ...chalte...chalte...

😆

thanks dear for that suggestion 😉

Nainital will follow your suggestion😃

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faizari

@faizari

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Wow...Archu

Lovely upadate 🤗

eagerly waiting for Mriara Milan

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: faizari
Wow...<font color="#ff0000">Archu</font>

Lovely upadate🤗

eagerly waiting for Mriara Milan

Thanks dear

they will meet in next update
but how is question 😉

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: TasrinS
<font color="#660000" size="6">Superb update...👏</font>

thanks dear 😃

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Worldpeace

@Worldpeace

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Omg I missed dis update...

MriAra kab milenge. .. nanital ki wadiyo mein...

Archu aap kyun hamesha radha ko leke aate ho...

I hope wo past mein hi rahe...

What is rudra going to do...

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Worldpeace
Omg I missed dis update...
MriAra kab milenge. .. nanital ki wadiyo mein...

Archu aap kyun hamesha radha ko leke aate ho...

I hope wo past mein hi rahe...

What is rudra going to do...

mriara milege 😊
@radha 😆
will keep her in past 😉

@rudra wait n read 😉

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Previous update on Page 6

Misunderstanding

"Welcome to Shekhawat mansion, Sir. I am Rudra Pratap, caretaker of this mansion."

"Hello, Rudra Pratap. I am going to my room. Send coffee to my room."

"Ok Sir."

Suraiya escorted Mrityunjay to his room. Rudra Pratap let out a sigh of relief as he found Mrityunjay more introvert than what Mr. Dhanraj Singh Shekhawat had said. But it was good for Rudra Pratap as the less Mrityunjay talks and comes out of his room, the better it will be for Rudra Pratap.

After an hour, Tara arrived at the hotel with her group. They checked in and went to their respective rooms.

They came for dinner in the dining area. After dinner, they went to the terrace. They were mesmerized by the beauty of Naini Lake.

Shekhawat mansion was situated on the banks of Naini Lake.

Moonlight falling on the lake and the mountains beyond created a mesmerizing scene. And the silence of the night with its cold breeze was very soothing for the students who came from Mumbai, a city where such a scene was rare. They were enjoying it.

Mrityunjay heard some voices coming from the terrace and called Rudra Pratap and inquired about it.

Rudra Pratap said, "Sir these voices are coming from the neighbour's house. They have come here to spend the holidays and are overloaded with relatives, so noise is coming. I will talk to them and will tell them to make no noise. You don't worry sir."

But after one hour also the voices continued. So Mrityunjay decided to go himself and check it out.

When he reached the terrace, he found three girls and two boys near the age of 20 and a lady around the age of 30-31 there.

He was furious to see them on his terrace. He thought, "These neighbours are so arrogant that they came to my house."
He was about to burst out on them when Rudra Pratap came with Suraiya.

He shouted, "Rudra Pratap!!!"

Rudra Pratap went to him and tried to calm him by telling him his pre-planned lie."Sir they are students from Mumbai with their Professor. They came to Nainital and did not find a single room in any hotel. Seeing the unpredictable weather of Nainital, I gave them shelter here. If your Dadaji would have been here, he would have done the same for these students. But they are too disturbing sir, so I am going to throw them out right now."

"Wait! For how many days are they here?" Mrityunjay asked Rudra Pratap.

"Sir three days." Rudra Pratap replied slowly.

"They can stay here." Mrityunjay gave a scary look to the students and Tara and went to his room instructing, "No more noise."

Rudra Pratap was happy as half his plan went very well and now the remaining half was to be executed.

Tara was confused seeing all this. She asked Rudra Pratap, "Who was this man? And why was he shouting?"

Once again Rudra Pratap applied his pre-planned lie, adding more to it, "Madam, he is Mr. Shekhawat. Once this place was owned by his great grandfather. Mr. Shekhawat was in prison for two years for murder charges. And after imprisonment he has lost his mental stability. He thinks this hotel to be his property. As my family is very good friends with Mr. Shekhawat, I allowed him to stay here. But if you have any problem with him I will immediately remove him from my hotel."

Tara got scared after hearing this. She feared for her students' safety, but she also felt sorry for Mrityunjay for losing his mental stability. She wanted to leave the hotel at that moment but Rudra Pratap convinced her saying that at this high time of the season she would not get even a single room in any hotel.

He said, "You just need to stay away from Mr. Shekhawat and if at any time he comes in front of you and says something, you just need to follow that. Don't argue with him."

After this conversion, Tara and her students went to their rooms. Tara was worried for her students but the students were enjoying Nainital's atmosphere and slept with excitement for tomorrow's tour around Nainital. Tara was so worried that sleep was far from her eyes. Whenever she closed her eyes, Mrityunjay's face would haunt her mind. His long hair, grown beard, fiery eyes and that depth in his voice perfectly defined him as a ghost. Tara was very scared and in that scared state when she fell asleep she didn't know.

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Day 1 : Morning 7:00 am.

"Let's start our tour by first taking blessings from Naina Devi. We will first visit Naina Devi Temple and then will follow as our tour guide says." Tara instructed her students while her eyes were searching for Mrityunjay.

She was in a hurry to leave the hotel as soon as possible to be away from Mrityunjay for the students' safety and hers. Even now Mrityunjay's scary looks was haunting her mind.

They hired a guide and a vehicle for their tour. While leaving the hotel, Tara saw Mrityunjay standing in his room's balcony. She immediately turned her face but after a second she again looked at him. He was standing quietly, like a lost child in his own world and a deep sadness was all over his face. Seeing him in this state, Tara felt very bad for him.

Mrityunjay saw Tara watching him.

As soon as their eyes met, Tara immediately turned and left with the students for her tour. They went to Naina Devi temple, and then to Eco Cave Gardens.

Mrityunjay was sitting in his room when he got a call from Dadaji. Dadaji was asking about Mrityunjay's plan for today, whether he is going to visit the factory today or he is going to look around Nainital. Mrityunjay told Dadaji that he would visit the factory today and will check the reason for poor performance.

After one hour, Mrityunjay left for the factory. At the factory he found everything to be ok. He ordered some improvements to better the performance.

On his way to Shekhawat mansion, he saw Eco Cave Garden and stopped there. It was a very beautiful place. Caves were naturally created, some were small and some were big. One needed to be very cautious while walking in those caves as just a slip can cause death.

Tara and her group were also there at same time. Tara instructed all of them to be take precautions while walking in the caves and inform her wherever they went.
While walking through Leopard cave, Vasu slipped and got a scratch on her head. She could have gotten more injuries than a small scratch but was saved by Mrityunjay. When she lost her balance in the cave, Mrityunjay was just behind her and caught her in time.

When Vasu came out of the cave, Tara was standing there to scold her as she has said no one will go anywhere without informing her and the sudden disappearance of Vasu had made her worried. And when she saw Mrityunjay behind Vasu, she got more worried for Vasu.

Tara hid her fear for Mrityunjay and took Vasu from there to one side and said, "Why did you leave without informing us?"
And after seeing the scratch on Vasu's head, she got even more worried and said,
"You should not have left alone. What I will answer to your parents and the college if anything happens to you?"

Seeing Vasu being scolded by Tara, Mrityunjay came and said,
"It's my fault, not hers. I had a slip in the cave and she saved me. She got that scratch while saving me. Thank you for saving me." Saying this, he left.

Vasu was thinking, "Such a nice man he is, he took the blame for this scratch on him." Tara patted Vasu and they moved forward on their journey.

After a long and exhausting day tour, all returned to their hotel rooms and lay down on the bed.

At the dinner table, Mrityunjay was having his dinner when Tara and her students arrived for dinner. Fearful of Mrityunjay, they were all standing. Mrityunjay signaled them to sit and have dinner. All of them sat down for dinner but the fear was still in them. After finishing dinner, all went to their rooms but Vasu was still outside her room. Vasu went to meet Mrityunjay to say thank you for saving her from Tara's scolding.

While Vasu was returning to her room, she saw Tara coming towards her. She immediately hid herself behind the curtains.

Tara saw Mrityunjay there and she was moving towards the curtain when he noticed that Vasu was hiding from Tara behind that curtain.

He immediately called Tara, "Suniye..."

Tara turned to Mrityunjay keeping a normal expression on her face but deep inside she was dying of her fear of Mrityunjay. She replied, "Ji..."

Mrityunjay asked, "Are you searching for someone?"

Tara replied, "A..an..haa... Yes I am searching for Vasu as she is not in her room."

Mrityunjay said, "She must be in her room or on the terrace. Did you check the terrace? I suggest you to check the terrace once."

After hearing this, Tara immediately left for the terrace. Vasu came out from her hiding place and thanked Mrityunjay for once again saving her from Tara. Mrityunjay pointed Vasu to go to her room right now.

When Tara didn't find Vasu on the terrace, she returned to Vasu's room to find her sleeping. Seeing her asleep, Tara went to her own room.

In her room, Tara was thinking about Mrityunjay. She said to herself, "He seems to be a nice person, the way he thanked Vasu for saving his life, and then asked us for dinner. Poor guy lost his mental stability at such an early age. Hope we can help him in some way to live his normal life."

Thinking this, Tara was about to sleep when she heard a knock at her door.

It was Rudra Pratap. "Madam, a boy at the reception is saying he knows you and wants to meet you."

"At this time of the night! Who can come?? And that too here in Nainital where nobody knows me. Need to go and check." Saying this, Tara walked to the Reception.

"Oh...Yug. Finally you adjusted your match schedule to be with your friends. I should inform them. They were sad and were missing you." Tara went to inform Adi and Bunty about Yug's arrival.

Overjoyed by Yug's arrival, the students wanted to celebrate but Tara told them not to make a noise as this might disturb Mr. Shekhawat. So the students went to their rooms.

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Editor: ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️
(Thank You for making this readable)

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Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago

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HappyST

@HappyST

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Awesome dear...👏

I simply loved it...😊...

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Tina Moni

@TINAMONI

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Is this storyline based on "come September"an old Hollywood movie. Rock Hudson was male lead.forget the leading lady's name...!!

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: TINAMONI
Is this storyline based on "come September"an old Hollywood movie. Rock Hudson was male lead.forget the leading lady's name...!!

i never heard that movie name
can u plz give me synopsis of that movie so that i can clear ur doubt

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