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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

A night out:-

MJ ko us k dada jee ko hi batana padta hai beta aisa karo aisa mat karo. Is ko bilkul nahi akal nahi hai. He wants to see Tara happy and still can't think anything else. Finally he realized that he should brought Tara out and see she was not feeling it wired she was ready. But the choice of the place was not suitable and both didn't enjoy the company and place. It's obvious that if MJ comes with some lady people will try to know who is that lady. After all he is the owner of Shekhawat Industry and till date she didn't have a public appearance as his wife.
Good that Tara chose the sea beach and they both were relaxed at that place and often visited the place. It gives a kind of freshness to Tara. She is now moving ahead coming out of the grief of her mother's death.


MJ is new for married life πŸ˜† so Dada ji needs to give him some tipsπŸ˜† don't worry he will improve πŸ˜‰

Tara is moving forward with support of MJ😊


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Reply for On smooth way:-

So this RJ and his show Dil Se Dil Tak has impressed Tara and she was lost almost in that song. She must have been happy, satisfied and tension free when she was humming that song. MJ came early and he watched her carefree. He must be satisfied that now Tara is trying to live life smoothly and normally.
Yes, he must be, because Tara's happiness is all that MJ wants😊

Tara was confused how MJ came that early from office. Something must be bothering him that's why he has that headache and he wanted to sleep peacefully. Tara was confused how many pills he has kept and what was use of those? Good that she didn't ask that question to MJ. She relaxed her and he slept peacefully in her arms.
Tara is smartπŸ˜ƒ and knows what to do when 😊

He imagines so much but hardly says anything. He must express his views now. Dada jee told Tara that which sort of medicines they are but didn't tell her the whole story. I am sure soon when Dr. Fahim will be there he will answer all questions of Tara. I am sure only Tara can help MJ to bring him out of depression and guilt.

MJ is just not aware of his feelings for her
Tara is the light in MJ's life she will bring him backπŸ˜ƒ



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Posted: 8 years ago
Thought to make something for this fic

Using an old edit πŸ˜‰


Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Tara's phone buzzed. She checked it, it was Mrityunjay's message.

"Please listen to the radio."


She was puzzled reading this . She sat near the radio to listen to it as it must be something important that's why he messaged otherwise he had never messaged her about anything.


RJ: "Hello...who's speaking?"

Caller: "Mrityunjay "

Tara was shocked to listen to him on the radio.

"What he is doing? Why he called?" she thought.

Her heart was racing too fast.


RJ: "Yes Mrityunjay, so which song you want to dedicate and to whom?"


Mrityunjay : "Honton se chhoo lo tum ... To love of my life...my wife...Tara."


RJ: "Ok...here we go and I hope your wife is listening to this."


Mrityunjay : "She is."


Tears trickled from Tara's eyes hearing Mrityunjay's words... "To love of my life ...my wife ...Tara..." He is openly accepting it. Mrityunjay I am so happy I can't tell you. The song started.


~Honton se chhoo lo tum, Mera geet amar kar do

Ban jao meet mere, Meri preet amar kar do

Honton se chhoo lo tum, Mera geet amar kar do~


Listening to the song, tears of happiness were continuously flowing from her eyes. She went to the table where she had kept the bouquet that Mrityunjay gifted her today. It was smelling more pleasant than before.

~Na umar ki seema ho, Na janm ka ho bandhan

Na umar ki seema ho, Na janm ka ho bandhan

Jab pyaar kare koi, To dekhe keval mann

Nayi reet chalaakar tum, Yeh reet amar kar do

Nayi reet chalaakar tum, Yeh reet amar kar do ~


Her phone buzzed again and it was Mrityunjay again.

"Tara I want you in my life, not only in this life but for all the next lives when we take birth. Each time I want you. This time I realized it late but next time it will be I who would realize it before you."

Reading that text she chuckled with tears continuously flowing from her eyes. She caressed the roses; a tear fell on a rose petal and was looking like a pearl.


~Aakaash ka soonapan, Mere tanha mann mein

Aakaash ka soonapan, Mere tanha mann mein

Paayal chhankaati tum, Aa jaao jeevan mein

Saansein dekar apni, Sangeet amar kar do

Sangeet amar kar do, Mera geet amar kar do~


Mrityunjay again messaged her.

"Tara I was so lonely you came like the light in my life. I was so stupid that I denied my feelings for you and hurt you. I have given you too much pain Tara. If possible please forgive me and make me a part of your life."

She kissed those roses as if it was Mrityunjay and hugged them.

"Mrityunjay I never wanted anything in my life except you. There is no place for sorry in our relationship. There is only place for love." She murmured, sobbingly.


~Jag ne chheena mujhse, Mujhe jo bhi laga pyaara

Jag ne chheena mujhse, Mujhe jo bhi laga pyaara

Sab jeeta kiye mujhse, Main har dam hi haara

Tum haar ke dil apna, Meri jeet amar kar do

Tum haar ke dil apna, Meri jeet amar kar do

Honton se chhoo lo tum, Mera geet amar kar do~


"Tara I had lost whoever I loved. I was afraid to tell you how much I love you since the day when we first met in Nainital. But I feared that I would lose you that's why I never told you. But that night because of your confidence that life is to be lived by loving your loved ones not with the fear of losing them, gave me strength to face this truth. Tara whatever I am today is all because of you. You are then I am. Be my life Tara. Please."

Tara was not able to control her emotions. The flood of love in her made her cry more and more. It was unbelievable for her that Mrityunjay loved her so much, what she meant to him. When you love someone and they love you it gives a wonderful feeling. She was crying hugging the bouquet hard.

"You were right mom, a man like Mrityunjay comes on Earth once in centuries. Mom your daughter is the luckiest girl on Earth because I am married to him. Having him as the life partner is the most precious blessing. Mom... " She wanted to tell her mom she was correct about him. Tara's face was wet in her own tears of happiness.

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Her phone buzzed, it was Mrityunjay.

"If you love me please come to the following address at sharp 7:30pm wearing the saree that I sent right now."

She caressed that saree.


"Dumbo I love you." She chuckled. "But I will not tell you this now. You took time to tell me. Now I will make you wait, Mr. Budhu Shekhawat." She smiled.

In the office, Mrityunjay was worried thinking what would be Tara's answer.

"She didn't call or message about her decision. Should I call her? O Please Mrityunjay! Stop acting like a teenager. If she loves you she will come."

He was thinking this when his secretary was telling him about a document to be signed.

"You go I will sign this."


Tara was in absolute disbelief how her life changed its track from a sad one to a happy one. She was again and again playing Mrityunjay's voice message CD.



It was 5 in the evening and she was still in her room. Generally it was time for her tea with Dadaji, but when she didn't come Dadaji got worried. He walked to her room. When he reached there he heard Mrityunjay's voice message and understood the reason for her being late. He thanked God for giving them what they deserved. He knocked on the door. Hearing the knock at her door Tara stopped the CD, cleaned her tears and went to open the door.


"Bahu, I came to ask did you get what was yours?"

He was referring to what Tara said before going on the tour.


"Yes " she replied shyly.


Dadaji went to his room blessing Tara a happy married life.

She closed the door and rested herself on the door thinking, "I never thought someone would love me so much. Today evening is going to be the best evening of my life." She then looked at the clock. It was already 5 and she had to reach at sharp 7:30pm. She was still not ready. She was freaking out. She was biting her nails. Today she was acting like a teenage girl, who panics on their first date. This was Tara's first date indeed, she wanted to look the best today. She draped herself in the red saree sent by Mrityunjay, applied kajal to her deep eyes which were sparkling today with Mrityunjay's love.

She gathered her hair and said, "I want you to untie them Mrityunjay." saying this she put a hair clutch on her hair. After taking a final look at herself for the tenth time in last fifteen minutes, she left for the destination where Mrityunjay had called her.


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Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21

Thought to make something for this fic

Using an old edit πŸ˜‰





beautifull!!! πŸ˜›

Word Count: 1

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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautifull, lovely & romantic!!! πŸ‘ πŸ˜› ❀️
each line of song perfectly describes MJ's feeling!!! πŸ‘ πŸ˜› ❀️
eagerly wating for next part!!!
thanks for pm!!! β€οΈπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by npksk8495 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi !!! Archu...😊

I have many pending comment
So starting commenting...πŸ˜‰
Hopefully you are not so angry...


The Wait : Part a

Sweet Update this was !!!! ⭐️
Title is so perfect πŸ˜›

MJ was so happy πŸ˜‰
He just wanted to tell his feelings to Tara πŸ˜ƒ
Pure new MJ this was 😳

He was also listening to Tara's favorite show πŸ˜‰
And again your selection of song is so perfect ⭐️

His sketch about Tara was so adorable
MJ confession about how Tara changed him was superb ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

MJ asked Yug about proposing Girl πŸ˜†
Yug is a smart guy, understood very well πŸ˜›

And Tara was getting angry, MJ called Yug not her... πŸ˜†
And sensible students Tara has !!!

Poor MJ went to sleep thinking either Tara would like the arrangements or not 😳
How sweet

Nice update πŸ‘

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21

Thought to make something for this fic

Using an old edit πŸ˜‰




It's really beautiful and suits your Story. πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago

The Wait : Par b

Superb update ⭐️⭐️

MJ was baffled what to do or not πŸ˜†
Poor MJ !!!
And MJ's excuse to Vasu he called for congratulating πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
And the intelligent group again understood πŸ˜‰

Wow !!! They also said intentionally MJ was coming to station πŸ˜ƒ
Tara was happy πŸ˜‰

Tara was waiting ...
But MJ became late .. ouch 😡
And poor Tara became hopeless
She thought he wouldn't come πŸ˜”

Ah .. Finally MJ came πŸ˜ƒ
And with bouquet πŸ˜›
Tara's waiting had ended 😊

They lost in other
He gave the bouquet and about tell but a call came 😳
Tara was so eager to listen his feelings ...
But when he opened his mouth 😲

Tara was shocked ...
And MJ you are idiot 😳

Great update Archu πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

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