Rantara SS Tere Sang Yaara... (Discontinued) A Big Sorry to Readers.. - Page 7

BabyHimavari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

This is the best chapter till date...👏👏

love each and every moment of it... this rantara could be the goals for besties...😆

there were so many emotions in this update...

there was sweetness of adorable friendship.. there was bitter sweet conflict like firecrackers and lastly the unknown beautiful feeling...

My my... these two are TOO ADORABLE to handle...😳😳

I mean teh way they interact, talk with each other so casually sharing there feelings... mahnn i am feeling emo... remind me of my besties from school..

And the song used here couldn't be more than perfect!!...👏👏

and lastly I am so proud of my bacha!!😎.. kya likh rahe hoo aap..👏👏

Edited by BabyHimavari - 8 years ago

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Surbhi

@surbhi53

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Ahmm ahmm sorry shivi darling...
late comment k lie...

update to super duper mast hai ji...
Raghu ne evening kinne ache se plan ki hai...

ye ladke planning krne ke awwal hote hai...

same same choice...
😳
dono ne ek jsa order dia...
bichara waiter...

Or ye ladke gussa b jldi hote hai... bilkul Aru ki trh h ye...

India Gate pr raat me ice cream waah waah mja aagya...

haww inna late ghr pe...
chl koi ni vo b manage ho jayega...

awsome update... dear...

luv u darling 🤗

Edited by surbhi53 - 7 years ago

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SymphonyStar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Are Shivs Kya updetwa haai yaar sweet & salty update matlab sweet & aansuowala salty.Wo counting bike or toy bike wala joke
😆 Resturant mein baithe zyada waqt ni hua ki ladai start 😆 aur waiter kya khud ko restaurant ka maalik samjh riya tha 😡.Gripped his jacket 😳.Antu ro padi yeh Antu bhi na 😭.Aww Raghu ki mathamatics wala logic kya samjhaya Antu ko 😊.Bike ride aur woh song awaaz ka dariya tu meri dost hai ek dum fit ⭐️ hai yaar situation pe.Their hug strange but sweet feeling 😉 Rantara dono ko yeh ehsaas hai ki kuch toh naya hai yeh unke darmiyaan bas yeh ehsaas pe unke yakeen ka thappa lag jaaye toh baat ban jaaye. 😉.Yeh sach mein Tere Sang Yara Khush Rang Bahara wala update tha. 😛.LOVED IT!!!!

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pampz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Oh meri Golu ...do you know something ???? YOU are a gem real gem ...

u know the simplest yet the hardest thing in this world is to make someone feel really good and make him/her smile genuinely... you have done this at ease ...

the task looks so simple yet this is hard ...ur story is like a fresh blooming flower ...dhire dhire as it is blooming its spreading its beauty its fragrance and elegance to the world...ur story is so fresh and so beautiful ...i felt like watching a bunch of colorful butterflies trying to gather nectar from a beautiful dancing flower.

loved how Rantara here shared such a beautiful friendship and how slowly gradually and gracefully they are feeling something very new and beautiful in their relationship. this story is depicting a deep soothing and fantastic feeling between Rantara and the story is transmitting the same into the readers also in the same pace ...and here comes to applause ur wonderful talent. Doing this is so difficult and yet u did it at buttery smooth easiness. i have read all the chapters all in one go ...and i can say only one thing that thank you for writing this and making me feel heaven .

love you my dear Golu shivi 🤗

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Shivangi

@shivi808

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Aww... Didu... Is baar mujhey aansun a gye aap logon key itney awesome and beautiful and amazing comments padh kar.. 😊

I m feeling so blessed today... I m so happy.. 🤗

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sonali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Great update yaar... 👍🏼

I don't know how to use forum properly so posting this smallest comment.. Sowie..😔

And yes HAPPY DIWALI... 🤗

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Sanju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Golu,very nice update 👏
Fantabulous ⭐️
Rantara's masti and cute nok jhok left me awed 😃
To be honest,I was seeing u in place of Antara 🥱
You know why? Because u talk like her in real life...tell me I'm right 😆
Continue writing Golu ⭐️
All the best with your studies as well 👍🏼
Love n hugs,
Your mabhi 😃

Edited by Sanju4Rajeev - 7 years ago

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Andrea D'Souza (Andy)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Chapter 6:

Wow Yaar a very cute n emo wala update...👏...

Loved it...❤️...

their nok-jhok... chidaana n cute si ladaii...all were awesome...👍🏼...

Antu k saath mein bhi emotional ho gayi...😔...

Kya likhthi ho aap yaar......awesome cute and wonderful...😎...bilkul aapke jaisa...😃..Writer ji...😳..

tc...😊...lots of love n hugs...🤗...

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Shivangi

@shivi808

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Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: surbhi53
unres page 9

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Anna1012

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Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Sweet and funny update like always..
I like... WAit.. I loves ur posts...
Its always sweet and fun filled..
Go on girl...
Coming to update..
I love their freindship so much..
Antara ek bar shuru ho jati hai toa chup hi nhi hoti..
Raghu... He's sweet and shy boy
Bichara waiter... Soch rha hoga.. Kaha fas gya... Haha
At last they will be missing each other...
Afterall good update
Continue soon
Love u

Love Divya

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