Heya peeps.. Just a small sketch before update...
Introduction:-Dadi Maa (DM):-She is the grandmother of Raghu... They all live in Pune.. She had 2 sons...Raghav Naik and Ravi Naik.. One daughter Rina Naik...
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Ravi Naik aka Chacha Ji (CJ):-He is the dear chahcha of Raghu.. He loves Raghu as his son... He is the 2nd child of Dadi ji... His wife name is neeti and has a daughter tanisha..----------------------------------------------
Neeti Naik aka chachi Ji(NCJ),and tanisha:-Neeti is a simple lady.. Loves the family.. Tanisha is 19 years old and is the best friend of rasika...
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Rina Naik aka Bua Ji(BJ):-Rina Naik is the last among her brothers sister... She has 1 son.. 1 daughter.. Both of them are the youngest among all cousin sister and brothers. His son raj is 10years where as daughter sanjana is 5 years old.. His husband has left her for other woman..
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Nani Ji aka (NJ):-Raghu Nani shanti Devi is a pious lady just like his mother..she is the best friend of raghu's DJ.
Raghu's mom has one brother and one sister..
Jaydev mama (JM):-Jaydev verma,He is the mama of Raghu.. By profession commissioner of Mumbai police... A dutiful well reputed man.. He helped her sister in a lot of hardships...
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Sarika Mami(SM):-She is a witch.. She wants to snatch all from all.. She doesn't respect anyone..
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Manisha Verma:-She is the daughter of Jaydev. A totally spoilt brat... She is same as raghu's age.. Going to clubs and all is her life.. She is always after Raghu...
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Chapter no 3:-Raghu was standing in the center of the lane. The sun was going down...He was looking here and there when he saw her.. She just passed right through her..
Raghu:- "Antara Ruko... Antara Ruko Plzzz..."
But she went like a gush of wind.. Raghu started to run and chase her... Soon it began to go dark.. He was searching here and there.. But now there was no sign of her.. Raghu was running hard.. There was a pole in front of him with a broken light... The light was blinking.. Raghu stood for a while to catch his breath... There he saw her again.. He started to run again when his head banged into something hard.. Soon Raghu woke up and sat on his bed. Antara was still on his walls and in his heart.. Mrs. Naik was banging the door..
Mrs. Naik:- "beta darwaza khol! Uth ja Raghu... Subah Kay 7 nah gayai..."
Raghu stood up switched off his projector and went to the door.
Raghu:- "Maa Kia hogaya Sunday hai aj... Subah 7 bajay q Utah rahi ho!!"
Mrs. Naik:- "janti hoon Sunday hai par aj Sagai hai... Aur Sab log a chukay hain.. Mama g Bas Thoda dair mein pohanch jayain gain.."
Raghu:- "hmm main ata hoon.."
Saying this he closed the door an leaned on the door... He went to the cupboard took his pant and shirt and went to the shower... He took a shower... Dressed in blue jeans and white shirt he came down.. As he stepped down he saw all of his family...
DJ and NJ were sitting and talking kids playing.. Rasika an Mrs. Naik serving all snacks and tea.. Raghu was folding his sleeves when a small girl came and ran into raghu's legs.. It was sanjana raghu's Bua daughter...
Sanjana:- "bhaiya.."
Raghu:- "aray sanjana.."
Raghu lifted her in arms and kissed her cheek.
Sanjana made a face and wiped it off.
Sanjana:- "Kia kaltay ho bhaiya... Ughi ughi..."
Raghu gave a smile and took her to DJ and NJ... He touched their feet and took blessing.
DJ:- "khush reh.. Toh tu ne bhi shadi ka faisla kardia haan??"
Raghu gave a smile.
NJ:- "Raghu beta tu theek hai??"
Raghu:- "haan Nani main theek hoon.. "
DJ:- "tu khush hai.??"
Raghu:- "haan Dadi khush hoon.. Maa khush toh main bhi khush..."
Both grannies left a sigh. Soon raghu's chacha joined them.. Then came all.. It was lunch time and Raghu was lying .. Raj was playing PlayStation...
Rasika:- "bhaiya akar khana kha lo.."
Raghu who was lost didn't listen to her... Raj saw Raghu was lost in his own thoughts..
Raj:- "bhaiya apko rasika didi bola rahi hai!!"
Still Raghu's reaction didn't change a bit... He was lost thinking what his he wanted to be and what it became. Rasika was a little bit sad... Rasika went near Raghu and waved his both hands infront of him. Raghu came back from his trance.
Raghu:- "choti Kia hua??"
Rasika:- "bhaiya main apko kabse awaz day rahi hoon aur ap hain keh meri taraf Dekh bhi nhn rahay..."
Raghu:- "woh kuch nhn Bas aisay hi!!"
Rasika:- "Bhai I know tu Antara ko lay kar sad hai magar Bhai kitne dhonda Phir ja kar hi u took this decision..."
Raghu:- "chor na choti... Main Kia keh sakta hoon! Tu yeh bata tujhay Kia kaam tha..."
Rasika:- "haan chalo woh khana kha lo!!"
Raghu:- "haan chalo... Raj chal bachay khana kha lay.."
Raj paused his game and came out along with Raghu and rasika.. As they step out The door bell rang... Raghu:- "main dekhta hoon.."
Rasika nodded and took raj towards the dining table...
Raghu opened the door. As he opened a girl in blue jeans and pink micro shirt with open hair was standing.. Her hair were colored in brown with purple streaks. Raghu made a disgust face looking at her.
She was manisha.. Raghu's mama's daughter.. She had always bad intention...
Manisha:- "aray Wah... Mera Raghu.. Kaisay ho?! Kia baby tum Itna naraz ho keh Sagai ka decision lay Lia..."
Raghu:- "tum akeli ai ho ya mama Ji aur Mami Ji ayi hain sath... Aur thoday dhang Kay kapray pehna kar..."
Raghu was about to leave when she held his hand..
Manisha:- "Raghu Itna bhi Kia naraz ho? Batao na Kia problem hai... Mujh mein kami Kia hai?? Aur waise bhi tumhay woh toh mili hi nhn jisko tum dhond rahay thay... Kia naam tha tantara.. Nhn bhantara..."
Raghu got full angry.. How dare she said that to HIS ANTARA...
Raghu turned.. He freed his hand..And slapped her hard.. At the same time raghu's Mami came... She saw that Raghu slapped her.
SM:- "aye bappa ab is ladki ne Kia kaha Isay.. "
Manisha lift her head and looked at Raghu in anger.
Manisha:- "aj tumne mujhay yeh thappar Mara hai tum dekhna aj main yeh Sagai kisi bhi hal mein honay nhn doon gin..."
Mama Ji came at the same time and heard manisha...
JM:- "manisha..!!!! Kia bakwaas kar rahi ho!!!??"
Raghu saw his mama Ji.. He bent and took his blessing.. At the same time mami also entered and Raghu took her blessing.. Mami just to pretend to mama Ji blessed him but in heart cursing him.
JM:- "yeh koi baat karkay ka tareeka hai..."
Raghu:- "janay dijiye mama g yeh kabhi nhn sudhray gi.."
Raghu moved to manisha.
Raghu:- "and I dare u keh aj Kay function mein kuch kar keh dekhao !!! And kuch bhi ghalat hua I know who to ask!!"
Saying that Raghu went inside with Jaydev mama... Manisha had an evil smile on her face..
SM:- "Kia manisha tu pagal hai atay hi Raghu say panga Matlab Kia zarorat thi..?"
Manisha:- "Maa chill ... Raghu say panga nhn tha yeh toh mera pyar tha... Abhi dekhiye aj main Kaisay is Sagai ko aur har ladki ko Raghu say door kar doon gin..."
SM:- "aye bappa is ladki ko thodi akal day do!!"
Suddenly Mrs. Naik arrived on the gate...
Mrs. Naik:- "aray bhabi ap bahir q khari hain!! Aja manisha andar Aja.."
Looking at her manisha made an innocent face and bent to seek her blessings. Mrs. Naik caught her in half and hugged her. She made a disgusting face...
Manisha(to herself):- "ohh god yeh Bua bhi na.. Kia karti hain.. Aik dafa Raghu mujhse patt jayi main in Dono drama Maa beti ko nikal kar is ghar par aur Raghu par raj karun gin..."
Mrs. Naik:- "chaliye Sab khana kha rahay hain ap bhi Sab ko join kariye.."
Mrs. Naik took SM and manisha inside.. As the grannies saw manisha they made an irritated face.
DJ:- "aye Raghu ki Nani.. Sun!! Yeh wohi hai na Teri Poti Dayan.. Manisha jo meray Raghu ko tang karti hai..."
Nani took her spects off clean them with a tissue and wore again.
NJ:- "Han wohi hai yeh.. Agai Phir se.. Bohat ajeeb hai yeh.. Na jantay Jaydev ne kia paap Kia tha jo yeh beti mili Isay.."
DJ:- "agar isne aj meray potay ko tang Kia toh main isko choron gin nhn..."
NJ:- "aik kaam kartay hain yeh yahan akar meri beti ki bohat madad karnay ki acting karti hai.. Aj isko yeh Sab bartan dhonay ko day do ghis ghis kar mar jayai gi.."
Both Nani and Dadi did a hi5.. All did their lunch.. After that manisha acted and insisted on doing the work.. Both grannies made her do all the diahes and clean them.. By that time it was evening and everybody had to get ready.
All were sitting in the hall.. Raghu was lying in the lap of Dadi and Nani.. They were busy talking while that manisha was washing everything...
Mrs. Naik:- "chalo Bhai Sab utho aur ready hojao it's 5 and humein wahan 7 bajay tak pohanchna hai..."
Raghu got a bit sad... He got up and went to his room.. Rasika saw this. The grannies also noticed ...
Rasika looked at grannies and passed a smile..
Rasika(to herself):- "ap fikr May karo Bhai Abhi kuch see mein Sab theek hogayai ga..."
Raghu came to his room. He turned his projector on and looked his angel...
Raghu touched the wall on which Antara was. He was lost when his phone rang.
It was Amit..
Raghu:- "haan Bhai Kia hua?!"
Amit:- "woh kuch nhn tu theek hai? Sagai ka Kia hai??"
Raghu:- "main theek hoon Sab tayar honay lagay hain Sagai 7 bajay hai..."
Raghu told him the XYZ place where the engagement was going to take place.. after sometime Raghu hung up and again turned towards the wall...
Raghu:- "Antara I am sorry mujhay yeh karna par raha hai... magar main kia Karun... na janay tum kahan chali gai..."
He was lost when he saw the time it was 6:30. He got up and went to the shower. He got ready he wore a light maroon red sherwani with a dark maroon shalwar...
Raghu was looking too good... he came to mirror and saw Antara was still there...
Raghu:- "I always wanted to do this for us magar..."
He took his watch... combed his hairs... he came and stood in front of her...
Raghu:- "I miss you..."
Saying this he turned the projector off and came downstairs..
Manisha who had finished her work by then also got ready and wore a pink black backless sleeveless lehnga...she was sitting taking selfies when she looked at Raghu who was coming down...
Manisha:- "wah Raghu aj toh tum aik dum hot lag rahay ho..."
Raghu ignored the comment made by manisha and started to leave. Manisha blocked her way and came clse to her.
Manisha:- "kia Raghu main ne tumhari itne tareef ki aur tum toh dekhtay bhi nhn ho... yeh batao na main kaisi lag rahi ho..."
Rasika saw manisha and came down.
Rasika:- "Raghu bhaiya who kuch cheezen car mein rakhni hai Chalein .."
Manisha cursed rasika for ruining her moment...
Raghu nodded and rasika took him...
They all left in 5 mints... the venue was on 10 mint drive... Raghu's heart was beating fast.. The naiks were the first to reach... there was no sign of anyone then... Soon it was 7:15... Raghu was lost when MachMach and Amit came... Rasika did a thumbs up...
Rasika:- "let's start with the plan..."
They went to Raghu..
MachMach:- "kia Bhai looking good haan!!"
Raghu looked at him and smiled...
Raghu:- "thanks yaar.."
Amit:- "Bhai abhi kia karna hai?"
Raghu:- "pata nhn.."
MachMach:- "karna kia hai abhi bhabhi ayai gi aur Raghu usko ring pehnani hai bas".
Raghu looked at MachMach.
Raghu:- "Bhai bhabhi Teri sirf Antara hai yeh sab main Maa ki khushi ko kar raha hoon.."
Amit:- " par Bhai bhabhi toh bhabhi hai..."
Raghu:- "dekh main ne aik dafa kaha bhabhi sirf Antara hai tum logon ki main ne aj tak uski jaga kisi ko nhn di ok.. aur main is ladki ko bhi bata doon ga keh main Antara is pyar karta hoon..."
MachMach:- "Bhai bhabhi agai.."
Pointing towards a girl MachMach said... Raghu was about to say something when he turned and look at a girl touching his mother's feet. He moved a few steps to the front and looked at her... he was shocked and was very much nervous...
He was not sure how to react... he was just looking at her because the girl was none other than ANTARA.. his Antara... The girl he is being searching like mad... A small smile appeared on his lips. MachMach Amit and rasika were standing behind him...
Raiska:- "toh kaisa laga surprise??"
Raghu was lost and then heard her..
Raghu:- "yeh toh Antara hai.."
Rasika:- "haan Bhai yeh Antara hi hai.."
Raghu:- "par yeh Maa ko kaisay mili.."
Rasika:- "yeh ap Amit aur MachMach ko pocho.."
With that rasika ran away to Antara... Raghu turned and looked at the duo who were looking here and there... Raghu understood that all this time they knew all about it that's why they never told him about any information.
Raghu:- "toh Bhai log yeh sab.."
Before he could complete JM called him.
Raghu turned towards them.
Raghu:- "baad mein pochta hoon.."
Raghu stepped down and looked at Antara. Antara was shocked to see his would-be husband... she knew him... she knew him from long back... Raghu touched her parents feet and took blessings.. they were happy to see Raghu and were thanking god for such an obedient son-in-law. Precap:-
Engagement...
RaNtara's meeting... manisha's secret..
Antara's part of the story...
I don't know what I wrote...
But I wrote..
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Regards,
Haya...
Edited by hayakhan5 - 9 years ago
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