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Posted: 9 years ago
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heyya guys heres my chapter
chapter 6:

i was really annoyed by whatever had happened and was crying continuously. my driver had arrived and i was about to leave when i saw vrats calling me and asked what happened antara. nothing i said.tell na she asked again. he doesn't love me he doesn't care for me i said while crying. its not like dat antara. it is like dat. i said and sat in my car the car was leaving when i heard raghu calling from the back. no raghu please don't call me i said to myself. he was continuously calling but i didn't listen to him. i reached home and threw all my accessories away i changed my dress and started crying again and again. i have to leave for India tomorrow and he doesn't even care for me. mamma was continuously knocking the door to ask if i had my dinner. i literally shouted on her and lied her dat i had my dinner. i was still crying and crying and didn't know when i was into deep sleep."""<<<I opened my eyes for water at mid night but my eyes were blurred, i found a face blurred sitting in front of me. i rubbed my eyes and found raghu in front of me. i just hugged him and later realised what i was doing. tum yahan kya kar rahe ho, i asked. tujhe sorry bolne aaya tha. no , i dont want to talk to you i just said on his face. please listen to me he asked me begging. nope i said. what could i have possibly done apoorva had forbidden me to talk to you. oh wow and u did what she said. congrats MR. raghunath naik this means that u have got u r love i said. no yaar its not like that he replied. oh pls i don't want to listen to you. he then banged his head on the wooden part of the bed and i was seriously shouting at his that pls don't do it.>>'''''and i actually woke up and found myself dreaming. yahi hona tha i said to myself and slept again. the sunlight fell on my eyes and i woke up. I decided to go to school as the flight was in the evening. i got ready and reached school. my dad decided to drop me to school himself. so i didn't face raghu dat morning. in school i was so sad about yesterday and everyone asked me the reason left so early. i just told them that my health was not good. raghu was just staring me but didn't ask me even a single word about yesterday.even icouldn't face him. the classes went as usual.today was dance classes after lunch and i ran quickly towards the dance room but most of the people were busy with there work so i was only left dere. i played the music and started to dance on the song sun sathiya. i didn't realise when raghu came and joined me with the steps i just ignored it and continued. the song completed when i found my self in raghu's arms.i quickly took a back step. when raghu asked me, kal kyun chali gayi thi, yeh toh tumhe bahut ache se pata hona chahiye i said while packing my stuff. he held my arm and pulled me towards him kya matlab haan, bina kuch jaane samjhe tum wahaan se chali gayi he said angrily. achaa woh tumhi ho jo mujhse kabhi baat karte ho to kahi mujhe blacklist kar dete ho i said in a loud tone. maine aisa kabhi nahi kiya. he yelled. haan haan ache se pata hai, ek main hi thi jo tumhare piche paglon ki tarah bhagti hun i answered him. kyun bhagti ho phir antara. because I LOVE YOU God dammit,i said in a fustruated way. as a friend i added when i realised what i had done and ran from there the bell rang and papa had come to pick me. I went home wid him and got ready to leave for India. the whole way i was thinking about him. In that process i slept till the time i reached the airport. In the next 1/2 hour was our flight i was der in the waiting hall with momma and papa when i heard a notification from my mobile, it was vrat's message. i ignored it and sat dere.the next moment the flight announcement was done and we headed towards the flight. in the flight i got the window seat on which i sat but remmembered about raghus words. once he had said that he fought wid the air hoster to get a window seat and i started laughing in the flight on that incident and later realised that every one was staring at me. the next moment tears formed in my eyes and i took out my phone to look at his pic. i saw vrat's message and read and which left me shocked. it was written that "RAGHU HAD DECIDED TO PLAN A SURPRISE FOR U ON THE NIGHT OF HIS BIRTHDAY BUT HE WAS REALLY HURT WHEN YOU LEFT FROM DER, HE THEN TOLD ME ABOUT U R FIGHT IN THE DANCE HALL, AND I EXPLAINED HIM THAT YOU THOUGHT THAT HE WAS IGNORING YOU AND U FELT BAD" i cursed myself for not listening to him and was about to message vrats back when my mom took the phone and switched it off,beta the flight is about to take off,phones switch off karna chahiye na.she told me. mama bas ek second important hai i said but she never agreed. i was hurt badly about whatever i had done and cursed my self very moment i remembered raghu.

here guys heres my bakwaas post and if u feel to kick me u can.but please comment😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Hey crstyal superb update...raghu ne antu ke liye surprise plan kiya tha...antu pehle hi chali gayeee...aww poor raghu...par ussey bhi poor meri antu hain...itna kyon satata hain raghu...
Update soon... N do keep writing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Nahiii...

Antu darling ye kya kiya??? 😭
Mere Raghu ko chod k chali ayi India...
U didn't even reply to Vrats msg

NOT FAIR

NOT FAIR

NOT FAIR

I jst hope k when she will return to koi panga na Ho bss...


Anyways the UPDATE IS AWESOME πŸ‘
Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
main adhuri teaser do read guys
antara is in her drawing room with a diary in her hand and tears in her eyes

the maid enters and asks her

madam aap ki dost vrats aap ke beti ke saath aayi hai..

nahi shanti unse kehdo ki ab mein uss se nahi mil sakti...
uska chehra mujhe phir sse dukh dega,please...

lekin madam woh...

maine kaha na nahi milna hai matlab nahi milna hai pls mujhe akela chodne ke liye kehdo unhein


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ok guys i know u guys will be shocked but don't worry this will be cleared in the next updateπŸ˜‰till den sonchte rahiye ki achaanak seyeh kya hua?????

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😲 😲 😲

WHAT IS THIS????

ANTARA KI BETI 😲

KAISEY????

Please please CONTINUE SOON Dear

Seriously I CAN'T WAIT
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chpter 7
antara was ther in the drawing room with thw diary in her hand and eyes filled wid tears...n there she wrote..i had never thought that something in such way would happen in my life which would never let me move further. it would stop me from going further. it was a time when i would write this diary happily but now the only thing comming out is tears. i dont know how many tears have been flown from dese eyes, the only thing i know that these tears all my life have flown for u and have never been wasted. these tears have always shown the immense love towards u, these tears have shown the care towards u, the dedication of life towards u, these tears have played a very critical role to make ur memories alive in me, these memories have consoled me when i was broken, the gave me a reason to live when i decided to die. i still have a hope after dese 20years that u would come back,my love has always been only for u, one and only for u. but without u iam like a non living person. my life is dedicated to u and only u please come back my love for me, for ur life, for ur heart piecewhich u left here, for ur one and only beloved
she wrote this and tried to stop her tears but they couldnt when the maid entered and asked
madam ur friend and daughter are here to meet u
pls shqnti nahi milna mujhe unse,..jane ke liye keh do unhein.
but mam shanti asked
kahan na jao pls...antara shouted..
the maid entered the hall n told the wat all her mistress had said when the daughters eyes filled wid tears and she cried when her anty vrats said beta nishta mamma ki tabyat kharab hai..hum kiai aur din milenge unse abhi ke liye mujhe milne do main abhi unki tabyat puch kar aati hun...
vrats entered the drawing room n shouted usmein us bachii ki kya galti..
uski galti yeh hai ki woh mujhe raghu ki yaad dilati hai..uski wajah se yeh hadsa hua aur uski wajah se hi toh mein raghu kho diya..said antu
nqhi antu yeh sach nahi..woh toh bichari bachii tab uska janm bhi nahi hua ...explained vrats
nahi hua yahi toh prob tha...chahe toh tabhi mar jatitoh acha tha..said antu
ek bar uska chehra dekh le tu sab bhul jayegi..said vrats..
pls mujhe chod do akele..nahi dekhna mujhe anhin kuch jaanna mujhe,...plss..said antu in a weak voice.
antu...said vrats and turned when she saw antu on the floor..

antara was unconcious..vrats called antu and took her to her room and called nishta in..she phoned the doctor and the doctor arrived in 15mins..
antara was very weak and dats the reason she fell unconcious...vrats looked at nishta and then antu dono maa beti kitne achee lagte hai saath mein..lekin abhi bhi unmein doori hai..she looked up and said raghu dekh rahe ho na tum tumhare jane se kya halat hogayi hai tumhare beti aur antu ki..agar hosake toh pls aajao tumhari zarurat hai inhein..antara was in her dreamland..she was again thinking of her old days..
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I reached india in almost 2 days and the first thing i did was switching on my phone and messaging raghu..
raghu iam soo sorry maine tumhara kehna na sun kar wahin se chali ayi..i sent and sat in the cab to leave for grandmas house..i was informed dat the next day was my uncles wedding but i couldnr be excited as only one thing was coming into my mind...y did i behave so with raghu..i wish i could hqve listened to him.. i checked my phone again and again and at last i recieved the message...antu u never listen to me ur my only best friend and i love u the most..i must say that i wouldnt be so sad when apoorva leaves me than when u will leave me because ur. ot my crush ur more thzn crush to me.. i felt really bad when i heard all that frm u but now as u know everything..its ok..enjoy ur vaccations..n bring something fr mee..
i read the message and was happy as if i was charged with a charger...

i went to the market quicklybought a lehanga for myself and the related jwellery..

thenext day iwas totally ready for the function i woke up n sent a hello message to raghu.. he messagedme back and told me to send the pics i willhave for the wedding. i got quickly ready and we all left for the wedding..

i met there all my cousins my friends and all i had selfies chit chat jokes and lots of fun wid them in between i recieved raghus message when my cousins teased mee..boyfriend haan..noo i said just my friend i said and escaped fr there...thewedding was over at night 12 am and we reached home..the firstthing i did was to send all pics to raghu..

He recieved the pics and looked them..later the sent me a message that u look hot in the pic.. but in the other pic y did u let that guy put hand on ur bare kamar..he messaged and left me. awstruck..
Its nothin like dat...hes my friend..he was just having a pic but y r u soo tensed...

i should be my darling ur my friend and i dont want anyone to misbehave wid u so iam tensed..

sory raghu age se aisa nahi hoga..i aaid and said godbye as i was very tired..
even in my dreams he was there..

done guys i m soo sorry for the delay.
but this tym iam with a new twist dont worry u will understand grdually
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting! πŸ˜ƒ
Please continue soon my dear πŸ˜ƒ
Stay blessed πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey crystal I am so sorry for the late replies on your all updates... I have read the whole and will be giving feedback now...

Chapter 5:-
Yayyy Antara was able to attend raghu's birthday..
She shopped well...
Even her father birthday too...
Antara is broken...
Ohh I hate apoorva...
Kia hai isko...


Chapter 6:-
Ok so Antara is really hurt aur Hina bhi chahyai...
Raghu doesn't care for her...
Hmmm well said Antara... Sun sathiya mine also fav song...
And Antara said it but soon recovered...
I hope everything goes fine...
Ohhh dear this is not a bakwaas post...
This is DHAMAKEDAR post...


Chpater No 7:-
Ok yeh it a bada twist...
Antara ki beti nishta...
Accident yeh Sab Kia horaha...
Ok Antara says sorry...
Raghu forgives...
All fine...
Ohhh wedding... Antara must be looking nice...
Raghu feeling jealous...
Hmmm...
I loved the update...
Do update soon...
And plz pm me...
Edited by hayakhan5 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hayakhan5

Hey crystal I am so sorry for the late replies on your all updates... I have read the whole and will be giving feedback now...

Chapter 5:-
Yayyy Antara was able to attend raghu's birthday..
She shopped well...
Even her father birthday too...
Antara is broken...
Ohh I hate apoorva...
Kia hai isko...


Chapter 6:-
Ok so Antara is really hurt aur Hina bhi chahyai...
Raghu doesn't care for her...
Hmmm well said Antara... Sun sathiya mine also fav song...
And Antara said it but soon recovered...
I hope everything goes fine...
Ohhh dear this is not a bakwaas post...
This is DHAMAKEDAR post...


Chpater No 7:-
Ok yeh it a bada twist...
Antara ki beti nishta...
Accident yeh Sab Kia horaha...
Ok Antara says sorry...
Raghu forgives...
All fine...
Ohhh wedding... Antara must be looking nice...
Raghu feeling jealous...
Hmmm...
I loved the update...
Do update soon...
And plz pm me...

Thanks darling for ur valuable comments after all these comments i will be able to write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev

interesting! πŸ˜ƒ
Please continue soon my dear πŸ˜ƒ
Stay blessed πŸ˜‰


Thank you sanju ji i missed u soo much in the last 2 post of mine
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