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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev

Aww... Antara is all broken and devastated πŸ˜•
Abh kiya hoga? πŸ˜•
Can she stay away from Raghu? Will she able to? πŸ˜•
Waiting to read more darling πŸ˜ƒ
Very well written πŸ‘
Thanks for the PM ⭐️
Do continue soon πŸ˜ƒ


This is true but abhi antara ki zindagi mein bahut saare twist aane wale hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys sorry for late.
Now a new entry is gonna come and dialogues will be coloured

Chapter 4:
I woke up in the morning and my condition was horrible. I got ready and headed to the dining. I couldnt even eat my breakfast. Soon the van arrived and I headed to the van and sat on the last seat as all the seats were full. Oh no raghu will also sit here. He came and sat beside me. The driver sensed that we were bored so he turned on the radio. And the song was..
Do lafz ki hai
Baat ek hi hai
Kyun darmiyaan phir ruki ruki
Keh bhi naa paayein
Reh bhi na paayein
Kyun bewajah hai, ye bebasi
Tum mein hum hain
Hum mein tum ho
Tum se hum hain
Hum se tum ho
Kismaton se milte hain do dil yahaan

Har kisi ko nahi milta
Yahan pyar zindagi mein

My eyes were filled with tears but raghu saw them and asked me. Kya hua antara tu roo kyun rahi hai, bata na. Kuch nahi tumse matlab I told him in a rude way.We reached school and i was heading towards the class when raghu stopped me. Antara help me with these books. I couldnt ignore him . Khud nahi sambhal sakte. Tumhe meri hi help kyun chahiye haan. Baksh do mujhe pls.I almost shouted on him. I left for the class. i was standing near the window remebering all the happy moments. And one wsas this
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Once I sat on the first seat and raghu was behind me. He started to kick my seat. Raghu kya hai. Kya matlab,maine kuch nahi bola said raghu. Oh really, meri seat koi bhoot kick kar raha tha na. Sach hi kaha tha mere dost ne tu na chudail hai said raghu. What do you mean?. Chudail hi bhoot dekh sakte hai he said and ran when we reached school. Even i ran behind him. While running we reached in an empty classroom. There was water on the floor. I was about to catch him when my leg slipped and we both fell on the floor. Our uniforms were wet from the front. We didnt understand what had hapenned and started to laugh. We tried to get up but everytime we tried we fell down.
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I came out of the trance when someone closed my eyes. Kaun hai . I understood when i touched the person's hand.
It was my bestest friend vrittika. She didnt come to school for 2 weeks.I usually call her vrats
Vrats tu aagayi i said and hugged her.
Haan baba tujhe chod kar kaise reh sakti thi...
Yeh sahi hai tere holidays kaise the bata
Bahut hi boriing teri bhi yaad aarahi thi
Tere liye gift bhi laayi hun
Sachii
Haan meri maa
Waise raghu kahaan hai mujhe usse milna hai
Aakhir mera bhai jaisa hai
Haan mil le wahi betha hai
I didnt want to tell vrats about this as she was in a good mood.she went to raghu and was chit chatting with her. I was looking at raghu and a song came to my mind.

Kaise bataye kyun tujhko chahe yara bata na paye
Baatein dilon ki dekhi jo bakhi aake tujhe samjhayein
Tu jaane naa , tu jaane naa
Milke bhi hum na mile tumse na jaane kyun
Millon ke hai faaslein tumse na jaane kyun
Anchahein hai silsilein tujhse na jaane kyun

Later, I heard raghu telling vrats that dekhle apni dost ko pata nahi kya hogaya hai use thodi der pehle badi hi rudely baat kar rahi thi mujhse.
Haan pata nahi thodi depressed hai.
Kya baat hogi
Usse toh ab mein baat hi nahi karunga, jab tak woh sorry nahi bolegi.

Haan raghu yahi toh mujhe chahiye tha, tab hi toh tumhe bhula ne mein aasani hogi.i said to my self.
Vrats came to me and we started our conversation
Waise maine papa ko kehte hue suna hai ki yeh september 23 ko hum india ke liye nikal rahe hai
U mean after 3 days
Haan papa ka birthday hai na 24 sept ko toh woh use india mein celebrate karenge.
Waise 24 sept ko raghu ka bhi birthday hai na..
Haan
Arey yeh kya baat hui abhi toh mein aayi hun aur tu jaa rahi hai
Main kuch nahi kar sakti..sorry..

Yes guys heres my new character she is my bestest friend in real life and i love her alot. The same is even in this story.pls read and comment pls pls pls

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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
very nice update
continue asap 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
My dear this was wonderful update! πŸ˜ƒ

Tum mein hum hain
Hum mein tum ho
Tum se hum hain
Hum se tum ho
Kismaton se milte hain do dil yahaan

Har kisi ko nahi milta
Yahan pyar zindagi mein 😳

This song brought tears to my eyes...
Meri kuch past memories taza hogayee...
Thanks crystal,continue soon πŸ˜ƒ
Hugs,
Sanju
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
lovely updates ...read all in one go ...cont soon dearπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Hey crystal...
the update was too good...
well antara wants raghu to realize...
ohhh damn agar woh india chali gai toh raghu ka birthday?
Waiting for more...
thansk for the pm...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys sorry for delay but couldnt help school n then home n studies. But heres again my update.
Chapter 5:

I reached home at 4 and sat on my bed. I switched on the tv and watched some simple shows. After some time my dad arrived and informed me that we wont be able to go to india as he has some work here. I was happy from inside but had to show a sad expression. Koi baath nahi gudiya iss baar nahi toh agli baar mera birthday india mein manaa lenge waise u can bake a cake for me this time.said dad. I ran towards my room and thought what gift to buy for raghu i made a list of things but soon remebered that i have to stay away from him. I checked my phone and found 15 messages of raghu. I viewed them but later ignored. I freshened up and had some snacks. I soon started my homework but couldnt concerntrate. I was lost in raghus thoughts when my mom came and asked me kahan kho gayi. Kuch nahi sooch rahi hun ke papa ke birthday mein kya karun i changed the topic. Chal phir shopping chalte hai. Said mom. Every time we went for shopping 2 tops are added in my collections no matter whether shirt or t-shirt. Haan chalo chatle hai is said excitingly. We went to the mall and viewed every shop. And later i found a gift shop. There on the gift shop was a basket with two cute teddy bears hanging . I couldnt stop my self and took my mom to the shop. Iai insisted to but the teddies and thought to gift my dad.dad will be so happy i said to my self. There was also a box with a mug and a small teddy in between. I bought that for raghu and asked my mom to check the other shop for a minute. I told the shopkeeper to write raghu on the mug . We soon left for home and i also bought 2 tops which were short and beautiful. 1 was my dads fav colour and other raghus. I was always crazy about songs and kept listening to new ones every time this time my craze song was mere nishaan. I stwitched the mp3 on and listened to it

Jhuki teri palkon pe miljaaye mujhe panaah
Palke gire aansu wahi reh jaye mere nishaan
Tute dil ki mat kar tu fikar mere humnava
Pyaar du tujhko iss kadar reh jaaye mere nishaan
Mere nishaan
Mere nishaan
Mere nishaan mere nishaan...

I soon went to sleep listening to the song but forgot to wrap the gifts for tommorow. My mom woke me up at 6 in the morning and told me to wish my dad. I ran towards his bed and sat on the other corner. My dad opened his eyes and i was the first person he saw in the morning. Aaj tujhe dekhliya toh sab kuch achaa jayega. My mom handed me the gift and told to to give him. He was soo happy and blessed me. Then i dressed up for school and left with the gift wrapped. As i reached school i thought to give raghu the gift but as i behaved rudely this week i couldnt . I handed the gift to vrats to give it to raghu.
Kyun tu kyun kahi
Baad mein bataungi vrats abhi tu de de na
Baad mein pakka hai
Yes sure
She left and gave raghu the gift he un wrapped it and asked vrats wheather she was the one who gave me this beautiful gift. She said in excitement that it was me. I almost escaped from there. But raghu stoppded me the gavee a tight hug. I know that u r not angry with me u cant be angry with me,whatever i have done i am really sorry for it antara pls forgive me ,i cant afford to loose such a gud friend said raghu.. I almost cried and gave hima a hug back . Even i cant afford to loose u raghu. I just cant stay away from him not at all. I said to myself. After sometime vrats asked me the reason of her anger and i told her everything. She told me not to stay away from raghu and be friendly or else he will think that u used him. I cried so badly and told her that i love him soo much.
Tu fikar mat kar i will handle everything
U go to india first of all we will see after that.
I almost forgot that i had to leave on saturday for india.
I rushed to home and asked my mom when we will be leavinh . Thodi der rukh kar saans le le itni bhi kya jaldi hai abi toh school se aayi hai. Haan lekin batao na i asked curiously. She told me that aftrr 10 days we will return.i freshen up and started my packing. I recieved a message from raghu that he is organizing a party this evening. I couldnt resist to go there and search for the top i bought that day. I told my mom about the party and she allowed me. I matched my earings and shoes and did a simple makeup and left my hair open. I rushed to raghus home at 8 in the evening and found everyone there, even apoorva. Raghu came down and he looked too gud. He was wearing a black and red shirt with jeans. He was looking too gud. He soon cut the cake. I found him heading towards me and i was so happy,but he crossed me and fed apoorva the cake. I was about to cry but stopped my self as vrats was telling me that i would make a wrong impression on others. The next piece was fed to all raghus friends. And later was served to all the others. I felt soo bad and went away from der.

So here is the update and pls comment

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yo!!! You are back finally😊
Very Nyc update..πŸ˜ƒ
Antara itna ready hoke gayi bt raghu usne usey cake b ni diya..
she was hurted by his behaviour..
Antu going to India..
Waiting 4 nxt chapter dear..
Continue asap😳
Edited by jollygrl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Nice update my dear πŸ˜ƒ
Very well written as well πŸ‘
I was wondering ki what's cooking in Raghu's mind?
He fed the cake to everyone except Antara πŸ˜•
Antara ko Bahut bura laga aur mujhey bhi πŸ˜•
Can't wait to read more and find out what happens next
Please continue soon darling πŸ˜ƒ
Love and hugs,
Sanju πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww raghuu ne antara ko cake nahi khilaya...badmash raghu...continue soon yaar...story is getting more excited...
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