SS:MAIN ADHURI JEE RAHI HUN-Mujhe teri zarurat hai teaser pg6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello people this is my first Ss
This ss is really close to my heart because I have written about my love life but iam gonna present it in the form of raghu and antaras story.so the intros for both

ANTARA:
She is a simple girl who lives in Uganda with her parents .she is quite padaku and doesnt believe in love.she is studying in class 8.

RAGHU:
He is a very stylish person lives in Uganda and studies in antaras school.He likes to make friendship with girls and is in the same class

chpter 2 page 2
chapter3 page 2
chapter3 part2 page 3
chapter 4 page 4
chapter 5 page 4
chapter 6 page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I forgot to add raghu is studying in the school since 3 years but antara is new to the school
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congo for new story
thanks for the pm
awesome start
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice start..
do continue..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey crystal πŸ˜ƒ
I know your story πŸ˜‰
Really want to know what happened after πŸ˜ƒ
Nice start darling πŸ‘
Continue soon πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..
Relly nice..
An cristal kise ne kaha tu bakvaas wrighter hai..no u are so beautiful wrighter..
An yore love story..
Updated soon..
Love u..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for the storyπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Beautiful start

Do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey crystal it was very nice...plz continuee...kitne cute lagenge rantara in school uniforms...
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Chapter 2:
Guys now iam gonna right dis from antaras side.

I was really angry on him.i mean that just a sorry for whatever he has said. I just hate him . Soon we will be reaching school and i wont talk to him at all. I was about to leave for the school but raghu stopped me by saying antara ruk jaa bag bahut heavy hai pls mera yeh project apne saath le jaa. I was confused aur bahut saare log hai wahaan unhe kyun nahi bolta main hi kyun.he then continued pls help karde na pls. I just thought to move from ther but my heart stopped me. I went towards the van and held the project. Sab kuch karega lekin sorry nahi bolega..haan kaise bolega ego jo hurt hojayega na i told to my self. Kuch bola he saked while walking towards the class. Every day we reach school really early so theclasses were not yet opened and we had to wait out side. I stood near the window feeling the cool breeze. Just then raghu came near me. Kya hai I said. Kya yaar itni si baat ke liye tu itna gussa kyun hai he said.
*******Flashback********
Raghu mujhe pata chala hai ki tujhe canada jaana bahut pasand hai na. Haan mujhe bahut pasand hai he said. Ohh. Haan mere bhayya bhabhi bhi jaa rahe hai canada he said. Ohh shayad honeymoon ke liye oho bade romantic hai i said. He showed me middle finger. What the heck. Maine sirf ydhi bola.he cut my words and said tu na aise baatein karna band kar mere bhaiyaa bhabhi ke liye got it. I didnt tel aything bad haan. And what do u mean by showing that finger. He the told something bad about my mom & dad. Uuu just go to hell. I said n left.
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Han kuch bhi bologe lekin sorry nahi bologe na. I said and walked away. Kitna battameez hai isse toh mein baat hi nahi karungi. The class door opened and I sat on my seat his seat was in the next row n equal to mine. The teacher was explaining and i was paying attention to it. He threw a paper towards me and was asking sorry by holding him ears. I looked towards the board because the teacher could send me out. Bug he still continued . I looked his side suddenly the teacher shouted antara and raghu out of my class. I got fustruated and walked out of the class. Dekha jo kuch bhi horaha hai tumhari wajah se ho raha hai. Tum agar maaf kar deti toh yeh sab kuch nai hota he said. Lekin mai toh class mein concerntate kar rahi thi kaise kuch keh sakti thi.. lekin aab keh sakte ho jo kehna hai. Antara I am really really sorry for whatever i have said pls mujhe maaf kar de. He had said it for the first time and Mera bhi dil pighal gaya. That time i was didnt have that sort of love fesling for him just a fiendly feeling. Chal maaf kiya tujhe. We both laughed and hugged each other. The teacher shouted what is haplening there?. We both broke the hug and kept quitw but the we laughed

PRECAP: antara comes to know raghes secret

Here i have done it . So read n enjoy. N keep loving.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Crystal madam,it was nice πŸ‘
Raghu Canada aa raha hai? 😳
Aaney do,hum hai yaha sambhal lengay πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
Anyway I loved the update πŸ‘
Please continue soon πŸ˜ƒ
*love*
Sanju πŸ˜ƒ
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