Ek ek word khoobsurat tha ji π
Mujhey toh pasand aaya... π³
Hum bhi jeena seekh rahe hain ji π
Please do write some more π
Der Sara pyaar sirf tumarey liye π
Disha π
Love you so much di for this sweet comment...Hey shivu i m late in commenting sowie thodi busy thi...
The 1st poem raghu ka confession wala...that was mindblowing...loved it so much...pura ddej flash ho gaya ankhon ke samne...N yeh New wali shayari...Jeena toh sikhana hi chahiye...Usdin antara ka dialogue suna..." Zindagi bahut kimti hoti hain chahe woh kisiki bhi hooo"Isiliye isse acche kaam karke sudharni chahiye...galat kaam karke bigadni nahi chahiyeee...
thank you di for liking it
Thanks di...πOriginally posted by: Disha2811
Shivani,the poem was beautiful my dear βοΈ
Ek ek word khoobsurat tha ji π
Mujhey toh pasand aaya... π³
Hum bhi jeena seekh rahe hain ji π
Please do write some more π
Der Sara pyaar sirf tumarey liye π
Disha π
Originally posted by: shivi808
Hey girls!!!
Once again I am here with something new...
Actually SANJU Di has asked me today to write a poem as I was little bit worried about something...
Finally di here I am with this silly thing π
This one is for your one of the masterpiece π
<font size="2">Tassalli Mili dil ko jab jab tera deedaar hua
Ek pal bhi tumsey dur hona humein naagavar Hua
Zindagi mehekney lagi, jab se tu mera yaar Hua
Tumhey muskuratey dekh, dil ka har dard faraar Hua
Khud se bhi zyada, mujhey tujhpey aitbaar Hua
Na kabhi Teri Kisi baar par, mujhey thoda bhi Aitraaz Hua
Zindagi Mein pehli baar mujhey ye anjaana ehsaas Hua
Jab mere dil Ki har dhadkan ne ye kaha Ki mujhey...
TUMSEY PYAAR HUA</font>
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So!!!! How was it????
I hope that you find it OK...
Maarna mat please agar pasand na aaye toπ
I am Waiting...
Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev
Oh my God! Shivi my golu molu this is beautiful! Mwaaah!
Kiya likhti ho yaar! I loved it ... Ayse hii likhti rahiyo π
Wow bacha.. what a wonderful shayari..ππ
Keep posting shayaris like this... ur shayari's are always so soul touching and would love to read them anytime..π
great work...βοΈ
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