DiL Ki BaAt.. ShAyArI Ke SaAtH(@pg 27 on 08/10/2016) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Shivani,the poem was beautiful my dear ⭐️
Ek ek word khoobsurat tha ji πŸ˜ƒ
Mujhey toh pasand aaya... 😳
Hum bhi jeena seekh rahe hain ji πŸ˜ƒ
Please do write some more πŸ˜ƒ
Der Sara pyaar sirf tumarey liye πŸ˜‰
Disha πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Rasika9

Hey shivu i m late in commenting sowie thodi busy thi...

The 1st poem raghu ka confession wala...that was mindblowing...loved it so much...pura ddej flash ho gaya ankhon ke samne...


N yeh New wali shayari...
Jeena toh sikhana hi chahiye...Usdin antara ka dialogue suna..." Zindagi bahut kimti hoti hain chahe woh kisiki bhi hooo"
Isiliye isse acche kaam karke sudharni chahiye...galat kaam karke bigadni nahi chahiyeee...

Love you so much di for this sweet comment...
Rahi baat late reply Ki to KOI NAI...
Honestly speaking l was little bit gussa from you...
Vo kya Hua na pm read show Ho rahey they and reply aaya Ni tha...
I thought aap bhopl gye shivu ko...
So immature girl l am na??
Sorry di..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Ajju15s


Lovely poem..πŸ‘πŸΌ

tnx for pm
Keep writing..πŸ˜ƒ

thank you di for liking it
...and for your valuable comment 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Disha2811

Shivani,the poem was beautiful my dear ⭐️
Ek ek word khoobsurat tha ji πŸ˜ƒ
Mujhey toh pasand aaya... 😳
Hum bhi jeena seekh rahe hain ji πŸ˜ƒ
Please do write some more πŸ˜ƒ
Der Sara pyaar sirf tumarey liye πŸ˜‰
Disha πŸ˜ƒ

Thanks di...πŸ˜ƒ
Mujhey bhi aapka comment bohot pasand aaya...
Love uhh di...



Aur ek choti Si baat di..

my name is SHIVANGI..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
@Sanju di...

unresd on page 11 😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
POEM
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Hey girls!!!...πŸ˜†
I mean pyari sissys... πŸ˜ƒ
Once again I am here with something new...
Actually SANJU Di has asked me today to write a poem as I was little bit worried about something...
Finally di here I am with this silly thing πŸ˜†

This one is for your one of the masterpiece πŸ˜ƒ

Tassalli Mili dil ko jab jab tera deedaar hua
Ek pal bhi tumsey dur hona humein naagavar Hua

Zindagi mehekney lagi, jab se tu mera yaar Hua
Tumhey muskuratey dekh, dil ka har dard faraar Hua

Khud se bhi zyada, mujhey tujhpey aitbaar Hua
Na kabhi Teri Kisi baar par, mujhey thoda bhi Aitraaz Hua

Zindagi Mein pehli baar mujhey ye anjaana ehsaas Hua
Jab mere dil Ki har dhadkan ne ye kaha Ki mujhey...


TUMSEY PYAAR HUA



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So!!!! How was it????
I hope that you find it OK...

Maarna mat please agar pasand na aaye toπŸ˜•

I am Waiting...
Edited by shivi808 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: shivi808

Hey girls!!!
Once again I am here with something new...
Actually SANJU Di has asked me today to write a poem as I was little bit worried about something...
Finally di here I am with this silly thing πŸ˜†

This one is for your one of the masterpiece πŸ˜ƒ

<font size="2">Tassalli Mili dil ko jab jab tera deedaar hua
Ek pal bhi tumsey dur hona humein naagavar Hua

Zindagi mehekney lagi, jab se tu mera yaar Hua
Tumhey muskuratey dekh, dil ka har dard faraar Hua

Khud se bhi zyada, mujhey tujhpey aitbaar Hua
Na kabhi Teri Kisi baar par, mujhey thoda bhi Aitraaz Hua

Zindagi Mein pehli baar mujhey ye anjaana ehsaas Hua
Jab mere dil Ki har dhadkan ne ye kaha Ki mujhey...


TUMSEY PYAAR HUA
</font>


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So!!!! How was it????
I hope that you find it OK...

Maarna mat please agar pasand na aaye toπŸ˜•

I am Waiting...


Oh my God! Shivi my golu molu this is beautiful! Mwaaah!
Kiya likhti ho yaar! I loved it ... Ayse hii likhti rahiyo πŸ˜†
Edited by Sanju4Rajeev - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev


Oh my God! Shivi my golu molu this is beautiful! Mwaaah!
Kiya likhti ho yaar! I loved it ... Ayse hii likhti rahiyo πŸ˜†



Awww... Thank you so much di...😊
And you know what now mumma is fine...
That was a normal fever...

Love u a lot di... 😳
Infinite Mwwaaahhh!!!!!! πŸ˜† 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Wow bacha.. what a wonderful shayari..πŸ‘πŸ‘
Keep posting syarai's like this... ur sayari's are always so soulk touching and would love to read them anytime..πŸ˜›

great work...⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: ifians

Wow bacha.. what a wonderful shayari..πŸ‘πŸ‘
Keep posting shayaris like this... ur shayari's are always so soul touching and would love to read them anytime..πŸ˜›

great work...⭐️



Thank you so much di... 😳
Vo kya h na tonight mausam is awesome πŸ˜†
To bass likh dala... πŸ˜ƒ
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