DiL Ki BaAt.. ShAyArI Ke SaAtH(@pg 27 on 08/10/2016) - Page 2

Ajesha

@Ajju15s

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Nice shayri 😊

Tnx for pm.

Bara SiFarshi tha Na Unka Ka Tu,
Ae DiL..

Ab Mare Seeny Main Muh Chupa K Rota Kyu
Hai ???

Edited by Ajju15s - 9 years ago

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MannMeRamBasale

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

i'm a huge fan of shayari and poetry.. both hindi and Urdu..

worst thing i feel is that i can't write one..

so i'm glad to see some one writing shayaris on DDEJ forum...

nazm, ghazal, everything.. it really starts making u feel differently about the person u love...

ghazal aur shayari mohabbat sikhati hai...

chot khayi ho to toote dil ke saath jeena sikhati hai...

hausanla bakshati hai..'uske' aaj bhi paas hone ka...

lakeeron mein uska aks nahi..gam nahi..

par inki badaulat...

meri diary ke panno mein uski khusboo ta-umr qaid hai..

pata nahi log mohabbat ko kyun dosh dete hai..

us se jyada masoom to kuchh bhi nahi...

asal to "khayal" hote hai.. jo neend ko awara banate hai...

^ i know it was worse than anything.. and honestly it wasn't even an attempt to write something.. just a thought...!

so u can simply ignore.. please don't laugh after reading this...

Edited by itsokaysammy - 9 years ago

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Shivangi

@shivi808

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

😲 😲
Akki di.. main kya gadhi hu jo itni AWSME Lines ko padhne ke baad hasungi..
Agar ye lines according to u WORST hai to i am going to hide my face in a corner.. bcz main samajh skti hu k meri shayari to definitely MoRe ThAn WoRsT hai..

Jst kidding di.. 😆 Itna to mast likha hai aapney
dnt u dare to say dat again k aap a66a ni likhtey..
Keep writing di.. love uh.. muaaahh!!! 😳 😳

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MannMeRamBasale

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: jollygrl
😲 😲
Akki di.. main kya gadhi hu jo itni AWSME Lines ko padhne ke baad hasungi..
Agar ye lines according to u WORST hai to i am going to hide my face in a corner.. bcz main samajh skti hu k meri shayari to definitely MoRe ThAn WoRsT hai..

Jst kidding di.. 😆 Itna to mast likha hai aapney
dnt u dare to say dat again k aap a66a ni likhtey..
Keep writing di.. love uh.. muaaahh!!! 😳 😳

OMGGG!!! shivu..

thank u so much yaar...

i was hell nervous when i posted that in ur thread..

i thought u won't like it..

it was just a random thought.. didn't try to write it in shayari form.. that's why no rhyme...

and u're an awesome shayar buddy..

loved ur work..please don't compare that with my sadu initiatives..

u're far better than mine.. 😊

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Shivangi

@shivi808

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Maanogey ni na aap.. 😡 😡 gussa dila re ho mje..
by saying dat ur shayari is SADU..
Fine ye lo apki shayari SADU hai.. bcz it is...

S- Speechless
A- Awesome
D- Dhaasu
U- Unique

I hope ke ab aap ko khushi mil gyi hogi 😉 😉

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Nethravathi Jagadish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: jollygrl

kon chala gya di??😔

Mera best friend Aarav. Last December he died

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Nethravathi Jagadish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: RANTARA.akya

Netu di sach kahu jo apne hote hai..WO kabhi hum se door nahi jaa te.. 😭

Haan janeman bilkul sach kaha tune. Apne chaahe jitna bhi door kyu na ho vo humesha hamaare dil ke paas rehte hain

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Shivangi

@shivi808

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: jollygrl
Mera best friend Aarav. Last December he died

Oh!! i am sorry di..
Di vo kahin ni gye hain ap jb b unhe yaad karoge na to vo apke pas hi milenge apko
q k apke dil me hain aur jo dil mein hotey hain vo to kahin jatey hi nahi..
haina..

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Nethravathi Jagadish

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: jollygrl

Oh!! i am sorry di..
Di vo kahin ni gye hain ap jb b unhe yaad karoge na to vo apke pas hi milenge apko
q k apke dil me hain aur jo dil mein hotey hain vo to kahin jatey hi nahi..
haina..

sach kaha tune vo kahi jaahi nahi sakta. Pyaar jo karta tha mujhse

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Shivangi

@shivi808

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: RANTARA.akya
Hello..
Shivi..
Love u..

Hi..
love u too yaraa 😳

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