RaNtara FF:- Zindagi... Chapter No 6-Page #11 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: rima4ever

thanks for the pm
marvelous update
continue soon


Thank u so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
great update di... 😊

raghu to antu ko dkhtey hi kahin kho jata h πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

mandir se mje DDEJ ke mandir waley scene ki yaad aa gyi... kya scene tha 😳😳
Precap seems to be interesting

continue soon
i am waiting didu😳 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
wonderful update haya darling...😊
My fav was the mandir scene... jahan antu jati hain.. raghu magnet ki tarah khinch kee wahan chali ati hain...πŸ˜†
Antu koo jense aur t mein dkeh kar raghu too gaya kaam se...πŸ˜†

Preca seems interesting... cont soon.😳...
sorry for the late dear... so much pressure now a days
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
i love whenever raghu goes behind antu...he is madly in love with her...superb update haya...plz keep writing
...precap is interesting... jungle mein mangal...hehe...update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Hello..
Hayu ji..
I m waiting..
Updated soon.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: ifians

wonderful update haya darling...😊
My fav was the mandir scene... jahan antu jati hain.. raghu magnet ki tarah khinch kee wahan chali ati hain...πŸ˜†
Antu koo jense aur t mein dkeh kar raghu too gaya kaam se...πŸ˜†

Preca seems interesting... cont soon.😳...
sorry for the late dear... so much pressure now a days

Thank u so much ria...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Rasika9

i love whenever raghu goes behind antu...he is madly in love with her...superb update haya...plz keep writing

...precap is interesting... jungle mein mangal...hehe...update soon

Rasika ji thank u so much...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: RANTARA.akya

Hello..
Hayu ji..
I m waiting..
Updated soon.. 😳

yasvi update karoon gin thdi din tak...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

People I m really sorry the idea of the jungle is not quite coming right... So forget the Precap lets move on... Thanks...

This Update is for my cute little sister Shivi...

Chapter 6:-
The holidays were going smooth... Antara was enjoying great with Raghu 's family. Raghu was falling more in love with Antara. They went hunting which went fine. The holidays were coming to an end.
It was the last dinner for the children at home. They were supposed to return the next morning. Raghu and Antara had grew a good friendship in the holidays. MachMach was busy in eating. Raghu was stealing glances of Antara. Whereas rasika was blubbering on the table. Antara stood up and held her soft drink glass high and rang the glass with a spoon..
Rasika:- "Antara would like to make a toast.."
Antara:- "I really had a great family time with all of u here... I have no words how to describe the feeling.. I mean u gave an orphan like me a status of daughter ... Main kabhi yeh Bohol nhn sakti... Thank u rasika mujhay yahan la kar itna acha feel karwanay Kay liye..."
Rasika:- "aww thank u and welcome..."
Antara:- "let's drink and pray that no evil eye can come upon the MJ Ana rani Maa..."
They all drank.. Enjoyed... After that all went to there rooms. Antara was not able to sleep as she was sad. She heard sound coming from the garden. As she peeped she saw Raghu sitting.. She got up and went down.
Antara:- "main baith sakti hoon...?"
Raghu:- "ji sure q nhn..."
He moved and gave Antara some space to sit..
Antara:- "Kia hua ap soyai nhn.."
Raghu:- "mujhay neend nhn arahi thi"
Antara:- "sahi..."
Raghu:- "toh kaisa laga apko yahan aa kar.?"
Antara:- "yahan aa kar it was very good. Matlab I never had a family... All I had was mother par now I have a whole family. Sab acha lagta hai... Yeh vacations meri best thi.."
Raghu saw she was actually happy. Her voice had a relief which gave happiness to him.
Raghu:- "thank u.."
Antara who was looking at the stars got confused.
Antara:- "thank u kis liye?"
Raghu:- "woh apnay meri family ko apna bola toh acha laga.."
Antara smiled a bit lowering her face and said.
Antara:- "thank u toh ap ka,MJ ,Rani Maa aur rasika ka jinho ne mujhay apna mana..."
Raghu gave a small smile.
Raghu:- "toh final year Kay bad Kia karay gin ap?"
Antara:- "well abhi toh pura aik saal hai.. Us kay baad mother kehti hain keh life gives you surprises.."
Raghu:- "toh what about doing a job here... I mean we have a lot of vacancy... And is tarah ap is family Kay pass bhi rahay gin..."
Antara:- "mujhay toh khushi hogi Baki Bhagwan jantay hain.."
Raghu:- "sahi.."
Their talk was intruppted by a cough. As they turned they saw rasika standing.
Raghu:- "ji princess ap yahan?"
Antara let out a small smile.
Rasika saw that how close and comfortable they were. Rasika was happy for them.
Rasika:- "ap Dono yahan Kia kar rahay hai ???"
"Woh mujhay neend nhn arahi thi..."
RaNtara said together...
Rasika let out a laughter.
Rasika:- "ap Dono toh bohat achay dost ban gayai hain.."
Saying this rasika came and pushed Antara more towards Raghu. With that RaNtara hands touched. A shiver ran through raghu's spine. Antara felt a bit uneasy. Raghu turned his face. Unable to sleep MachMach called Raghu. He picked up.
Raghu:- "haan Bhai Kia hua?"
MachMach:- "yaar mujhay neend nhn arahi main palace ajaon!?"
Raghu:- "haan Aja hum teeno bhi jag rahay hain..."
MachMach:- "hum teeno?"
Raghu:- "main Antara aur Rasika".
MachMach:- "Ohhh toh tabhi ap janab itnay khush q hain... Antara BHABHI jo jaag rahi!"
Raghu felt hundreds of butterflies in his belly..hearing Antara as MachMach's BHABHI he felt more happy.
Raghu:- "toh tu aaja ab!"
MachMach:- "ok Bhai see u in 15 mints..."
Raghu came and sat again. Antara and rasika were talking. After some time MachMach car came. Raghu got up and looked from the terrace.
Raghu:- "main aya.."
With that Raghu went down.
Rasika:- "yeh Bhai kahan gayai.?"
Antara:- "pata nhn jahan bhi gayai jaldi thi..."
After some time MachMach and Raghu came.
Rasika:- "ohh acha toh yeh baat hai his highness machinder Singh phadaray hain.."
MachMach:- "and ap her highness itni raat ko Kia kar rahi hain? Apko toh is waqt apni beauty sleep mein busy Hona chahyai..."
Rasika got up and ran after MachMach.
Rasika:- "machinder Kay bachay idhar ayai ap! Ap bhool gayai bachpan mein kitni mar Piti thi.."
MachMach was running. He hid behind Raghu.
Raghu:- "oye Kia kar rahay ho?? Baray ho jao."
Antara was laughing hard.
Suddenly rani Maa heard all the voices.
She came down and saw the kids in garden. She smiled.
Rani Maa:- "Akhri raat hai lagay rehnay do.."
She said in heart.She went back again.
Raghu looked at Antara. Antara was laughing hard and her eyes shining. Suddenly MachMach ran inside the penthouse. Rasika also ran behind her. As Rasika entered she saw MachMach was nowhere.
Rasika:- "ab yeh machu kahan gaya..!?"
Suddenly rasika stepped on something and she tripped. A small scream escaped her lips. She was about to fall when someone held her left hand tightly. As she felt a pull and banged into a solid chest.
MachMach was lost in rasika. MachMach:- "lagi toh nhn?"
Rasika nodded in a no. On the other hand Raghu was lost in antara. Antara was about to get up when she tipped her sandal and landed straight in raghu's arm.
RaNtara's eyes met. Raghu was lost in her hazels while those two black orbs had a lot to be said. A cold breeze blew and antata's hair flew a little. A strand of hair was covering her face. Raghu slowly moved the strand of hair from her face. Antara winced in pain. Suddenly Raghu realized. He made her sit on the bench and sat below. Rasika and MachMach who were lost in each other suddenly heard raghu's voice.
Raghu:- "rasika MachMach kahan hain ap Dono Antara is hurt!"
He was panicking . Rasika came out of trance and gave a smile. She ran directly towards Antara. MachMach had a smile. Rasika's scent was all over him. He came out and saw Raghu is tensed.
MachMach:- "Raghu Bhai Kia hua?"
Raghu:- "Bhai Doctor ko phone kar Antara Kay pair mein mooch(strain) ai hai.."
Antara:- "nhn machinder I am fine..."
MachMach saw that Raghu was tensed for nothing. Antara stood up and sat again. Suddenly rasika came with the spirit spray.
Rasika:- "Bhai main yeh spray Lai hoon Antara ko laga do she will be fine in no time.."
Raghu took it from her hand and shook it well and sprayed it on her foot. Antara felt a bit of burning at first. She closed her eyes and winced in pain.. Raghu blew her foot for a while. That gave Antara a bit relief. Rasika and MachMach were looking at each other. They were shocked at raghu's behavior.
Raghu:- "Antara ko andar lay jao aur meds day kar sola do.."
Rasika nodded in a yes and took Antara. MachMach came and put his hand on Raghu..
MachMach:- "tu fikr mat kar woh theek hai..
Raghu nodded.
MachMach:- "chal main chalta hoon."
Saying this MachMach left.
Rasika brought Antara to her room.
Rasika:- "Antara yahan baitho main meds lay kar ati hoon".
Antara:- "aray I am for tum aur Raghu fazool mein fikr kar rahay ho!"
Rasika who was lost thinking about the incident that took place just few mints ago. Antara was looking at her.

Antara:- "rasika are u fine..."
Rasika who was so lost in the moment was brought back Antara...Rasika:- "kuch kaha apnay.."
Antara:- "main ne kaha keh ap log fuzool stress lay rahay ho... "
Rasika:- "aray tnsn q na lay ap humari best friend hain..."
Antara:- "acha g... Chaliye abhi sojatay hain subah uth kar jana hai na..."
Rasika:- "haan g bilkul..."

Both went to bed... Bur today it was a sleepless night... Antara was thinking of Raghu... How his eyes shined... Whereas Rasika never understood what was going on in her heart...

MachMach reached his place and went to bed... He was lying down and was thinking of rasika and the moment that took place between them... He had a smile on his lips.. but the next moment his smile vanished as he thought that he is his friend's no best friends sister's...

Raghu was restless as he knew that after tomorrow they will never be this close... He was still able to smell her scent in the air... He was lying down on his bed. The four of them were unable to sleep.. Soon Antara realized that she shouldn't be thinking of all this as she is an orphan and Raghu was a heir to a throne... soon she dozed off... Rasika dozed off in thinking all that... Raghu never slept as he was so lost... MachMach was all twisted that whether he should achieve his love by affecting his friendship OR should let her go for his Best friend...

Precap:-
The Final Year..
Antara disappeared... Update Done...
Do Read, Like and Comment...
Sorry for the short Update...
Regards,
Haya.

Edited by hayakhan5 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Agar update aa rahi h to apna bhi RESS 😎

UNRESD...

Awww... Di this update is for me!!!! πŸ˜ƒ

Ye big wali hug for you didu...πŸ€—

Thank you, Thank you di... Infinite times😳


VeRy VeRy VeRy BEAUTIFUL update Di... πŸ‘

Main to kho hi gayi ismein

Do do couples ka romance... 😳 Wow!!!

Raghu kitna pyaar se cutely baat krta hai Antu se..
Specially that
AAP...
Ye to mujhey YHA Ki yaad dila Diya... 😳

Chaarin ko neend Ni aayi to chal padey masti krney terrace par...

MM referred BHAABHI to Antu πŸ˜‰
Aur ye sunkar humarey Raghu ji hue kuch laal aur phoota Mann Mein Laddoo☺️ πŸ˜†

Kyaa!!! Ye last din tha... 😲
Koi Ni full masti Kar rahein sab...

Masti krtey hue Antu ko chot lag gyi...
And humarey Raghu Ki saans atak gayi... πŸ˜‰

Aww... He cares for her so much... 😳
Aur at the end...


Saari saari raat Soye na hum... πŸ˜†

Kuch bhi kaho di mazaa aa gya mujhey to
I totally enjoyed the update...

Par ye precap Mein kya Ho gya?? 😲
Update asap di...
I can't wait... πŸ˜ƒ

And once again this is for your best update di...
⭐️

Love uhh so much di...
Mwwwaaahhh!!!!!!!
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Edited by shivi808 - 9 years ago
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