RaNtara FF:- Zindagi... Chapter No 6-Page #11 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Rasika9

hey haya i was missing ur updates...

superb update tha...antu kitne beautiful lagagi dress mein...but bahut conscious ho gayee hain...keep writing dear...

Thank u so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Wow..
So beautiful..
Raghu jan ta hai..antra need him..see was so alone..Mrs Nike an mr Nike was so cute..an raghu antu ko dekh raha hai..
I have no words..words was so nothing..feeling was more beautiful..
Dear..
I want to make banner for u..for this story..
Love u..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: RANTARA.akya

Wow..
So beautiful..
Raghu jan ta hai..antra need him..see was so alone..Mrs Nike an mr Nike was so cute..an raghu antu ko dekh raha hai..
I have no words..words was so nothing..feeling was more beautiful..
Dear..
I want to make banner for u..for this story..
Love u..


Thank U So Much Yashvi..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
such a fantastic update.. i lovd dat when Raghu said..-dekhna tu isko sab dunga main.. such a cutiee he is.. update soon.. i m waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: jollygrl

such a fantastic update.. i lovd dat when Raghu said..-dekhna tu isko sab dunga main.. such a cutiee he is.. update soon.. i m waiting


Thank u so much shivu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Chapter No 4:-
Raghu was all ready in his room. He wore a black white shirt a black pant and a black half vest. He was looking dashingly hot in his dinner attire. Ram Singh who was an old servant to their family came.
Ram Singh:- "hukum dinner ready Aur ap logon ko baday hukum bula rahay hain..."
Raghu:- "ji ram kaka hum arahay hain ap chaliye.."
MachMach:- "chalein?"
Raghu:- "Haan Chalo i m ready.."
As raghu and MachMach came out they met mrs. Naik on the day.
Raghu:- "Maa chaliye khana tayar hain papa wait kar rahay hain.."
Mrs. Naik:- "Haan beta hum bhi rasika and Antara ko yehi batanay ayai thay.."
MachMach was already half way down and raghu came along with mrs. Naik.
Mr. Naik, mr and mrs. Naik was standing in the hall talking. Raghu joined all.
Mr. Naik:- "ao ao beta hum kia soch rahay thay keh kal Ya parso tak shikaar ko chalein Sab."
Raghu:- "papa ofcourse q Nhn..."
MachMach:- "Haan g auncle kafi tym baad maza ayai ga.."
Mrs. Naik:- "phir ayai chaliye dinner table par tab tak rasika Aur Antara nechay ajayai gin"
They were moving towards the dinner room when they heard the girls talking and coming. MachMach turned and froze where he was. Raghu saw his expression.
Raghu:- "Maa ap agay jayai hum atay hain.."
Mrs. Naik:- "theek hai beta.."
Raghu came towards him and was about to tap his shoulder when he saw him looking up at rasika. Rasika was shouting standing on the first stair.
Rasika:- "Antara ajao ab sharmao mat..."
Suddenly his eyes fell upon Antara who was standing behind the big curtain. MachMach was all lost in his rasika. She was looking like an angel to her. Rasika went up and took antara's hand out. Raghu saw her and was all lost in her. His heart skipped a lot of beats together. She was looking like a beautiful maharani.. He was falling for her. Antara saw him staring from upstairs. She lowered her gaze and came down.
Both of the boys were lost in their own dreamland. MachMach was busy admiring rasika where as raghu was lost in Antara.
Rasika:- "aray kia hua ap dono ko kahan gum ho?"
She came and said. MachMach came back to his senses but raghu was still lost. Antara tightly held Rasika's hand and shook it. Rasika looked at her and Antara gestured towards her brother. Rasika looked at him. He had a small smile and was lost in Antara. The beautiful royal dress made her look more of a princess. He had a beautiful smile on his face. Antara was going shy with the increasing time. Rasika was looking at his brother who was so busy that he had no idea where he was and what was going around of him. When MachMach saw the girls and raghu's condition he hitted raghu with his elbow.
Raghu:- "MachMach please na hi ap mujhay college mein Sahi say dekhnay detay hain na yahan.. Disturb may kijiye.."
MachMach:- "hukum disturb toh hum apko na kartay lekin apki bhn ap kay samne hain stairs par Nhn toh Plz zara.."
Hearing this he realized that Antara and rasika were standing right infront of him. Raghu came back to senses and was about to leave when rasika started to laugh.
Rasika:- "Kaha tha na Antara aj Bhagwan bachayai Bhai ko ".
Antara blushed while raghu got embarrassed. He kept his hands inside his pocket and left for the dining room. MachMach stopped to see Rasika a few moments. He loved the way her eyes shined when she laughed. After a while MachMach also left. Antara stopped rasika.
Antara:- "kia rasika ap bhi ? Woh toh Bas waise hi kuch soch rahay hoon gain ? Us tarah toh MachMach bhi stop mar detay hain apko dekh kar..."
Rasika stopped at the same moment Antara said this.
Rasika:- "Sachi... Magar madam woh humaray sirf dost hain us say Zayada woh sochtay bhi Nhn..."
Antara:- "woh toh waqt batati ga ab chalein warna aunty gusa karein gin.."
Rasika:- "Haan chalo.."
With that the girls entered the dining room.
Mr. Naik:- "agai princesses "
As he addressed Antara a princesses she stopped for a few moments. Rasika heard and looked at Antara. She took her hand and assured it's ok. Antara smiled weakly. Raghu was watching all this.
Both the girls went and took their respected place. Antara sat next to rasika. Rasika was sitting opposite to raghu. Raghu was looking at Antara. Mrs. Naik ordered the chef to bring the food.
Mrs. Naik:- "Pehlay starters mein MachMach ka fav cream soup serve karein gain phir main menu main Antara ka favouratie palak paneer raghu ka favouratie rajma.. Maharaj ka favouratie fried rice, mr. And mrs. Singh ka favouratie ladyfinger and in the end mera and rasika ka favouratie dessert kher kulfi.. I hope apko acha lagay ga."
Antara's head was spinning to so many dishes. Raghu, MachMach and rasika got happy.
The food was served. Antara was a well behaved girl. She slowly sipped her soup. After that she tried all the dishes and ate calmy. Raghu was stealing glances of her. As the dessert was serve all ate. After that the mothers went to the kitchen to look after. The fathers to the study room to discuss. Rasika took Antara to the back garden where Antara felt happy. It was an old traditional space where peacocks were left open. On one side there was a beautiful fountain. The moon was full and shining brightly. Antara felt extremely good. The girls were sitting next to the fountain.
Antara:- "thank u rasika."
Rasika:- "thank u kis liye?"
Antara:- "mujhay yahan la kar family say milwanay kay liye and acha feel karwanay kay liye..."
Rasika:- "aray Nhn aisi koi baat Nhn.."
Suddenly raghu entered with MachMach and went into a small penthouse in the same garden.
Rasika:- "Bhai penthouse q ha rahay?"
Antara:- "q wahan jana mana hai.."
Rasika:- "aray Nhn wahan Sab guns waigara rakhtay hain lock karkay.. I think they planning to go on a hunt.. Chalo pochtay hain.."
She took Antara to the penthouse. As they entered raghu was looking at a new riffle his father bought. MachMach was about to start on his gun.
Rasika:- "Bhai kal shikar ka program hai kia?"
Raghu:- "Haan mini picnic Aur shikar.."
Rasika:- "yay Antara bohat maza ata hai Bhai log shikar kheltay hain Aur hum Sab enjoy kartay hain.."
Hearing antara's name he turned who was looking at guns. There were a variety of guns which Antara knew. She didn't knew how but she knew.
Antara:- "u have good collection.. Is this .33 mm gun.. Main ne movies mein dekhi hai Yeh..."
Raghu saw her intrest and said.
Raghu:- "exactly that's .33mm pistol..."
Antara was looking when rasika held her hand.
Rasika:- "chali Antara kal ki tayari karni hai.. I will tell u chalo.."
Antara and rasika left.
MachMach:- "manna paray ga hukum apki choice ko apka Sab pasand hai .."
Raghu gave a small smile and came back to the riffle.
MachMach;- "hukum kal woh sath chalein gin socha hai kuch kaisay rokein gain khud ko.. Matlab wahan aunty auncle mom dad Sab hoon gain."
Raghu:- "pata Nhn yaar kuch toh karun ga.."
With that he left a sigh as he knew that it would be very difficult to control himself tomorrow.
The girls went to the room and came to Rasika's cupboard.
Rasika:- "hum usually jab picnic jatay hain toh aik pant shirt Aur hat letay hain same karein gain. Theek hai.."
Antara:- "ok theek hai jaise apko Sahi lagay.."
She took out two pants.. And two hats. Antara opened her bag and took a shirt. They settled everything and went to sleep.. Antara was happy with all this family life as she always wanted a family. She was sleepless of the picnic tomorrow.

Precap:-
A beautiful hunt and a picnic with a slight twist..

Update done..
I m ready for all chappals, tamatar...
Do Read, Like and Comment...
Regards,
Haya.
Edited by hayakhan5 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
This is for u hayu..
Rantara..hayee..before I read this update..I want to tell something for rantara..
Kab ye pal ne gustakhiyaan ki..aur dill main lamhe kuch khaas aa gye..
Sazishe ki is lamhe ne aur hum pass aa gye..
Edited by RANTARA.akya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
nice update😊

raghu to antu ko dkhte hi pahaunch gya apni LA..LALA..LA..LA land meinπŸ˜†πŸ˜† ab antu mdm hain hi itni pyari k kya karein..

plans for hunting.. wow!! bht maza aney wala h..πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

continue soon & thanks for pm
love u di...😳😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: RANTARA.akya

This is for u hayu..
Rantara..hayee..before I read this update..I want to tell something for rantara..
Kab ye pal ne gustakhiyaan ki..aur dill main lamhe kuch khaas aa gye..
Sazishe ki is lamhe ne aur hum pass aa gye..


Wah Wah...
Bohat zabardast tha..
Thank u so much yashvi janeman...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: jollygrl

nice update😊

raghu to antu ko dkhte hi pahaunch gya apni LA..LALA..LA..LA land meinπŸ˜†πŸ˜† ab antu mdm hain hi itni pyari k kya karein..

plans for hunting.. wow!! bht maza aney wala h..πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

continue soon & thanks for pm
love u di...😳😳😳


Thank u so much shivu..
Ur comment revealed me a bit...
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