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Originally posted by: honeybees22

Yayy i finally read it
i saved it for last hehe

and i eagerly wait for ur comments.. 😳

seriously akki r u a professional writer.. ? i seriously doubt you being a normal writer
this story is soo like a magnet.. i feel like a little nail stuck badly to it never wanting to come off
this update was just.. urghh i dont have any words.. running out of them

Awww... thank u so much love.. i'm so glad u like my work.. means a lot to me...

antus first KW awww she is so happy
ahem ahem raghu slept and antu was about to kiss him hehe😳 antu darling ye kya horaha hai

yep! she couldn't control this time.. Raghu has done that so many times.. 😆

raghu cheater.. he was awake!😲 and caught her red handed..

lol..

the chase beings...
they seriously behave like kids most of them time🤣
head and shoulder shoulder.. amazing part.. so cute and magical hehe.. dreamy mode

yeah! i like that thing between them... sometimes when they forget all their tensions n behave like real friends...

raghu never leaves a chance to tease her does he...😉

never!!!

actually, if u see in most of my stories, Raghu have been very romantic and fun loving guy..

main reason is that in DDEJ we found him very rough tough.. we got many romantic scenes.. but i always to see some light moments.. so i try to portray them in my stories..

yeah antu why wait til he sleeps.. waise he kiss kar liya kar na.. 😳
raghu thora haso nai to antu jo silent hai violent hojayege🤣

u're right.. he needs a lesson.. let me think about it..

he should get a proper scold from her..

the blouse turned out to be ahem ahem small
kya baat hai yaar.. bilkul sahi choice hai raghu ke family ka😳👍🏼

thank u dear.. 😳

i was expecting this.. antu cant close her dori.. this is famous in every single story on this forum haha😆

LOL... this was the most funny comment i ever got.. pure scene ki band baj gayi..LOL...

kya yaar antu kise favor manga..
i knew this was going to happen for sure.. these naughty kids uff

Aw! i had to bring him in some how.. i had 3 ideas to bring him in front of her.. then i finally wrote this one..

bathroom scene is pretty common..so.. 😳

raghu walked in and FREEZE.. bilkul snowman with a cherry in his mouth ban gaya hahah🤣

I literally spent so much time if i should really include this cherry scene or not..😆

but i thought it will not be a bad idea.. afterall raghu waise bhi kuchh na kuchh khata hi rahta hai hamesha..

wanted to hold her in ur arms han raghu?? 🤔🤣 kya yaar he cant even hold his wife in his arms lolzz
control your desires until confession raghu niyan hai to sayipa hogajyega.. hanky panky thoughts abhi piche rakho☺️

correct!! already ek baar syapa ho gaya.. aur mere ff ki band baj gayi thi.. mujhe samajh ni aa raha tha ab sulah kaise karau..

by chance idea aaya.. aur update ban gayi...ab koi hanky panky ho gayi to main story kaise sambhalungi...😆

antu dekhe biina he blabbers shuru.. sab raghu ka affect hai
bechaera raghu.. already froxen tha..
abhi antu ke back is attracting him even more.. i pity him yaar😳

me too..lol...

i really want to torture him for this.. bahul rulaya hai usne antara ko..

usko itni jaldi ni milegi wo..

abhi sari desires apne pet mein daba k rakhna raghu baba...

dont want to go infront of raghu like this ahem ahem kya respect hai yaar😲😳

thank you.. 😳

he thought he looked delicious.. is antu food?😕 ohh i get raghus feelings..☺️ i know everything know hehe

sowie my mind works over time😳

cherry haath mein hogi aur samne antara.. to sab delicious hi lagega...😉

ahem ahem shirtless raghu.. i choked on whatever i was eating cough cough now
exposed antu and shirtless raghu.. just to hawttt to handle akki ji

control Hina ji.. 😆

only in ur updates something like this happens hayee mei maar java🤢🤣
raghu ko craving horaha tha antu ka hayla mei bigar jaoge parte parte😳 but i dont mind😉
dream come true for me.. raghu tied her dori.. and removed her hair from her shoulder omg highlight of the update.. its famous everywhere hehe

thanks a lot dear... may ur all dreams come true.. 😆

he kissed her cheeks... maar dala akki ji.. ye tune kya kiya.. a song phrase lolzz
mind the pose.. why ji there wasnt anything wrong with it hehe

actually she was sitting on chair.. n in my scene she was wearing her sandals.. that's why..

i loved that dress ekks antu must look beautiful in it
tab he to raghu bhi pagal horaha tha with desires and holding thoughts hayee
pyar ladane.. hayee these kids.. raghu was getting fed up as well
haha becheri antu.. lolzz rooted to her seat
raghu ne apna kam kardia.. out of the car🤣🤣
slap nai kiya lolzz thank god warna sab darr jate hehe

yes, that scene was added at last minute to make this ending light..

n so readers will also get an idea how actually raghu came in his room..

i just loved loved loved loved loved loved this update sooo much
it had everything.. funny parts, romance, cuteness
Akkilicious update this was hehe

@Bold..Wowww!!! I am gonna save this comment for ever..it's for the first time some one titled an update on my name.. thank u so much Hina...<3

i have a little doubt... i think raghu is also fasting for her.. or my brain is going extra over time hehe

already answered it.. he is a big wala DUSHT!!

he din't keep any fast..

loved it
pls cont asap and i'll do even more longer comments..
sowie for the time taken to type this.. i'm kinda lazy hehe😳