RANTARA - DO DIL BANDHE EK DORI SE (DISCONTINED)

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DO DIL BANDHE EK DORI SE

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ROHAN AND SANJU. Meri taraf se ek chota sa, pyaara sa taufa aap dono ke liye. May God bless u with lots of happiness n I love u very much. Enjoy the story.

CHAPTER 1

This story starts with Raghu being tortured in the police station

Inspector Satya: Iss baar bas haath pair thod raha hoon, phir kabhi bhi mere honewaali biwi ke aas paas bhi nazar aaya naa tho seedha upar bhej doonga. Be careful.

Raghu's mother comes to the police station & bails him out.

Raghu: Maa aap yaha kyu aayi? Papa akele honge ghar pe upar se unki tabiyat bhi teek nahi hain. Aap ghar chaliye main aata hoon.

Mrs.Naik: Kaha jaa raha hain tu phir se uss ladki ke pass jisne tumhaare saath pyaar ka naatak kiya aur ab tumhe chodkar kisi aur ke saath shaadi kar rahi hain. Tu kab samjega Raghu. Usne apne zindagi se tujhe hamesha hamesha ke liye nikhaal chuki hain. Tu kyu uski zindagi main waapas jaana chahtha hain.

Raghu: Maa main jaanna chahtha hoon ki usse mujhe chodna hi tha tho mujhse pyaar kyu kiya? Aaj main usse apne saare sawaalo ka javaab lekar hi ghar lautoonga. Aap jaahiye

Mrs.Naik: Tujhe meri kasam Raghu. Mujhse waad kar ki phir kabhi tu usse nahi milega. Aur phir bhi tu jaana chahtha hain tho teri marzi.

Raghu saw tears in his mother's eyes. He hugged her & said Maa mere life main aapki aur papa ki khushi sabse zyaada maaine raktha hain. Aap jaisa kahengi waisa hi hoga maa. Main Pooja se kabhi nahi miloonga. Aap rohiye matt maa. Aapki aankhon main aasoo nahi dekh saktha main. Chaliye ghar chalthe hain.

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Antara: Ye Poorab phone kyu nahi utaa raha hain. Ek hafta hogaya iska koi ataa patha nahi. Upar se papa ka torture. Oh god help me.

Mr.Kaul: Antara beta mujhe tumse baat karni hain.

Antara: Main jaanti hoon papa ki aap mujhse kya baat karna chahte hain. Aur aap ye bhi jaanthe hain ki mera decision kya hoga.

Mr.Kaul: Bahut hogaya Antara. Ab main tumhaari ek bhi baat nahi sunoonga. Tumhe meri baat manna padega.

Antara: Bachpan se yehi tho hota aaraha hain papa isme naya kya hain. Aapke paas time hi kaha tha meri baat sunne ke liye. Subah mere utne se pehle aap ghar se chale jaathe the aur raat ko mere sone ke baad ghar lout the the. Aap apne har decision mujhpe toupthe the aur aaj bhi wohi kar rahe hain.

Mr.Kaul: Kyunki main jaanta hoon ki tumhaare liye sahi kya hain aur galat kya hain. Hamesha dil se nahi socha jata Antara kabhi kabaar dimaag se bhi sochna padtha hain. Vo ladka tumhaare liye teek nahi hain beta. Accha tumhe tumhaari decision pe itna confidence hain tho ghar bulaavo usse main baat karoonga. Aur haan ek aur baat agar tum iss baar galat nikli tho tumhe meri decision maanni padegi.

Antara: Thank you papa. Aap dekhna vo zaroor aayega aur aapko vo pasand bhi aayega.

Index:

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg this is great and different
love it
pls cont asapπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by honeybees22 - 10 years ago
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Awww... Itz lovely lovely lovely...

Bahut hi entertaining hai yaar...
I really enjoyed reading it...πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by .Muskhaan. - 10 years ago
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Wow..
Raghu Antra ke life main vapas ana chahta hai..Antra ke papa use ke sadi satya ke sath kar na chahte hai..
satya kabhi nahi sudhrega..

Netu de..bahot acha tha..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.

Awww... Itz lovely lovely lovely...


Bahut hi entertaining hai yaar...
I really enjoyed reading it...πŸ˜ƒ

Thank u Sush. I'm glad that u loved it.
Edited by Nethravathi - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RANTARA.akya

Wow..

Raghu Antra ke life main vapas ana chahta hai..Antra ke papa use ke sadi satya ke sath kar na chahte hai..
satya kabhi nahi sudhrega..

Netu de..bahot acha tha..

Teek se story pad. Raghu pooja ke life main vaapas jaana chahta hain na ki Antara ke life main
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Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Teek se story pad. Raghu pooja ke life main vaapas jaana chahta hain na ki Antara ke life main

OK..so satya pooja ka pati hai..
To feer Antra ko kya problame hai..?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Antara purab se pyaar karti hain😑😑😑
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Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Antara purab se pyaar karti hain😑😑😑

Oh..itna gussa..😑😭
Kya hua..?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww Nethu you started it finally i was waiting for this...
Naam toh bahut pyaaar hai dear...
kya start tha Raghu in police station uss satyanash ki toh...😑
Raghu loves pooja n Antu loves poorab...ab aage kya hoga ...πŸ˜‰
Beautiful start dear...😳
Lovely update...
cont soon ...😳 waiting...
Thank u 😊
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