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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Wow
Lovely consept
Start it soon
Pleesh dear
Updated soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: salini143


I am fine,what about u?
thanks suchi,I am glad u like the concept
i will update soon
and thanks for ur wishes


I am also goodπŸ˜†
yeah...its very nice...πŸ˜ƒ
waiting for update😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice yaar please start soon.
I'm a south Indian too! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii yedis,How r u?
so here is my first chapter.
I hope u all like it.


At the Chennai station -

Four boys was sitting in station. Three of them was playing in mobiles. One of them was looking at the girls.

Raghu P.O.V.

I was sitting with my three friends in station and playing in my mobile. Well I am not interested in games but I don't know what can I do. Our train was supposed to starts 15 min. After few minutes Satya broke the silence. "yr dekho jara kya mast mast si ladkiyaan chal phir rahi hai yahan par aur tum teeno ho ki mobile me gusse pade ho" "hmmm" we three are mumbling at same time. "be serious guys, tume ek din na ek din apne liye ek ITEM dhundna hi hai" Satya said. We three are glared at same time and give a look what.just.you.say.' "mera matlab LIFE PARTNER guys" Satya corrected his mistake. "Ohhh" Aman sighed. We heard the train's horn. "chalo train start hone wali hai" Aman said and stood. We all stood and turned towards the train. Suddenly I heard a sweet voice "Akka come fast". I turned to see who is this then I saw a beautiful girl who was standing at the door of train. My feet were froze at the place. She looked so beautiful and natural. Her long black hair,brown angelic eyes, her perfect nose and kissable pink lips. "Raghuuu" I heard my name and came out from my trance. I turned and saw Machmach. "are jaldi kar, wahan kahan ruk gaya,train chalne wali hai, jaldi haa" Machmach said. I turned to see that girl but she was not there. I sighed and twisted towards the train and caught. Machmach and I took our seats. I sat at window's side and thought about that girl. Machmach was sitting next to me, Aman sat next to him and Satya was sitting in front seat. "Excuse me" a girl said. I thought I heard this voice before and turned to see who is she, she is same girl, I saw few minutes ago. I again lost in her angelic face. She said something to Satya but I didn't heard that. Satya stood and went to his seat next to Aman. She sat at my front seat. Suddenly our eyes meet for few seconds and then she lowered her gaze. I thought she feel nervous so I shifted my gaze to out of window.

Antara P.O.V

"Akka come fast" I yelled at my sister. She was purchasing a book. Then she came in and we both began to find our seats. When we arrived there, there was already someone sitting. "Excuse me" I said. He saw me and give a look what'. "This is my seat so can you move" I said(in attitude). Then he went to his seat and I sat at window's side and my sister was sitting next to me. something is fishy' she was sitting with lowering her gaze. why' I thought. Then my eyes meet with a boy who was sitting in front of me. Our eyes meet for few seconds then I lowered my gaze. For a few moment I feel like something new happened. Then again I saw him, he was looking out of the window. I looked at the guy next to him and he was looking at my sister. The boy was sitting in my seat, he was looking at girls. Forth boy was playing with his mobile. These boys are very weird. Then I was looking out of the window.

Rukssana P.O.V.

"Raghuuu" I heard a familiar name. "are jaldi kar,wahan kahan ruk gaya,train chalne wali hai,jaldi haa" then I heard a familiar voice. I turned and saw around but I didn't find anyone. I thought this is all my imagination. I twisted towards the train and caught. Me and Antara was searched our seats and finally we found. And there he is my first love.

*flashback*

2 years ago

Machmach- I Love U

Rukssana- I am not ready. I like u so much but I have lots of responsibilities on my shoulder. I am really sorry. But I can't do this. Plz forget me and start a new life.

Machmach- But you are my life Rukssana and I will wait till your responsibility completed.

Rukssana- Plz Machmach go away, I can not give u happiness.

Machmach- But...

Rukssana- Bye and thanks for coming into my life.

Machmach- I will wait for you life time...

*flashback* end

He saw me and I immediately lowered my gazes. I was silently sat at my seat and never look back. Finally I meet him. I was missing a lot. I feel like I was happiest girl in the world. I know he is watching me. What he got married?', What he forget me?', What he still loves me?'. O God stop thinking like this Rukssana. Suddenly my mobile was vibrated. I saw a message from unknown person. I read a message and shocked.

Machmach P.O.V.

Two girls came when I was playing in my mobile. Finally I saw my life. When I saw her, immediately she lowered her gaze and sat in front of my seat.

She has not changed at all. Just like we've met for the first time, the shy and innocent Rukssana. I know what she is thinking but I enjoy it. After a few minutes I sent a message " I am still waiting for you my LOVE".

so finally I updated my first chapter.

If any grammar mistake you found so I am sorry

Leave yours likes and coments

My story depends on your likes.

In characters intro I gets only 6 likes

so plz hit the like button.

Bye.

Edited by salini143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
πŸ‘ lovely yaar, inetresting as well,keep on writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful update Divya πŸ˜›
loved it very much 😳
continue soon, will b waiting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjinimala

Nice yaar please start soon.
I'm a south Indian too! πŸ˜‰


south indian? really ?? 😲 me too πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Wow ..
Relly nice
Update next chapter soon dear add the chapter 1 was updated..
Pleesh update next chapter..
Wow
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Wow this is great
hmm two love stories cool
pls cont asap and PM me :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
First chapter was great πŸ‘
Loved it πŸ˜ƒ
Please continue soon ⭐️
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