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Posted: 9 years ago
O..O.. so Mr. Raghu confessed his feelings๐Ÿ˜ƒ a66i baat hai ajkal lyf mein sb fast fast hona mangta- hello hy, how r u, I love u..haan to shabaash, na to sb bakwas๐Ÿ˜‰

bt antu darlu is confused..
koi ni our raghu vl make up her mind.. haina di

anyways beautiful update๐Ÿ˜Š

continue soon

love u a lot ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago


Ruksanna P.O.V.

I was sitting lost in my thoughts How am I going to console her, she's very upset. Boys seemed to be noticed because they haven't said anything in this an hour. My heart winced, I never ever hurt her like this, how can I do this, for god sake, she's my sister, my only family, still I made her sad. I looked up at her side, she's looking out of window, but I didn't miss wetness in her eyelashes. Oh my...she's crying because of ME. Now I felt horrible person. I can't hold this anymore, I ran out from my seat to washroom side. I cupped my face and cried, how can I do this to her, what if she never wanted to talk to me, what if she left me like our parents, thinking all this making me cried harder, when I felt someone hand on my shoulder, I know, who's they are belongs to.

I turned slowly meeting his concerned filled eyes. He slowly wiped my tears with his thumps and took me in his arms. I hugged him tightly and cried, my cries turned into little sobs, he rubbed my back with his one hand and other hand slowly stroking my hair "Shh..baby, everything will be alright" he tried to console me. I shook my head not believing his words, nothing gonna alright. Few moments later, I calmed down and wiped my tears pulling myself from his embraced. "Uhh... you feel better now" he asked searching my face, I looked up at him and slapped "Oww...what's that for?" he asked cupping his red cheek "Yeh sab tumare wajah se hua hai, agar tum muje nahi badkaate, toa yeh sab nahi hota, You...you..." I tried to put right word for him. "Yeah, I..I..." he teased making me glared at him. He held up his hands like surrender, that stupid "Ok, look calm down, muje pata hai meri galti bhi hai...lekin...isse yeh pata chala na ki Antara kya chahati hai" he said making me realize, he's right. I nodded slowly, he smiled "lekin woh mujse baat nahi kar rahi abhi, meine usse upset kar diya, god, woh muje kabhi maaf nahi karegi" I said in one breath and start cried again "God, Ruku, bachi ke tarah rona band karo pehle" he said little bit irritated. I glared at him with my teary eyes, he sighed and cupped my face "Dekho, woh abhi todhi dukhi hai, usse waqt do, fir tum misunderstanding ko dhor kar dena, tik hai?" he asked softly looking straight in my eyes, God, I really missed him in this whole 2 years. Never spend my life without thinking of him.

I nodded slowly, he sighed and took me in his arms again. I wrapped my arms around his waist, how I wish staying like this my entire life, but I am not so lucky "Woah...did I miss something here?" We pulled apart and looked at him, he's one of friend of him, whatever his name. "Get lost, Satya" Machmach groaned, oh his name is Satya. "Ok ok, calm down man, mein tum dono ki secret kissi ko bhi nahi batahunga, now you both can carry on" he said smirking and walked out. "Sometime, he gets in my nerves" he said making little laugh escaped from my mouth. He smiled at me "Let's go, warna fir aa jayega" he said, I nodded and we came to our seats.

Few hours later

Someone announced, train will be stopped an hour at next station. That's great, what we supposed to do in an hour. Yeah, playing silent torture game. The train stopped and few people got out outside. "Guys, bahar chalo, todha hawa kathe hai" Machmach said suddenly "Tuje bukh lagi hai toa kuch kha lethe hai, hawa kaane ki jarurat nahi hai" Satya said smirking, I wondered, why he smirked so much. Machmach glared at him and stood up, he looked down at me and motioned towards Antara. what?, what's that mean'. He rolled his eyes because I didn't get it, huh, whatever. "Abh kadha kyu hai, chal" Raghu said hitting his back of head. "Oww...kyu maar raye ho sab muje" he said rubbing his back of head "Sab koun?" Raghu asked. "kohi nahi chal" he said and walked out one by one.

I sat quietly wondering how to start conversation with Antu. My mobile vibrate pulling me out of thoughts. One message from Machmach "Talk to Antara" it's said. I rolled my eyes but turned towards her anyway. "I am Sorry, Antu" "Akka, I am Sorry" we both said at same time, we looked at each other and start giggling but I stopped for a moment ago "I am so sorry Antu, muje aise nahi kehna chahiye tha" I said lowering my gaze "Nahi, apki kohi galti nahi hai, meine hi kuch misunderstand kar liya tha, I am Sorry" she said her cracking voice. I pulled her in tight hug "Don't cry again, I can't see you cry, Now, everything fine, we are fine" I said still hugging her. We pulled apart few minutes later and smiled at each other. "We are fine" she said softly.

Antara P.O.V.

Next day

We reached at our destination, Mumbai. I breathed in relief, finally. This is very long and memorable journey ever. I meet someone special, very special who made butterflies in my stomach, who made my journey interesting, the truth is, I really want something adventure in my life and he fulfil my wish unknowingly. You must be wondering, what's my decision? Well you will find out when I have a chance to meet him alone. Yeah, don't think dirty things, I am just going to confess my love, that's it. Raghu bent down on his knees, no, no he didn't gonna propose me again, he just going to pulled out his bag under MY seat. He stared up at me and motioned towards my feet. I blushed, stupid me, I pulled my legs up pressing my chest and hugging my knees. I smiled a little and obviously he smiled back making my little heart skip a beat. I am really have a heart attack one day just staring at him. He pulled out his bags, other boys doing same and when all boys took their bags and look one last time all around to check they didn't forget something and finally walked out.

We also pulled out our bags and we take our time to get ready to get out. We adjust our cloths and veins and finally out of train. My eyes roamed for him. God, what if he really left, what if we didn't meet again, what if he forget about me, what if - I stopped my stupid thoughts and my eyes pop out when I spotted at him, he was surrounded by cops. What was he doing with cops, I looked carefully, they all talked something seriously and shaking hands with him. Don't tell me, he surrendered himself for ME. No no no, this can't be happen, how I let them to arrest him, wait a minute, Raghu was just killed that man because of me, he just helped me, right? I will help him this time. "Akka, mein 5 minutes aayi, just wait" I ran towards them not giving her chance to speak.

When I reached, they all stopped talking and looked at me with curious eyes, Raghu's eyes went wide, I smiled at him little and start blabbering "dekhiye, isme Raghu ki kohi galti nahi, usne sirf meri jaan bachane ke liye uss aadmi ko mara tha, plz usse arrest mat kijhiye, jo bhi hua mere wajah se hua hai" I begged them "Antara...kya bol rahi ho, yeh log toa sirf-" I cut him off "Muje pata hai, tume arrest karne aaye hai ya tumne khud apne aap ko surrender kar diya, o god, tum yeh sab mere liye kar raye ho, I am so sorry Raghu, dekho mein nahi chahati tum jail jaho, woh bhi mere kaaran, dekhiye officer, isme Raghu ki galti nahi hai, jo bhi isne kiye hai, mere kaaran kiya hai, muje arrest kijhiye, mein--" I stopped when Raghu grabbed my arm dragging me other side and stopped when we came little far away from them and look down at me "Antara, yeh tum kya bak bak kar rahi thi wanha?" he asked glaring "mein toa tumari help kar rahi thi, tum apne aap ko surrender karne ja raye the, aur yanha tum muje gudh raye ho" I pouted. He chuckled at my expression and opened his mouth to say something but I cut him off again "Dekho, tume jo karna hai kar lo, mein tume jail nahi jane dungi, mein bhi dekhti hoon, kaise le jate hai mere Raghu ko" I hissed glaring at them. "Tumara?" he raised his eyebrow, I frowned biting my lips, stupid mouth, why I can't control my blabbering, stupid me "uhh...I...hmm...haan?" I said more like question. He smirked "hmm..toa tume farak padta hai, mere jail jane ya na jane se?" he asked and I just nodded slowly. "Kyu?" he asked closing distance between us. My breath hitched in my throat and my heartbeat raised "Bolo Antara" he said softly making shivered all around my body "Because...I..I...Love You" I blurted out lowering my gaze and wait for him to say something, when I didn't get any response from his side, I looked up, he was staring at me with so much sensation in his eyes and grinned widely "I Love You Too" he said taking me in his warm and comfortable embrace. I hugged him tightly wrapping my arms around his waist not caring surrounding what people gonna think. We stayed like this few minutes enjoying each other finally we pulled apart.

We stood smiling each other when someone interrupt "Hey Raghu, congrats man, you are posted as a IPS officer for killing that Shetty and his son" he said shaking his hands with Raghu. My jaw dropped what he just said, IPS officer?' Raghu smiled at him nervously looking at me of his corner of his eyes. "So, tum IPS officer ho?" I questioned raising my eyebrow when that man walked away, he starched his neck with his hand looking everywhere except me "uhh..Yes" he said still not looking at me. But before I said something, he opened his mouth "Dekho, Antara, mein dar gaya tha ki tum muje police officer banane ke baad accept nahi karogi" he said looking scared a bit "Why, kyu nahi accept karungi?" I asked confused "Kyuke tum police ko pasand nahi karti, jab meine tume police station me dekha, tabhi samaj gaya tha, ki tum cops ko like nahi karti, toa meine socha ke..-" I cut him off "ke mein tume police officer accept nahi karungi, right?" I asked glaring at him. He gulped nodding at me, I burst out in laughing "You stupid.." I said between in my laugh. "Wait, so were you not upset that I lied to you " he asked seriously. I stopped laughing "No" I said honestly. "Ok then, are we fine?" he said nervously biting his lips, I nodded "We are fine" smiling at him, he breathed out in relief and smiled. He slowly wrapped his arms around me pulling me into him and I hugged him closing my eyes, I forget, we are in middle of the station and people looking at us, but I ignored them. I just felt his warm and comfortable embrace.

Someone cleared his throat making us to pulled apart quickly and turned towards them "Kya chal raha hai yahan?" he asked raising his eyebrow, we both looked shocked. Standing in front of us Machmach and...my Sis "Woh...mein...mera matlab hum..." I start shuttering "Mein wahan tumara 20-25 minutes se wait kar rahi hoon, aur tum yahan-" she said disappointment tone. "Nahi...mein bas-" Raghu interrupt me "Woh...mein..nahi hum...ek dusre se pyar karte hai" Raghu said after taking a deep breath. They both looked shocked for a minute then start...blushing?. . "Muje kuch kehna tha.." she said nervously. I nodded at her "Mein shadi karne ke liye ready hoon...mera matlab tumare kanyaadaan ke liye toa tumare jiju ka hona jaruri hai na" she said trying to covered her acceptance. I grinned widely "Ohhh...aur aapne mere jiju ko duud rakha hai" I joked but I think she take it seriously because next thing making me speechless. She pointed her index finger towards Machmach who was blushing already.

Raghu and I looked at both of them looking totally shocked. "Kab, kaise?" I shouted making them jumped a little. "Tune muje bataya nahi" Raghu said hitting his arm "Tune kab bataya?" Machmach said hitting Raghu's arm. And then, they both start hitting each other making me rolled my eyes, god this is so childish. "Enough" My sis shouted making them stopped. "Kab, kaise?" I asked again. "Since College" she whispered making me speechless...again. "College?" Raghu and I asked at same time.

They nodded "College ke annual function me, meine apna dil nikal kar iske kadmo me rak diya, isne uss najuk se dil ko kuchal kuchal kar side me kar diya, aur mein apne dil ke tukdo ko saamet kar-" Before he finish Akka hit his arm with her fist making him, Raghu and me laughing.

"huh..here they are" Raghu's other friends came looking at us. "Let's get going guys, I am really tired" Machmach said wrapping his arm around my sis waist and walked away with her. "Come" Raghu said pulling me into him and wrapped his muscular arm around my small waist pressing me to his side, I nodded lowering my gaze to hide my red face. "Did we miss something?" Satya asked looking at us with curious eyes "A lot" Raghu said smirking towards him and walked away with me.

THE END

So here, last chapter of this story๐Ÿ˜Š

I didn't believed, i just completed my first story๐Ÿ˜•

I am happy, I didn't completed without your's all support๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Just be my side always just like this journey of this story

A very big thanks all of u๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Love you all with my whole heart๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 9 years ago
Ye kiya? Ye toh khatam hogaya! ๐Ÿ˜•
Beautiful ending though ๐Ÿ‘
Thank you Divya rani for a beautiful FF โญ๏ธ
Really enjoyed it from the very beginning โญ๏ธ
Please continue to write some more FF ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Once again thank you for entertaining us with your stories, โญ๏ธ
Hats off for a story that was well written ๐Ÿ‘
Stay blessed sweeti ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love and hugs,
Sanju ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful ending
I so loved it


It was really perfect

Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy endings... Happy endings... I love them...when rantara live happily ever after...
Haila itna hot n handsome IPS officer...
Wht i loved most of the story was...raghu.machmach.satya.aman together.. Woh bhi friends... Wow
Keep writing the rising star of this forum... Or i must stay already a superstar writerโญ๏ธ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic update . ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Loved it .
Thank you

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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
loving it
keep up the good updates coming
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So here is the end of the wondeful story. wish if we had more of it... but every good things have to end somewhere and loved how it ended...
the whole ff was a roller coaster journey from begining to end just like the train... i have doubted from begining that raghu might have associated with cops... loved how at the end ruku and machmach's love story started again and antara's confession and beginning of rantara's new love story..
awsome ending... will miss reading this..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Outstanding work๐Ÿ‘
Finally Antu confessed her feelings..๐Ÿ˜ณ
but the beautiful journey of MUMBAI EXPRESS ended..๐Ÿ˜”

Ek raat ke SAFAR ne.. Do Ajnabiyon ko HUMSAFAR Bana Diya.. Issey better journey to ho hi ni skti.. ๐Ÿ˜Š
Story'l be missed..
U R A FABULOUS WRITER DI.. KEEP WRITING MORE AND MORE..๐Ÿ˜ณ
Love uh a lot..๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
South Indian story? Interesting

Chapter 1

Raghu, MM, Satya aur Aman - 4 friends?

Antu n Rukku - Sisters?

Yaar tune toh puri ki puri plot badal di? Ye idea aaya kaha se tujhe?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Antu toh full on attitude dikaarahi hain Raghu ko.


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