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Finally Unres @ pg. 17 😊
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Amazing story
Just read it all parts together
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Amazing story

Just read it all parts together

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Superb update dear... ⭐️⭐️
Antu full gusse may hai aur deadly look diya raghu ko.. πŸ˜†
woh karti bhi kya hai NikkiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Raghu was glad ki satya n aman were quite...
Yeah, nahi unne baja deta
Ye kya shetty ke ladla beta bhi hai aur woh bhi aagaya.. 😑
Lana pada usse yrπŸ˜•πŸ˜•
Accha huwa ki woh aaya issi bahane Rantara are alone n get some time to spend alone.. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
ALONE😳😳😳
Antu holding Raghu's hand hayee she trust him.. 😳
she always trust him😳😳😳
Jungle may Rantara tashan was too good...
Thanks dearπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Antu through he is gangster but he saved him toh he ll not do anything to her so sweet...
AWWW aayyeee😳😳😳
Loved that dialogue of raghu akka train may hai aur tu jungle may ddej ki yaad aagayi.. πŸ˜•
Tabhi liya dialogue, ddej ki yaad aa rahi ti😭😭😭
Finally last scene Hmmm I think it's antu 's dream raghu yesa kuch nahi Kar sakta hai... 😳
Lets see, what happenedπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Khatam hogaya...
Ji Nikki🀒🀒
Cont asap...
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Hello my cutipies
Sry, It's a very long time
So, here sixth part of this story



Raghu P.O.V.

I heard someone screaming, I shot up and looked towards Antara, she was shaking and swept rolled down her forehead and her eyes wide opened. She looked at me and her expression changed into angry. there we go again, what I done now' I thought. Her eyes went down my body, which makes me shifted my body and then she looked at me and asked most dump question ever "tumara coat kahan hai". I looked at her full confused "kyu" I asked. "Nevermind" She said quickly like she hide something. "fir kyu pucha" I asked more confused. She ignored my question and held my coat, yeah, my coat, I put on her, when she shivered from coldness in her sleep', tightly closed to her body which made me smiled. She looked at my coat and then me. She took off coat and threw on me, but before it hit me, I caught in mid way "nahi chahiye tumara coat" she said in her usual tone. I sighed and stood up and went towards her for asking what's her problem. She quickly stood up making me stop as well and looked at me scared 'why' I asked myself. "tu.. tik hai na" I asked in concerned. "Me...mein tik hu.." she said in low tone. I raised my eyebrow "Sach.." I asked "hmm" she mumbled. Before I ask something else, we heard someone shout "bhai idhar se awaj aa rahi thi" someone shouts on another one. I quickly grabbed her hand and pulled her behind me. They all came into view, I looked down her because she shorter than me, she looked at me same time, her eyes filled with fear only because of me, she clutched my arm tightly. I looked back at idiots, they all smiled like they found a lottery "abh kaha jayega Raghunath Naik" Ajay smirked. I didn't said anything. He raised his gun towards us, which made Antara's grip tighten. "Apne Jaan ko alwidha bol de, tere jane ka time ho gaya hai" he said. I smiled "na tera baap mera kuch bigaad saka aur na hi tu" I smirked. He looked confused and angry. A bullet hit his arm, he fell down clutching his bleeding arm. Satya and Aman came from other side raising their guns towards them. I looked at her and smiled, I didn't see, one of Ajay's man shoot at my side and that bullet hit my arm, Satya shoot on his leg and fell down. "OMG, Raghu tum tik hona" Antara asked in her concerned voice, first time I felt like, she care about me like I care about her, I nodded my head and smiled reassuring her I am fine. "bhai tu ja yahan se, hum sabhalte hai" Aman said not looking at me. I held her hand and ran opposite side.

We are running like hours, but truth is, it's only few minutes. Suddenly Antara stopped which made me stop with her as well. "kya hua, kahi chot lagi hai" I asked looking all over her body "haan, lagi hai" she said, "kahan lagi hai, dekha mujko" I said. "yehan" she said pointing at my bleeding arm. "muje lagta hai, iss par patti karni pedegi, koon bahut beh gaya hai" she said checking my arm seriously. "kuch nahi hota" I said pulling my arm from her soft and gentle grip which made her hold my arm again "dekho...bahut koon beh gaya hai, dekhne do muje" she said sternly. She came little closed towards me for better look and slowly lifted my shirt on my arm. Her fingers touched my hand making me tense and shivered. I looked down at her, she was looking my arm carefully, her fingers was so soft, it's felt so good. I looked at her hazel eyes, her perfect nose and then her kissable lips. I gulped, I just wanted to kiss her right now, god, what she doing with me' I thought. I sighed heavily, I think, I am falling for her, can she felt like same what I felt, Does she ever fell for me? "Raghu" she shouted, I came out my running thoughts. "kya...kya hua" I asked. "kya hua...tume kya hua, mein kab se tume bhula rahi hu, kidar koye hue ho" she said "tu nahi samjegi" I said looking away. "kya matlab" she asked confused. "kuch nahi, kyu bhula rahi thi" I asked changing the topic. "hmm woh.. chaku hai tumare paas" she asked. "kyu marne ka irada hai" I teased. "Raghu" she shouted/whispered. I chuckled and took out knife from my shocks. "thoda dard hoga, hilna mat" she warned and put that knife on my arm slowly, she pressed the knife on my wound, a painful hiss came out from my mouth, she stop and looked at me and back to my wound and pulled out that damn bullet. And then she take out some look like cloth, and wrapped around my arm carefully. "Hogaya" she said proudly, I smiled at her work. "tune yeh sab kaha se sika" I asked. "huh...hmmm, woh mein.." she trying to say something. "agar tume nahi batana toa tik hai" I said, I know, I asked something wrong. "nahi aisi baat nahi hai, mera Papa doctor the, unnone hi muje sikaya yeh sab" she said in her low voice, she was sad, I never saw her like this since I meet her. "ohh" is all I said. I feel bad for her. We both didn't said anything for a while, I looked behind her, Satya came slowly towards us, I raised my eyebrow in confusion, what the heck, he think, he's doing? I thought. He slowly came behind Antara, and raised his gun and pressed it behind her head, and I came to know, what is gonna happen in next "Ahhh" she screamed and quickly turn towards Satya. Satya starts laughing at her scary action, She punched him on his jaw making him groan holding his jaw and this time me and Aman starts laughing, he glared at us, we both stop laughing. Now they both gives a death glare to each other. "hmm..hogaya tum logo ka toa hum chale iss jungle se" Aman said walking some other side and we follow him like lost puppies.

Finally, we found the direction towards the road and now we are waiting for lift. "huh...tum logo lagta hai, kohi gadi iss sunsaan si jagah par aayegi" Antara asked looking at us. Aman shrugged his shoulder, Satya didn't said anything this time and then she looked at me, her eyes filled with hope "haan...wait karo, aajayegi" I assured her. She nodded her head and I am glad, she didn't ask any question. After some moments, we heard a some car's horn, Satya quickly pulled out his gun, and stood up in the middle of the road pointing his gun towards car's driver. He quickly stopped the car and looked at Satya with wide fearful eyes. "yeh kya gundagardi hai, todi respect se lift nahi leya jata tumse" she shouted on him, he ignored her and went towards car's owner who look terrified. "yahan se hospital kitni duri par hai" Satya asked calmly "woh...woh...yahan se aade gante ki duri par ek choti hospital hai" he suttering "Arre dar mat, kuch nahi karege hum" Satya said patting his shoulder. He nodded, I held Antara's hand, she looked at me, I smiled at her and she smiled back making my smile wide. Satya took passenger seat and we three sat on back seat where Antara sat in the middle.

Antara P.O.V.

I sat silently feeling confused, irritated, sad and angry, why I don't even know. I am thinking about one person who makes my heartbeat fasten. Why, I am feeling this, only one person roaming in my mind Raghu. He is so different, cute and mostly protective. He really care about me like my dad, why, I meet him just few hours ago, but in this few hours so much unbelievable things happen, O god, I am gonna mad and most important I felt safe when he is around me. When he got that bullet for my safety, I felt so scared like I am gonna lost something like precious thing. I don't want to lose him. I am so confused about my new developed feeling. When he held my hand some moments ago, I felt butterflies in my stomach and my heartbeat raised, his one touch feels me alive once again. I think, I am falling for him but he's criminal, that's not possible O god, I hit my fist on my legs feeling frustrated. Raghu and Aman looked at me with their wide eyes like I have a three heads "tum tik ho" Raghu asked in his concerned voice seeing my unknown madness. I nodded my head and sighed.

*Skip the Ride*

Now we all are sat in hospital room, Boys were sitting on bed and I sat on small chair and looked all of them one by one. Aman sat quietly looking around, Satya smiled at me, I rolled my eyes, and my eyes land on Raghu, he such lost in his thoughts, I stared at him, his deep brown eyes, his nose and his lips...someone cleared his throat, we came out of our trance. Satya smirked at me "what" I asked "ohh, it's nothing" he said still smirking, O god, he's so irrirating person in the world. "so, hum apne train tak kaise pochege" I asked killing this silent torture. "woh...ummm..pata nahi" Raghu said like it's not a big deal. "What" I jumped from my seat "hey, calm down, mein kuch intezaam karta hun" Satya said and walked out. "Antara" o god, his voice so deep and husky which made my heart stop. "hmm" I mumbled "tum tik hon a, mera matlab tum aate waqt bhi kuch paresaan si thi aur abhi bhi kohi kohi hui ho, kuch paresaani hai" he said, his eyes filled with concerned 'U are the problem, Stupid' I thought but answered him anyways "hmm, kuch nahi, woh bas train ke liye paresaan hu, aur kuch badi baat nahi hai" I said "Intezaam ho gaya" Satya said came back. "meine ek gadi book ki hai, fir hum Machmach ko call karege, aur puchenge train kaha tak pochi hai, and then hum uske next ke next station toa poch hi jayege" he finally breathed. I smiled, finally some good idea came in their minds, wait "who's Machmach" I asked "humara dost jo iss waqt train me hai tumare behen ke sath" Satya said. I give a dirty look and walked out from room, "come on, let's go" I said. Now we are waiting outside of hospital. After some moments, a car stopped in front of us, we all settled down. I sighed, it's gonna be long journey.


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Edited by salini143 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG!!OMG?!IMG!!
FINALLY
I was thinking about this story randomly in school lolz
Coming to the update
I knew it was her dream!!
Raghu is choo caring!! Hayla raghu *dreamland*
Antu bhi na..she doesn't see the LOVE in his eyes
What am I saying?!! He can't see his own love
In dono ka kuch nai hoga hayo rabba!!
I hate satyaaa!!!urhghhh!!koi use goli mark please
Raghu itna caring hayla!!
Falling for her??!! Omg!!omg!!omg!!
Someone pinch me!! Am I dreaming??!!
I loved lived loved the whole update!!!
Its unique and different to any other
Antu thinks he's a criminal nahiii!!!he nahi hosakta!! Koi to bolo is yedii koo!!
She is falling aswell!!?? Omggg omgg!!
Someone shoot me!!
Raghu will save her from the falling and ahe will chanfe directions and fall into his love
Yayy
Cant wait for more
Pls cont asqp!! Wait nai hota!! You always take long!! Jaldi jaldi please
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsme update

Loved it yr

Keep smiling
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its beautiful
aww antara worried for raghu😳
thanx for the pm
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Ohh Divya what a jhatka yaar πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...i hv gone thru ur 2nd 3rd 4th and 5 th chap all inone go right now ...it is wonderful n lovely ...full of suspense ...bohot dino baad aise full on roller coster padne ko mila ...i enjoyed it thoroughly
cont soon dear as i want to know If Raghu doing so with Antara ...then what is the reason or it was just a bad dream of ANtara ...its just confusing a boy saving a girl from bad guys and now doing the same thing with her ...u r 100 % successful of making me full confused ...sar chakra gaya hai yaarπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ ...jaldi se update de de baba
waiting eagerly haha
luv u dear πŸ˜ƒ
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like not working anyways nice update thanks for pm !!😊
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