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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Ajju15s

That was really nice n lovely update salini ji . Really liked...Keep writing more...story aur bhi interesting hoti jaa rahi h..waiting for next update..😊


thanks ajju
I will continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Param_love

Awesome n lovely update😳

Thx 4 pm...!!

thanks dear😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

amazing update


its niceπŸ‘

keep up the good work

thanks dear😳😳
I will continue soon😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Divya...πŸ€—

Thanks for the pm dear...

I have gone through ur update... Wow... It was beautiful... i Enjoyed reading it...

Awww m daarling raghu antara ka kithna fikar kartha hai... antara ur very lucky..

And my Mach mach.. awww i love you mach mach...😳 Thanks for including my MM in this... I always enjoy Raghu and Antara's coversation with my love Mach mach...😳

Aur antu ko finally realise hua ki raghu ka dil kaisa hai... Very good antu...πŸ˜ƒ

Rantara moments... aww lovely... yeh jagda kare yaa pyaar jathaye, dono andaaz main bhi bahut acche lagthe hai... Love u rantara...❀️

This was a really cute update dear...

Continue soon...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.

Divya...πŸ€—

πŸ€— you too

Thanks for the pm dear...
noo thanks to me, I warned u 😈

I have gone through ur update... Wow... It was beautiful... i Enjoyed reading it...
awww thanks 😳😳😳

Awww m daarling raghu antara ka kithna fikar kartha hai... antara ur very lucky..

Raghu ko hamesha Antu ki fikar rehti hai😳😳...yeah she is luckyπŸ˜‰

And my Mach mach.. awww i love you mach mach...😳 Thanks for including my MM in this... I always enjoy Raghu and Antara's coversation with my love Mach mach...😳
really😲😲 u love our MM, but me tooo😳😳😳

Aur antu ko finally realise hua ki raghu ka dil kaisa hai... Very good antu...πŸ˜ƒ

Antu ko humesha deer se realise hota haiπŸ˜‰

Rantara moments... aww lovely... yeh jagda kare yaa pyaar jathaye, dono andaaz main bhi bahut acche lagthe hai... Love u rantara...❀️

hihihi thanks😳😳😳

This was a really cute update dear...

once again thanks

Continue soon...πŸ˜ƒ


I will continue soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: salini143


see tumne dubara thanks bola😑😑
thanks for long and lovely comment
acha tum wanhi niki ho jo 'u belong to me Mrs. naik' likh rahi ho


tumne bhi thanks bola...😑
nahi may woh wali niki nahi hun...πŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
omg this was like the best update ever
he was worried for her awww
shetty agaya yayy now i finally have someone to hate lolzz
antu ko chera to goli khahi from raghu hayee
They are all criminals nahiii haha antu is crazy seriously!
he took her back forcefully
she saw his worry for her aww
pls cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
RANTARA

Hiii everyone, finally my exams was finished
sry for late, so here 5th chap
ENJOY...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Raghu P.O.V.

She sat quietly in auto staring out of window and lost in her thoughts deeply. I sighed, I know she is angry on me but what I do, I am just worried for her and that idiot Shetty put a gun on her head, she looked so scared, and then I lost my temper, so I kill him, then she called me GUNDA, how she said to me, I saved her life, ufff, girls are very complicated to understand. "tum tik ho na?" I asked softly. She looked shocked like I asked something she wouldn't expect, she give a death look and then again looked out of window. I sighed, she is so rude, I didn't expected this answer, what I did anything wrong, anyway, I asked softly, and she is so...so...whatever, if she want maintained a rude behaviour towards me, then fine, I will also maintained a rude behaviour towards her. Aman and Satya sat quietly, I am glad, they are silent. I closed my eyes leaning my head back, a deep sighed escaped from my mouth. I bet, they noticed, how much I tired. Few minutes later, I heard a loud sound and suddenly the auto stopped then we all jerked towards front. We all got out from auto to see what is going on. There is he, Shetty's son Ajay with his mans holding guns and chains. ohh, not again, I am already tired , s**a sab ko yeh ek din hi mila hai, mujse panga lene ko' I thought. "kidar bachke ja raha hai, Raghunaik naik" he said gritting his teeth. I know, why he's so angry. I felt someone hold my hand tightly, I looked towards Antara, she looked so scared. "tuje kya laga, tu mere baap ko maar ke aise hi bach ke chala jayega" he said a same tone. He looked towards Antara and smile evilly "sath mein ladki bhi hai, abh toa aur maza aayega" he said in his dirty tone. He was getting on my nerves. Antara hold my arm tightly and came behind me. I looked towards Satya and Aman and give a sign what we are going to do, they nodded understandingly. I looked towards Ajay and smirked "tu aaj bhi nahi pakad payega" I said. Before he take any action, I griped Antara's hand tightly and shout "RUN". Antara and I are running to left side into the forest area and Satya and Aman are running to right side.

Antara P.O.V.

We both are sat quietly opposites sides in middle of the dark forest. Raghu was trying to set fire on collected woods "s**a jalta hi nahi" he said in irritated voice. Uff finally he made it. I was wondering who is that guy trying to kill us. I am sure, he is one of his enemy, because he is gangster, o god, I am going to spend a night with gangster who is capable to do anything. And I didn't know, what is he going to do with me. But he didn't looked like that type of guy, he saves me from goons who is misbehaving with me. I looked at Raghu, he sat calmly holding a stick near a fire like nothing happen few hour ago. How could he sat like that, oh I got it, he is gangster, so it is all normal for him. On the other side, I am going to insane just thinking all of this. I sighed Can I ask him, who is that guy, yes I can, I have a right because he was going to kill me too'. I take a deep breath "hmmm..Raghu..." he looked at me "hmmm...huh..woh...-" "arre bol na" he said in irritated voice. "woh koun tha" I asked "koun, koun tha" he asked like he didn't know anything. "wohi jo road peh gun pakadke khada tha aur mujhe bhi marne ki baat ki thi" I asked in little bit scary tone. "Shetty ka ladla beta" he said gritting his teeth. Shetty' hmmm I heard like familiar name. Where I heard that hmmm oh I got it. That means "tum use bhi maar doge" I asked. He looked at me "haan" he said with no emotion. "yeh kannon ke kilaaf hai, tum use nahi maar sakte" I shouted on him. "yehi, chilla mat, waise bhi mein kanoon ke ushole peh nahi chalta, mein sirf apne ushole peh chalta hoon, samji" he said angrily. "tumse baat karna hi bikaar hai" I said in a same tone. "toa mat karna, koun karne ko keh raha hai" he said making a face. "pata nahi Akka kaisi hogi" I said In worried. "Kya?? Jungle me tu hai aur teri Akka train me, mast lambi ho kar so rahi hogi, huh..Akka kaisi hogi" he said in same of his irritated tone. I didn't reply this time, I am not in mood to fight with him. I am very tired all of this problem. I looked flames blankly. Few minutes later, Raghu stood up, came near me and then he did something, I didn't expected with him. He sat beside me close, close means very close, our shoulder touched each other. I felt uncomfortable, so I try to stand up but he held my hand and pulled me down. "yeh kya batamezi hai, chodo mera hath" I said angrily and jerked my hand from his firm grip. We both stood up, he smiled at me evilly . He start moving towards me, I was now moving backward. Before he grabbed my hand, I ran into deep forest. I heard my name calling, I ignored it. Suddenly Raghu's hand held my wrist and threw me on the floor. I tried to get up but he came top of me and try to kiss me. I put my hands on his chest and tried to pushed him but he was stronger than me. He held my hands and pinned me. I start struggling, he slammed his lips on mine. I was shocked, tears were rolling on my cheeks. He kissed me forcefully and roughly. He moved down and start kissing on my all over neck. He left my one hand and slid his free hand on my back and stop on my suit's zip strip, my eyes widened, I start struggling harder but its no use I am going to die'. He slid down the zipper of my suit. I screamed of my top of lungs "NOOO".

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Kya? Chapter is finished yedis, go hit the like button, and leave ur comment, and appreciate me

Bye bye *kisses*


Edited by salini143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Amazing yaar
I loved it
both are angry
shetty ka beta agaya okay
last part.. i think it was a dream..πŸ˜• raghu would never do something like this
pls cont asap
Edited by honeybees22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22

Amazing yaar
I loved it
both are angry
shetty ka beta agaya okay
last part.. i think it was a dream..πŸ˜• raghu would never do something like this
pls cont asap



Thanks hinu πŸ˜›
Dono ko angry hone ke alwa aata hi kya hai..lol πŸ˜‰
Story ko aage chalne ke liye kuch lana hi padega na πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Lets see, what I am going to do 😊 😊
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