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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
resπŸ˜†
unres😳
iss baar bhi main first...
Just before the review i wanna say you one thing...πŸ€“
Pampu... akhaa life mein bahut sare update pare par itna dar kabhi nahin laga ... sacha kahe raha hoon... i know that it is not a hooror story... but yup.. u truly mentaining the mode of a dark story... the whole update has an eerie feeling all arround... which literally made me cringe sometimes...🀒
But no doubt!! It was just needed and perfect for this type of storyline...😎
so i am happy to be scared no matter what...πŸ˜†.. mera kuch nahin hone wala...
Coming to the update...
I knew Raghu will impress mother all the way... no doubt on that.. But it's good to know that mother doesn't believe his words blindly. he checked about raghu's background and collected all information about him... nice move buddy.,.. like these detailing... πŸ‘πŸΌ
But Raghu is much more smarter than anyone.. the way he kept his image on society.. it was to hard for mother to know about his real identity... πŸ€”
This parts of this updates caught my eyes.
Now about rantara's first encounter...
Pampy jii... U never failed to improvise in urupdate that how throughly u have done PHD with raghu's charecter.. his each and every minor details... The first time when antara entered inside the room and checking him out... his posture his attitude, his presence and teh way he was sipping his tea... it felt like raghu instantly appeared in front of readers eyes...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
But really this encounter gave me gppsebumps as well as cringed me...... yaar issey galat tarike se mat lijio..πŸ˜†... bacause of the errie environment... u know me πŸ˜†... i get engrossed with every story i read and mostly shook by the situation.. and the situation u creared was just ... sometimes so scary... ... never thought that i would be freaked out seeing rantara's first encounter like that... but seriously hats off tp u for thinking out of the box... πŸ‘... even it was scary it engroossed me full on that i had to finish it within single breath...πŸ˜‰
When raghu was approaching to antara u don;t know i was feeling the tension.. the environment... cause i always kept in mind that here raghu's charecter is totally dark... so i can't even go to la la land seeing their closeness... as u alreday mentioned that romance womance bhool jaa.. aur dekh main bhool bhi gayii hoon..πŸ˜•... bas dare jaa rahi hoon...πŸ˜†... But i think it was what u wanted to feel ur readers... the scene really left me aww struck... here raghu is like teh hunter who had approached just not ti capture his prey but i think to crush her brutal... and posses it with all possible way as u mentioned... and he was the hunter who enjoy to play with his prey...thats what i saw him doing with antu... At ffirst he trap antara in every possible way... convincing her mother, droving away robin from his way so that antara didn;t have any second option, he trapped her from all the way so that she couldn;t escape from him and kept only one way open for her whoch directly leads to him..
And when she was trapped he caught her and bruished her brutally... just like the scene defines... the way he cut the heart shaped cake into several pieces,... it's the indication that how he will broke her innocent heart like that...
And how he was licking the cakes from her face and said about the taste.. I know everyone is going to drool hard on that place...πŸ˜†
That scenes were just too much yaar... how could u imagined... πŸ‘πŸ‘.. Tero charn kagan hain mate??
Still despite of so much darkness i loved a thing about raghu... and i wanna hug u for portraying it like this πŸ€—... it was truly unexpectable... but i just love this surprises.. and only u can do this..😳
Guess what i am talking about??πŸ˜‰.
I JUST LOVED THE FACT THAT RAGHU DIDN'T FAKED AND PRETEND TO BE A LOVEY DOVEY KIND GUY TO IMPRESS ANTARA!!! YES!!.. THATS THE THING I LIKED MOST ABOUT HIM HERE...😳

He represented him to antara... just like the way he is... he didn't fake... He showed that he was heartless, rude, arrogant, merciless... he didn;t even cared if antara would accept him like that or not... yup he know already that she didn't have anyother option rather than him but still... he is the kind of guy who never waited from approval from other side... if he have to get something he will get... He will posses his belonging straightly firmly... U don;t know just loved this touch... u know what i guessed that in first encounter he wil try to show himself as a decent moderate guy in front of antara... but he didn't... it prooves that he might be dark, ruthless but still he is honest somehow and loyal... And please keep it like that... keep this tension intact between raghu and antara... in ur storyline.. keep scaring me... he he he...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ... cause i am ready to be scared for rantara and for vamp's story... i just wanted this errie feeling cause it is like the nectar dose for me,πŸ˜†... Bas yaahin meri deand hain ki rantara ke beach ki tension bani rahein... main bhi gone case hoon..... Jab har koi romance ka demand karta raheta hain.. main tension ka demnd karta raheta hoon...πŸ€ͺ.. forum girls will kill me someday for asking more dark shades IN A DARK STORY!!πŸ˜†...
SOrry yaar.. pata nahin kya pagal bakbak karti gayi...πŸ˜†... ayi thi review dene par pata nahin kya kucch kahe gayi...🀣
And at last
should i mention it...
IT WAS BRILIANT WITH EEVERY FEELING... SUSPENSE, EERINESS, FATAL ATTARCKTION BETWEEN RANTARA AND GROWING TENSION...
LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT...
UPDATE SOON...😎
AND I LOVE U... ❀️
AND SORRY FOR BAKBAK AGAIN...πŸ€ͺ
Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
intersting story dear...raghu thodasa soft bana do...plzzz update soon we r waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Loved it .
Thank you for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
unresed aboveπŸ˜†
please parke behosh mat hoo janaπŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: ifians

resπŸ˜†

unres😳
iss baar bhi main first...
awww u again first one ...and honahi tha ...i think here in this forum only few persons r loving this story ...n among them u r the greatest admirer of this story...isliye tere review padke main behosh nahi yaar ...acutally hosh mein ayyi...kyunke yeh update karneke baad lagrahatha sirf jute aur chappal hi khane padenge ...but u really made me taste icecreamπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† thank you yaar for appreciating me to this height ...going against all the yedis πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...luv u yaar ...maine kaha tha na koi agar na bhi pade yeh update ...sirf aur sirf tere liyehi yeh story main likh dalungi ...haha
Just before the review i wanna say you one thing...πŸ€“
Pampu... akhaa life mein bahut sare update pare par itna dar kabhi nahin laga ... sacha kahe raha hoon... i know that it is not a hooror story... but yup.. u truly mentaining the mode of a dark story... the whole update has an eerie feeling all arround... which literally made me cringe sometimes...🀒
haha sachii ???
But no doubt!! It was just needed and perfect for this type of storyline...😎
so i am happy to be scared no matter what...πŸ˜†.. mera kuch nahin hone wala...
Coming to the update...
I knew Raghu will impress mother all the way... no doubt on that.. But it's good to know that mother doesn't believe his words blindly. he checked about raghu's background and collected all information about him... nice move buddy.,.. like these detailing... πŸ‘πŸΌ
oyehoye thank you jiπŸ˜†
But Raghu is much more smarter than anyone.. the way he kept his image on society.. it was to hard for mother to know about his real identity... πŸ€”
Yup
This parts of this updates caught my eyes.
Now about rantara's first encounter...
Pampy jii... U never failed to improvise in urupdate that how throughly u have done PHD with raghu's charecter.. his each and every minor details... The first time when antara entered inside the room and checking him out... his posture his attitude, his presence and teh way he was sipping his tea... it felt like raghu instantly appeared in front of readers eyes...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
But really this encounter gave me gppsebumps as well as cringed me...... yaar issey galat tarike se mat lijio..πŸ˜†... bacause of the errie environment... u know me πŸ˜†... i get engrossed with every story i read and mostly shook by the situation.. and the situation u creared was just ... sometimes so scary... ... never thought that i would be freaked out seeing rantara's first encounter like that... but seriously hats off tp u for thinking out of the box... πŸ‘... even it was scary it engroossed me full on that i had to finish it within single breath...πŸ˜‰
When raghu was approaching to antara u don;t know i was feeling the tension.. the environment... cause i always kept in mind that here raghu's charecter is totally dark... so i can't even go to la la land seeing their closeness... as u alreday mentioned that romance womance bhool jaa.. aur dekh main bhool bhi gayii hoon..πŸ˜•... bas dare jaa rahi hoon...πŸ˜†... But i think it was what u wanted to feel ur readers... the scene really left me aww struck... here raghu is like teh hunter who had approached just not ti capture his prey but i think to crush her brutal... and posses it with all possible way as u mentioned... and he was the hunter who enjoy to play with his prey...thats what i saw him doing with antu... At ffirst he trap antara in every possible way... convincing her mother, droving away robin from his way so that antara didn;t have any second option, he trapped her from all the way so that she couldn;t escape from him and kept only one way open for her whoch directly leads to him..
And when she was trapped he caught her and bruished her brutally... just like the scene defines... the way he cut the heart shaped cake into several pieces,... it's the indication that how he will broke her innocent heart like that...
haha u r correct dear ...he brutally broke the heart cake...that was an indication that he wiped out completely Robin from her life and he is enough ruthless to break a beautiful heart.😭 abh aage kya hoga mereko nahi pata...likhte likhte kya likh jaungi pata nahi
And how he was licking the cakes from her face and said about the taste.. I know everyone is going to drool hard on that place...πŸ˜†
That scenes were just too much yaar... how could u imagined... πŸ‘πŸ‘.. Tero charn kagan hain mate??
haha mere charan toh abh review padke hawa mein ud rahe hain ...kisi bhi waqt dhamse girke fracture ho sakti hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Still despite of so much darkness i loved a thing about raghu... and i wanna hug u for portraying it like this πŸ€—... it was truly unexpectable... but i just love this surprises.. and only u can do this..😳
Guess what i am talking about??πŸ˜‰.
I JUST LOVED THE FACT THAT RAGHU DIDN'T FAKED AND PRETEND TO BE A LOVEY DOVEY KIND GUY TO IMPRESS ANTARA!!! YES!!.. THATS THE THING I LIKED MOST ABOUT HIM HERE...😳
yess cos i hate such kinda guys who show them off as lovey dovey guys but andar se pura khokla hai...they dont know what is love...yehan Raghu dark hai but he wll not do such lovey dovey staffs with Antara...here he does not knw what is love ...he never felt it realised it or seen it...he worships only money πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

He represented him to antara... just like the way he is... he didn't fake... He showed that he was heartless, rude, arrogant, merciless... he didn;t even cared if antara would accept him like that or not... yup he know already that she didn't have anyother option rather than him but still... he is the kind of guy who never waited from approval from other side... if he have to get something he will get... He will posses his belonging straightly firmly... U don;t know just loved this touch... u know what i guessed that in first encounter he wil try to show himself as a decent moderate guy in front of antara... but he didn't... it prooves that he might be dark, ruthless but still he is honest somehow and loyal... And please keep it like that... keep this tension intact between raghu and antara... in ur storyline.. keep scaring me... he he he...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ...
haha i wll try my level best yedi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
cause i am ready to be scared for rantara and for vamp's story... i just wanted this errie feeling cause it is like the nectar dose for me,πŸ˜†... Bas yaahin meri deand hain ki rantara ke beach ki tension bani rahein... main bhi gone case hoon..... Jab har koi romance ka demand karta raheta hain.. main tension ka demnd karta raheta hoon...πŸ€ͺ.. forum girls will kill me someday for asking more dark shades IN A DARK STORY!!πŸ˜†...
haha haan chances toh hai ...mereko bhi marneki supari dedegi main aisi story likh rahi hun
SOrry yaar.. pata nahin kya pagal bakbak karti gayi...πŸ˜†... ayi thi review dene par pata nahin kya kucch kahe gayi...🀣
And at last
should i mention it...
IT WAS BRILIANT WITH EEVERY FEELING... SUSPENSE, EERINESS, FATAL ATTARCKTION BETWEEN RANTARA AND GROWING TENSION...
LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT...
UPDATE SOON...😎
AND I LOVE U... ❀️
AND SORRY FOR BAKBAK AGAIN...πŸ€ͺ
haha ur bak bak was awesome ...it made my day ...and gave me the enthu to write the next part ...rest of the yedis r dhamkaofying me to update JAAN ...but tu samajh rahi hai na ...merese abh bas yehi story likhi jarahi hai ...jaan bad me likhungi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
luv u luv u luv u ...muyaaah

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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Pampi ji.. lagta hain hum dono kii life khatre mein hain...πŸ˜†πŸ€£
Yaar kya kahoon... Dark story kaa bhi alag nasha hain... which i can full on feel here... and i ;LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS DARK RAGHU...🀣...please don;t make him soft...πŸ€ͺ,,,chahe sari yediyan mujhe jooti maarte rahein fir bhi i will demad for dark raghu... u know me... galti teri hain... u made me fall in love even with this such a dark charecter...
Aur itna acha update ke liye... i really feel to gift u something... jyada kuch too nahin de sakti... bas yee le... just recently i made this... hope tujhe acha lage...πŸ˜†
http://i.imgur.com/3Xm3WwG.png
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Aur haan.. tere iss chapter ko parke i became so inspired ki main apni OS ka chaoter likhne baith gayi...🀣
and i understand yaar... abhi Agar Jaan update karne jayegi too iss story kaa asar uspe bhi paregaπŸ˜†... iss liye i don't think ki tujhe abhi jaan update karna chahiye... main jaanti hoon kyun ki main iss phase se guzar chuki hoon... iss liye i think ki tujhe pahele sathiya khatam karna chahiye...
Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
omg!!..it was SUPERB pamz!!!..kya cheez hai RAghu!!!😲...seriously pampz..his character is so dominating yr..😳...is villain se to pyar hogaya mujhe...❀️.hehe.πŸ˜†.he cleared his examination n no-one suspect on him ki ye suddenly kahan se aagya?😲..n apne ek jasoos ko bhi bheja ye mother bhi bhut brainy hain..πŸ˜†.mm,buntiya got biggest shock of their life.😲...i think ye baat raghu ko pata hogi ki peter saari infos le rha haiπŸ˜‰..aisa to ho hi nhi sakta ki raghu se koi baat chupi rahe.πŸ˜†..n his encounter with antara it was so weird for antu...aisa koi krta hai kya?.😑..dara diya bacchi ko!!!! πŸ˜†i think sirf raghu hi kr sakta hai aisa..robin ko bhi usne hi manipulate kr diya hoga...beachare robin ka dil tut gayaπŸ₯Ί aur cake khaya raghu ne.🀣...the way he behaved with her..uske baad to antara ka gussa santve aasmaan pr😑...she don't want to marry with him..will she succeed to convince her mother ?..😲waiting eagerly for next part yr...Raghu's dark shade has so many colors...
thanks fr updating yr...πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
My goodness! You just left me speechless! Cake wala part..hayee may kiya bolu? Aagey kiya hoga ye soch soch ke pasina aa rahi hai. You've written it so well. Way to go girl! Cant wait for next part. Love you for this update. Mwaah.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
OMG this was amazing yaar
This story is dark
Looks like raghu has started to have feelings already
machmach and ban omg they seemed hell shocked
Please dont make this story too dark, give some lighter updates as well where there is less darkness and more light
Why did robin say no to her??? was it somewhere raghus planning??
Raghu is seriously behaving weirdly with her, licking and eating the cake from her face hmm thats quiet weird, poor antu feels lonely and sad i feel so sorry for her :(
overall loving the whole story but confused as well who is robin?? why does he want antu???
Just waiting until everything is cleared and over otherwise my brain would become dhai
now Please cont asap and update JAAN as well :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: ifians

Pampi ji.. lagta hain hum dono kii life khatre mein hain...πŸ˜†πŸ€£

Yaar kya kahoon... Dark story kaa bhi alag nasha hain...hahahaha yesss i admit πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ which i can full on feel here... and i ;LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS DARK RAGHU...🀣...please don;t make him soft...πŸ€ͺ,,,chahe sari yediyan mujhe jooti maarte rahein fir bhi i will demad for dark raghu... u know me... galti teri hain... u made me fall in love even with this such a dark charecter...
yes dont worry yehan Raghu dark hi rahega ...otherwise story kamatlap nahi rahega if i make him soft but yes there wll some other shades also which wll be revealing but that wd be confusing ...πŸ˜‰
Aur itna acha update ke liye... i really feel to gift u something... jyada kuch too nahin de sakti... bas yee le... just recently i made this... hope tujhe acha lage...πŸ˜†
http://i.imgur.com/3Xm3WwG.png
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†ft
dear tera gift sahi me mera dil jeet liya ...wow what a lovely happy loving Rantara faces ...loved it sooo much ...only u can create such master pieces ...lovely and fantabulous ..dekhtehi dil khush ho gaya ...
Aur haan.. tere iss chapter ko parke i became so inspired ki main apni OS ka chaoter likhne baith gayi...🀣
and i understand yaar... abhi Agar Jaan update karne jayegi too iss story kaa asar uspe bhi paregaπŸ˜†... iss liye i don't think ki tujhe abhi jaan update karna chahiye... main jaanti hoon kyun ki main iss phase se guzar chuki hoon... iss liye i think ki tujhe pahele sathiya khatam karna chahiye...
yes you r 100 % correct ...abh jaan likhungi toh Jaan ka Raghu bhi dark ho jayega for sure ...hahaha...waise bhi wahan Raghu thoda gusse mein hoga ...wo likhungi toh shayad dark Raghu wahan bana dungi ...gadbad ho jayega ...πŸ˜†
isliye abhi sirf Yeh Kya Kiya ...Sathiya updates ayenge ...haha ...i know u r happy ...πŸ˜†

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