Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 23

Originally posted by: pampz

Sanji u really liked this update so much ???? ohh My God ...am in cloud nine then ...am really glad yaar if i make u really happy ... So sanji Gundi wakes up 5 O clock in the morning !!!! thats really good . is that the time when u write ur super wonderful stories ????

dear tere stories ke aage meri update kuch bhi nahi (i really mena it yaar...be it romance entertainment or twists u r the queen of this forum...👏 ) ...😃and when i get so lovely comments from u ..it means a lot to me ...it really gives me the enthu to write down the next part ...thank you😃

and i wll try to update soon

luv u gundi😆

Originally posted by: ifians

Okk pampu jii i am here finally... taking a deep breath... i am going to start...😆.,.. bear me for now..

Okk so as usual i loved this update over all... every thing was described beautifully in detail... specially the surrounding pf the resort and the residence of Viral singhaniya... from the beautiful scenario to the crystal cutting glass everything fitted on the scene and draws a full picture in front of readers eyes... cudoes to you for this.👏...
I loved some beats of this update very much... i am gonna mention that one by one.. so please be patient 😆

First of all i loved the beat when antara felt hesitant seeing raghu's car as she remembered the last night memory. it was really horrible for her if we go through her mind and also add to that i loved the fact that raghu understood antara's condition at that moment and in his unique he forced her inside the car..😆.. i loved the small eyelock scene just aftermath the moment... apart from his masculinity or physical strength... i think raghu's eyes are his most powerful organ of his body... his one glance was enough to dominate antara... or even anyone.. right?!😆

Second.. Antara's fear to lose chilly. really it was obvious as she was always so possessive about chilly as she hid her all the time whenever someone came to adopt her in the orphanage. even chilly never left her.. but for the first time, even chilly was so comfortable with raghu that she almost forgot her antara di.. she was enjoying her time being with raghu, the most weirdest and dangerous guy she ever met in her life. Also i think was evident that from the very first meet of them, raghu was capturing her everything beat by beat... and he has now successfully captured one of her most precious treasure chilly... and apart from all he asured that he would capture her everything and her fully saying the most most fearful yet most inetnse word to antara at that moment... Tu Meri Hain!!... Sigh!! i felt sometime for that poor girl.. it was every girls dream to hear those words form the person whom she loves but she heard those words from the most weirdest man of her life whom she was mostly afraid now... although she felt something different inside when she heard those words from raghu... but steal apart from everything the fear is most dominant in her sight.. obviously.. don't know how much more she has to face.,.. what is stored for her in future.. specially when she would come to know real motive of raghu...
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I will take small pause in between from my points to mention about those conversation between viral sighnaiya his secretary and son... a helpless father trying hard to bring back his son to right path and he is ready to do anything for that.. but like seriously... jyotish?!!!🤔... one star can change another peoples star... come on man.. this is 21st century... i don't mean that the knowledge of jyotish is fraud or something else.. to me each and every knowledge has some strong base... nothing is for waste... but if a human is bad by nature he can't be changed until he himself understands and ready to repent for his did... and a evil soul like viral's son is worth changing to me.. so doing any kind of jyotish or something else wouldn't help him rather than would make him worst.. in a way its right that he is also responsible for his son's downfall... i think there is much more to reveal about those people now.. so i will stop heere now😆... and i got some hint that where the story is moving...😆... though i won't mention it here...i don't wanna break the suspense... dekhte hain mera andaza sahi hain ki nahin..😆
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now back to my fav points..

3rd point... u know i love raghu and chilly's bonding..😳.. they make so warm moments... here i also love how raghu felt different while carrying chilly in his arms... and ohho she rubbed her watery nose in his shirt!!😆... it shows that just like antara raghu is slowly becoming chilly's secure resort...😳

Raghu has managed expert in handling anatara😆... and their thoughts are obviously different from each other...😆.. where one is always worried about everyones happiness and let go of her possession and other didn't want to let go of his fav thing for anyones sake😆... where antara thinks that if you want to force something on anyone it won't do any good.. rather than it will cause death and raghu.. well he believed to get his every belonging by hook or crook😆... well this is their difference by nature.. and no one can do anything about that😆... aur yee kya?!!... log kaheete hain kii shadi kee baad log apni biwwi kaa achal pakar leti hain yaar tum too shadi see pahele hii apni would be wife kaa anchal pakar pakar liya..🤣... arey raghu itna bhi mat darao apni titli koo... bechari nazuk sii larki hain... dar gayi too fir see nonstop rona suru kar degi.. as u know antara royegi to chilly bhi suru hoo jayegi... aur fir tumhe dono kaa rona dhone wala bhajan sun naa parega pure trip mein..😆.. nuksan tumhara hi hain boss!!🤪
Okk by far i love this parts of your update❤️... and now sorry vampy jii mere koo maarna mat..... par abb main kuch kahene wali hoon joo aap koo acha naa lage...
Update was so good but mujhe iss ki pace thora slow laga... may be it was only my thought... actually for these days i am habituated with sathiya's mind boggling goosebump giving super exciting updates... i don't mind that.. cause it was a light hearted eps and in all updates we can't get same😆... but i felt something was missing here... as i wanna say something... that drive from orphanage to resort was pleasant one and full of lovely moments... but i think u can cut it short a bit... it really looks a bit dragged for me.. (kaan pakar kee sorry agar aap koo meri baton kaa bura lage too..😭)... u know pampy u are one of a kind... ur every update is always precious to me... ur every scene of rantara drove me some depth of pure feeling which no one could ever do... making me lost, covering me with gosebumps... and i always cherish that feeling... u are the magician who create magic in my wonderland... i still remember while i was reading your prev update... even i was surrounding with so many people, chaos i felt lonely in a world of my own where no one was able to reach... there was only me and ur update... no one was there.. i took a deep long breath after finishing that chapter and finally landed back on world...😆
but while going through this update i really missed reaching to that depth... yeah its nothing to worry about... u are always awsome... and i love whatever u wrote... so don't feel bad about that... no one can change that how wonderfuk writer you are... may be it was just my hectic mode that i can't go to the depth of this update... or may be the rantara dayout didn't turn out to be as i expected.. i don't know what the reason... i always expect such unique scene from you naa... 😳
... and u never failed in that...😊.. i missed that pampy's uniqueness here a bit... but u don't need to be upset about that😳
Don't worry... whatever happens i won't deny that despite of anything i loved this update...😃... and waiting eagerly for ur next one... ...
I love you very much..🤗..please don't feel bad about my any words... 😊... and pen down this story just like the way u wanted it to shape... i always believe that all writer should have there freedom to progress their story on their own way.. and i am waiting eagerly to unfold this unique story further...❤️
SO thats all for now... and again... please don't bother about my words.. sorry if i upset you😭.. i never wanna do that.....
Love u a loads🤗

Originally posted by: pampz

i understand yaar Riyu what u r trying to express ...u don need to be sorry ...i know this update doesnt have any dil dharkane wali scene ...i couldnt put any ...though it was DATE of Rantara no doubt but again it wasn't a Date at all ...they r not a couple mad in love. I am just writing this story as it is coming in my mind ...sorry yaar it didnt make u happy like the previous one.

Ohh teri... main kya kahe rahi thi aur yee larki kya samajhne lagi!!... Lagta hain meri explanation mein garbar hoo gayi...😕... chalo i will try to make it clear now...

Pampu ek baat suno yaar... Mujhe dil dharkne wala scene yaa romantic scene kii bhookh nahin hain ji.. balki i always search for something new which make me content.. and u are one of them who always surprises me with ur every chapter...and i always waits eagerly for this surprise ine ach and every update... but in this update i really missed that surprise factor...

i knew very well that btwn raghu and antara there is nothing like romantic now and it is not at all possible... so i never expected it to be any romantic date like thing btwn them... u know my imaginative power is a bit high..🤪.. though i never wanted but i couldn't stop myself from imagine that how would be the day out... but yaar, u know wjat i feel... that resort was no doubt a really good place... but i didn't expected him to arrange the day out in any resturant or resort.. u know why.. cause to me it looked a bit cliche.. u can say its my personal opinion... and raghu in this story is dangerously different man... and i always expected something mind boggling from him... silly me naaa...🤪... i wanted there day out to be some unique way rather than in some usual public place or resort like other people... but u don't have to worry about that dear.. 🤗.. i am not at all disappointed by anything u write, i already said that whatever u write is so beautiful be it simplistic scene or any other scene.

sorry pampy agar tumhe iss baat kaa bura lage too... may be i don't know whats your plan😉... and i am pretty sure u will surprise me with your next update, right?!!😉😆 so don't worry about that... and i hope u don't mind again...🤗

i must admit this story is a bit negative...a bit dark ...n i really don know whether i wll be able to justify the story properly ...because with passing days am realising that am not made for a hard core totally negative heart wrenching story...lets see what happens i really don know how the story is gonna move in future ...and ultimately what shape it will take ...

yaar mere koo dark story see koi probolem nahin hain... infact mujhe too issi liye yee story itni pasand hain cause its has dark shade.. This darkness is the USP of this story.. u know i bealive that ddarkness has its own beauty... cause if there was not dark sky we won't ever be able to see the beaty of twinkling star... iss liye yee samajh loo kii mere koo dark story see koi problem nahin hain.. You just gi and do it in whichever way you wanted it to shape... mujhe koi problem nahin.. kyun ki mere koo pata hain tum joo bhi likhogi that will be best...

And what u say i really understand it yaar... penning down a dark story is not so easy for us.. meri halat too tujhe pata hii hain... Tera sukkon kee updates likhet likhte main kabhi kabhi khud rone lagti hoon.. likha nahin jata mujhse.. mujhe abhi bahut dar lag raha hain soch kee kii baad mein jaa kee main kya karungi... its true ki the story is not dark till the end... but there is a very dangerous dark phase at the middle and its just about to approach.. main kabhi kabhi sochti hoon ki main kaise woo sab likh paungi...likhungi gi bhi too logo kaa reaction kaisa hoga?!.. i don't know anything re... issi liye hum dono ki halat same boat pee sawar hain yaar... bas ek baat bata doon pampy... joo bhi hoo jayein don't compromise with the concept of ur story...kyunki iss concept hi hain joo mujhe magnet ki tarah khichta hain..😕.. buti know u will never do that😉

and the point u said about the astrologer is true ...and the irony is in my story the business tycoon helpless father tried everything to make his son a normal person ...doctors, psychologists black magic , different mind diversion, and what not ...almost everything on earth ...lastly he is trying and taking a chance on astrology and the powers of stars...

I really understood the helplessness of a father.,.but does he really think that the astrogy can change the instinct of any human being which comes from his upbringing and nature?! NO i don't think so.

in my story here astrology has some importance ...it is an ancient science and a very difficult mathematics ...if anyone can calculate it accurately then it might help someone in his life. lets see how Raajveer's dad is going to take advantage of it or it acts totally opposite on his son due to some mistake in calculating the stars' effects.

I already said that irespect each and every knowledge and valued them. astrogy is one of the ancient knowledge of human race and it can't be mazak... it may change someone's life.. but i will again say the same thing... for me.. the astrogy can't change the natural insticnt of a human as i think.. mr singhniya should have careful about the upbringing of his son then he didn't have to do anything for that...

lets see how Raghu and Antara's life progress with time ...how the equation between them changes with circumstances good or bad ...most importantly what exactly is awaiting in Raghu and Antara's upcoming life. AND yess here in my story Chilly is going to take a really integral part in rantara's life.

i am waiting to see that...😉

Luv u yedi for ur deep analytical review. i always wait for ur comment u know and i wll continue it for u only even if other yedis dislike it utterly. but to my surprise some of my lovely yedis are giving me encouragement for this story ...am really happy for that .

why not... i told u everyone will like this story...😉

till my next update u need to bear this boring one and dear am not sure what wll happen next😉😆 hosakta hai tu yeh story padke bhag jaye kahin ...

Oye kaushis kar kee dekh loo... bhagne wali nahin hoon main.. tujhe kya pata main kya cheez hoon...😎.,.itna bhi asan nahin hain riyu kaa bhagana 😉

luv u dear

love u too...🤗 aur haan ji.. mere ff pee bhi coment kar doo.. i updated new chap recently. haan its true ki maine bhi apne pura chapter kaa karela juice bana diya...... aap koo par kee guranteed nind aa jayegi..

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Originally posted by: honeybees22

Pampi..!😭😭 I'm so sowiw!! Mene tere updates review nai kiye!!

Pakka prommise will do them on weekend!