Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

omg!!..it was SUPERB pamz!!!..kya cheez hai RAghu!!!😲...seriously pampz..his character is so dominating yr..😳...is villain se to pyar hogaya mujhe...❀️.hehe.πŸ˜†.he cleared his examination n no-one suspect on him ki ye suddenly kahan se aagya?😲..n apne ek jasoos ko bhi bheja ye mother bhi bhut brainy hain..πŸ˜†.mm,buntiya got biggest shock of their life.😲...i think ye baat raghu ko pata hogi ki peter saari infos le rha haiπŸ˜‰..aisa to ho hi nhi sakta ki raghu se koi baat chupi rahe.πŸ˜†..n his encounter with antara it was so weird for antu...aisa koi krta hai kya?.😑..dara diya bacchi ko!!!! πŸ˜†i think sirf raghu hi kr sakta hai aisa..robin ko bhi usne hi manipulate kr diya hoga...beachare robin ka dil tut gayaπŸ₯Ί aur cake khaya raghu ne.🀣...the way he behaved with her..uske baad to antara ka gussa santve aasmaan pr😑...she don't want to marry with him..will she succeed to convince her mother ?..😲waiting eagerly for next part yr...Raghu's dark shade has so many colors...

thanks fr updating yr...πŸ€—

you r right dear ...aur koun hoga jo Robin ko manupulate karega ????? wo bat baad mein story mein reveal hoga ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ...
will she be successful to convince mother ??? hmmm dekhte hain kya hota hai ...Raghu kya karta hai ...
dear am sso glad that u liked this story and loved dark Raghu ...hahahaha ...thanx yedi ...it means a lot to me ...and again u r right Raghu's dark shade has so many colors ... it wll be revealing bit by bit ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: honeybees22

OMG this was amazing yaar

This story is dark
Looks like raghu has started to have feelings already
machmach and ban omg they seemed hell shocked
Please dont make this story too dark, give some lighter updates as well where there is less darkness and more light
aisa shayad nahi hoga re HInu !!!! ...Raghu has different shades in his char ...but it wll lead u to confusion ...πŸ˜‰
Why did robin say no to her??? was it somewhere raghus planning??
Raghu is seriously behaving weirdly with her, licking and eating the cake from her face hmm thats quiet weird, poor antu feels lonely and sad i feel so sorry for her :(
overall loving the whole story but confused as well who is robin?? why does he want antu???
plzz aage ka update padle yaar ...Robin koun hai pata chal jayega ...hahhahhaLOLLZZZπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
Just waiting until everything is cleared and over otherwise my brain would become dhai
now Please cont asap and update JAAN as well :)
sorry dear abh kuch din i wont be able to update Jaan ...nahi to wahan bhi Raghu wd become dark like this story ...πŸ˜†

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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

My goodness! You just left me speechless! Cake wala part..hayee may kiya bolu? Aagey kiya hoga ye soch soch ke pasina aa rahi hai. You've written it so well. Way to go girl! Cant wait for next part. Love you for this update. Mwaah.

thank you Sanji ...pasina pasina hoti reh πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...hahah ...thanx dear for loving this story ...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
kya nahi hoga?πŸ˜•
haww i cant wait😭
nahiii tune meri jaan leli yaar, no update for jaan for a FEW days is enough to kill me
Jaldi se ise update karke meri jaan ko bhi update karna😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: rima4ever

splendid superb stunning update

thanx Rima ...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
what shld I say !!!!
i ws a perfect update...
seriously lovibg dis avatar of raghu..
oh God!hw freaking dangerous n
heartless he is...he scared d hell out of antara..
kya style h...kaise he said k shaadi toh kr k
hi rhega n dat chodubga nh...
koi bh ladki hoti toh she wld hv been dead ...
loving everybit of dis update...πŸ˜›...
bt sametime feeling sry fr antara πŸ˜”...
kaise insaan se paala pd gy bechari ka...
n knw raghu k pass plan h koi to make mother..
agree to get antu married to him..
n robin k bh raghu ne hi daraya hoga 😑...
oh god what all he cld do...πŸ˜”...
yes loved d mm n buntiya part too πŸ˜†
dat ws also hilarious one...gd koi toh h hasane ko..
dear ur jst fab..keep writing..
loving d stry... n looking forward to bxt part..
lots of love n gd luck fr nxt part
tkcr ...n thanks 😊 πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: ankusanu

what shld I say !!!!
i ws a perfect update...
seriously lovibg dis avatar of raghu..
oh God!hw freaking dangerous n
heartless he is...he scared d hell out of antara..
kya style h...kaise he said k shaadi toh kr k
hi rhega n dat chodubga nh...
koi bh ladki hoti toh she wld hv been dead ...
loving everybit of dis update...πŸ˜›...
bt sametime feeling sry fr antara πŸ˜”...
kaise insaan se paala pd gy bechari ka...
n knw raghu k pass plan h koi to make mother..
agree to get antu married to him..
n robin k bh raghu ne hi daraya hoga 😑...
oh god what all he cld do...πŸ˜”...
yes loved d mm n buntiya part too πŸ˜†
dat ws also hilarious one...gd koi toh h hasane ko..
dear ur jst fab..keep writing..

loving d stry... n looking forward to bxt part..
lots of love n gd luck fr nxt part
tkcr ...n thanks 😊 πŸ˜ƒ

Ohh thank u so much PRI πŸ˜ƒ...u r one of the very few yedis who r liking this dark SS of mine ...it means a lot to me whn u appreciate my story ...really am getting back the energy to write down the next part ...haha ...luv u dear
and yess u r right Robin ka patta saf kiya Raghu nehi ...aur koun karega ????LOLZZZ πŸ˜†...it wll be revealed after wards in the story ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Main kya bolu...😲...sab ke mindblowing n awesome reviews k baad...πŸ˜•...
kuch bacha hi nahi yaar...bas ek hi word sooj raha hai is waqt...INTENSE...mera toh yahi haal hota hai...updates mein khokar...
..story se lekar characterisation tak... sab kuch mindblowing n mindboggling hai...awesome yaar...just loving it...very intriguing...πŸ‘...
itne predictions n anxieties ho rahi hai...ki samaj nahi aa raha...k kya likhu aur kya nahi...
BRILLIANT...just WOW...⭐️...
Antara...naazo se pali par ab uski zindagi ulat jaayegi...😲...mujhe bhi is so-called TRUSTEE pe bilkul complete TRUST nahi ho raha hai..."kuch toh gadbad hai"... boss...kuch bahut bhaari gadbad lag rahi hai...
d way Raghu approached her for d 1st time...koi bhi ladki dar jaati aur aise hi reactions hote...u get d feeling of creepy obsessed stalker...aur agar pata chale ki...wohi rishta lekar aaya hai...aur aise behave kare jaise Raghu ne kiya...toh bas...disgust si feeling hi aathi hai...🀒...ab kaise Antu aage aanewaale situations ko handle karegi...yeh bataana mushkil hai...

kya character hai Raghu ka...dark, harsh but something---soft too hidden...very focussed n determined...n values time n money to d core...
he is having dis undescribable feeling after coming across Antara...😳...πŸ˜‰...
...i don't kno hw ur planning it...but i think if d change in character is involved it wud b just fantastic to go over it...ofcourse at a very very later stage...after experiencing all d dark traits of Raghu...d transformation from being d predator to a saviour...for me Raghu is always n will forever remain a golden-hearted gangster...d inevitable sadak-chaap gunda...😳...
d way he helped d liitle girl in collecting d lotuses made me have a glimpse of it...he cud have just walked away to fulfill his task...but he stopped n helped her...😳...n like d karmic-connection he remembered Antara when he smelled d lotus...😳...πŸ˜‰...

yeh sabkuch mere dimmag ka locha hai...aap kaise isse aage badhathi hai...iska toh bas intezaar hi kar sakte hain...

Continue soon...n keep going...πŸ˜ƒ...😊...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Pampz,
Wonderful update,
Raghu man !! Hes so harsh !!
Poor Antara..
The story just gets more gripping..
Update soon.
-Prerna
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Pampz,

Wonderful update,
Raghu man !! Hes so harsh !!
Poor Antara..
The story just gets more gripping..
Update soon.
-Prerna

thanx Preru ...πŸ˜ƒ
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