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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update πŸ‘
dr.kaul fixing antu's marriage
geeta ji is wit antu πŸ˜ƒ
raghu wss crying 😭 aww he loves her so much
rohan mm rukku πŸ‘πŸΌ
finally raghu nd gang on mission to get back antu πŸ˜‰
antu missed him badly
d guy πŸ˜† thinking of taking antu's frnz help 🀣
rantara hug nd kiss 😳
plz continue soon
its reslly interesting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update Sanju😊
Raghu n team reached Punjab
Aakash to seek help frm Antu's friendsπŸ˜†
Rantara moments loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
sanjini!!..my jaan..πŸ˜›
loved this chapter so much yr...😳
i really appreciate ur hardwork..ur skill..ur imagination..its just supperrbb!!!! lots of hugs for u!!!!πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
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raghu was soo desperate n antra too missing him alot!😳
n poor akash ne to abhi bas antu ka behave dekha hai..abhi to bhut kuch dekhan baki hai!!πŸ˜†
waiting fr fun n romantic moments!
love u dearπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
read both d updates 😊...
lovely n fantastic... ❀️...
raghu is dere to rescue antara frm dat dumbo.. πŸ˜†...
grt update ..keep updatingg...
tkcr sanjini πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

sanjini!!..my jaan..πŸ˜›

loved this chapter so much yr...😳
i really appreciate ur hardwork..ur skill..ur imagination..its just supperrbb!!!! lots of hugs for u!!!!πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
raghu was soo desperate n antra too missing him alot!😳
n poor akash ne to abhi bas antu ka behave dekha hai..abhi to bhut kuch dekhan baki hai!!πŸ˜†
waiting fr fun n romantic moments!
love u dearπŸ˜ƒ


Suchi my baby doll..thank you! I'm eagerly waiting for your hugs yaar. More romance on the way stay tuned. Love you too babe!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ankusanu

read both d updates 😊...
lovely n fantastic... ❀️...
raghu is dere to rescue antara frm dat dumbo.. πŸ˜†...
grt update ..keep updatingg...
tkcr sanjini πŸ˜‰


Thank you priyanka! You are such a sweet girl..you always comment no matter what. Mwaah to you sweetheart!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you once again for your love and encouragement through your feedbacks. I really appreciate it very much.
Part 13 updated please enjoy and let me know. .thanks.
Chapter 13
Antara came downstairs to find everyone at the dinner table. Akaash's family were no where to be seen. Only antara's friends and momma and noor apa were present at the table. Momma asked when she saw antara coming towards the table. "Raghu kaha hai beta? "Bhaai kuch khaaya nai hai antara. Rohan said. "Jaa bula la ussey beta. Geeta said. "Arey jaao na antara warna woh bhuka soh jaayega. Ruksana said. Antara was thinking about their close encounter on the chath. She was still breathing unevenly. With a trembling feature she headed towards his room. She knocked on the door. "The door is open come inside. Raghu said from inside. Slowly turning the knob she entered. Raghu was doing something with his phone when he felt her presence and turned towards the door. Their gaze met once again. "Woh khaana taiyaar hai..aap aajaaiye. She said keeping her gaze lowered. "It's ok miss kaul you guys carry on mujhey bhook nai hai. He got busy with his phone. "Arey aysey kaysey bhook nai hai? She asked. "Bas aysey hi miss kaul. He replied. "Achaa theek hai may khaana yaha par le aati hu." Nai miss kaul its fine. "Aap yahi ruk ye mai bas abhi aayi. Antara didn't let raghu to protest. She came downstairs. "Nai aaye bhaai? Rohan asked. "He said he's not hungry. Antara said. Noor apa and Geeta left. Mm ruksana also left. Rohan antara were left alone. "Abh batah kiya baat hai. Rohan asked. "Rohan woh mujhey tumarey bhaai ke liye khaana bedroom mey lejaana hai. "Darti hu ki kahi kisiney dekh liya toh problem hojaaygi. Antara said almost whispering. "Bas itni si baat aur muh latka liya. "Take a plate and go i'll be on the watch. Rohan gave her hope. "Smiling she quickly put whatever on a plate and thanking rohan she headed towards raghu's room. She locked thedoor after her and looked at raghu who was sleeping. Leaving everything on the table she sat on the bed beside his half naked body. Looking at him without his shirt she felt hot all of a sudden. She gulped. Clearing her throat she finally spoke."sunye..may khaana le aayi..aap khalijiye na. Still raghu didn't move. Antara shook his shoulder gently which sent currents through their system. Antara felt butterflies. Antara saw her touch on his skin was giving him goosebumps. "Uthye na please. "Kiya hai miss kaul kaha na mujhey bhook nai hai. With a tearful eyes and a saddened face she sat there quietly. Sitting there for quite a while she felt sleepy. Raghu didn't get up. Yawning she slept beside him. Unknowingly antara slept with him on his bed beside him for the whole night. She woke up when his hand came and rested on her bosom. With a hitched breath she sat up with a jerk. Raghu opened his eyes when he felt movements. They both looked at each other. Raghu's gaze then shifted to the food on the table. He quickly sat up." Miss kaul I'm sorry. ..With a miffed face antara said. "May itni pyaar sey aapke liye khaana lekar aayi thi aur aap..aapko na apni parwa hai aur na dusro ki..aap ke saath saath may bhi bhooki soh gayee woh bhi aapke jaagne ka intazaar kartey kartey. Antara got up with tears in her eyes." Aapko abhi bhi bahut nind aarahi hai na?" Toh sohtey raho aap khumbhkaran ki tarah." Akaash is taking me out in the village. .you could have planned something to stop him from taking me with him lekin nai aapko toh sohna hai.." I dont think ki aap mujhey bacha paaogey akaash se. "May jaa rahi hu. Antara was leaving when raghu blocked her way." Ye kiya kar rahe hai aap jaano do mujhey. "I'm sorry miss kaul..dubara aysi gatli kabhi nai hogee I promise. Raghu cupped her cheeks giving her shock waves. "May raat din jaagta rahunga ..may sohunga nai..aur ye joh khaana aap laayi thi na..may issey abhi khaaleta hu..bina garam kiye ...bas ek baar sirf ek baar mujhey maaf kardo please. Antara looked deep in his eyes and said. "Issi tarah maafi maangtey rahjaaoge aur akaash mujhey lejaayega. Picking all the utensils she headed towards the kitchen. Raghu was speechless. "Ye kiya kardiya mayney yaar! "Woh raat bhaar bhooki pyaasi merey jaagney ka intazaar karti rahi aur may ghadey bechkar sohta raha? "Chal raghu kaam par lag jah warna der hojaayegi. "Kisina kisi tarah sey uss lomri sey bachana hoga miss kaul ko. Raghu ran his fingers through his hair. "Aur upar se gussa hai mujhsey ..manana bhi parega mujhey somehow. Moments later he came down to find out that miss kaul went out with the crap. "Bhaai how come you are late?" Rohan asked him " Woh may kuch zyaada der tak soh gaya tha. Replied raghu. "Sirf zyaada nai bahut zyaada raghu beta. Geeta said serving him breakfast. "Sorry auntie I cant eat I have to go behind miss kaul. Said raghu getting up. The trio followed him as he came outside the haweli. They had no idea in which direction to go. They knew that Bandar took antara to show her the farms and visit the gao. Thank God raghu got a jeep this morning by arrangement from his company. Hopping in they traveled to the farm areas but they couldn't find antara. Raghu was very worried for his antara. Antara on the other side was standing under a mango tree and asking akaash to climb up the tree to get her some ripe mangoes. "Antara ji I..I cant climb this tree..its too big may gir jaaonga! Akaash was acting like scary cat." Akaash ji aap merey liye itna sa kaam nai karsaktey? Antara asked." Antara ji I will buy you mangoes but I cant afford to fall down a tree! He said getting in his jeep. Antara made a face." Darpok kahi ka!" Bara ayaa muh utha kar mujhsey shaadi karney ke liye!" Duffar! Meanwhile rohan spotted them." Bhaai look over there! "Antara and that chimpanzee! Raghu drove in that direction. Antara was throwing stones and dandas on the mangoes. The darpok chimpanzee was sitting in the jeep and watching antara. Raghu parked beside his jeep. He instantly recognized them as antara's friends. Akaash got out as the other four jumped out. Akaash introduced himself as antara's fiance. Everyone's face hardened. Antara was still busy with throwing stones at the mangoes. Raghu approached her when rohan said to akaash." Akaash bhaai ek ladki kab sey try karrahi hai aam thodney ke liye aur aap yaha baithye baithey tamasha dekh rah hai?" You should help her man! "Nai..I..I cant climb a tree. He said in a shaky voice. "Achaa..abh aap dekhye how my brother climbs up the tree. Rohan said proudly. Raghu touched antara's shoulder as she twitched her head to see who it was. "Aap?She was excited to see him there but she pretended to be angry. She pouted and looked away. "Aap ko fursat milgayee soney sey? "Aap naraaz ho? Raghu asked her. "Jee! She said. Raghu wanted to say something when ruksana joined them. The ladies started their chattar pattar when Raghu climbed the the tree. Akaash's jaw dropped open! "There goes my brother! Rohan shouted on craps face! Akaash being so sensitive covered his ears. Mm laughed. Rohan was cheering when antara looked up at the tree. Her eyes widened! Her heart pounded on her! "Hey bhaghwan ji ye upar kab char gaya? Raghu picked some ripe mangoes and asked Antara to catch them as he threw them from up the tree. Antara excitedly jumped and catched the mangoes one at a time. A wide smile was playing on her lips. Raghu felt a feeling of contentment seeing her all bubbly and happy! After passing all the mangoes to antara he sat on a branch and watched her reaction and expressions. Rohan helped antara to wash the mangoes while mm was interviewing akaash. Antara sat on a bench and started to suck on the mangoes when akaash said. "Antara ji chalye..otherwise we'll be late..you can have the mangoes in the jeep while I'm driving. "Mana kardo miss kaul. Raghu wanted her to refuse him when antara said. "Akaash ji aap jaaiye..I will come with my friends. Akaash didnt like it when antara refused him so he tried his luck again. "Antara ji I want to show you some more things. .aap chaliye merey saath. "Akaash ji..it's ok..we can go some other time..if you want you can stay otherwise you can leave but I'm not coming. Akaash was really upset but in front of her friends he didn't say anything so he left without saying anything. Everyone came together to do a high five. Raghu was lost in antara once again. The way antara sucked the mangoe ..the pulp spread all over her mouth and cheeks. Raghu was mesmerized. Sitting on the branch still..he felt like kissing..licking and sucking the pulp away from her face. He gulped looking at her juicy lips covered with the mango pulp. Antara felt his piercing gaze on her. She looked up at him who was still lost. Ruksana moved to where mm and rohan were having mangoes. .giving rantara some space. "Aap nai khaao ge? She asked him. "Aap ney pucha hi nahi. He said innocently. "Fir aaiye na..there's a few left. Antara said while raghu came down . He stood beside antara while she washed him a mango. "Bhaai you guys carry on while we'll go for a walk through the village. Rohan said and winked at raghu. Raghu smile knowing why they wanted to leave him and her alone. "Ye lo . Antara handed him a mango. All alone now they sat under the mango tree and enjoyed their mangoes. Antara giggled looking at his mango covered face. Raghu again got mesmerized by her laugh. "Baccho ki tarah khaatey hai aap! Antara said while wiping his cheeks with the back of her palm. Sensations ran through him from head to the sole of his feet. He gulped. "Aap bhi bilkul baccho ki tarah khaati hai. Unable to suppress and fight with his rising desires he grabbed her hand as the half eaten mangoes fell from their hands. He pulled her behind the tree. Startled antara started to pant. "Kiya..kiya kar rahey aap..ch..choro mujhey! Antara was caged between the tree and his powerful arms. "You cleaned my cheek now its my turn to clean yours. Antara's eyes widened when he leaned and licked her cheek which sent shivers down her spine. She trembled badly. "J..jane do mujhey. .she pushed on his arms but her try was wasted. "Choro na please. .Antara pleaded. He kissed her other cheek and licked the pulp giving her a prick from his rough stubble . Antara felt weak in her knees. She forgot to breathe when his lips and tongue moved all over her face. She squeezed shut her eyes. Butterflies once again took over her belly. "Please chorona mujhey. .woh rohan aajaayega. Raghu didn't care. Raghu kissed her complete face but left her lips for the right time. Panting heavily she opened her eyes. Her whole frame was trembling and raghu felt her shaking in his arms. "Kiyu kartey ho bar bar ye sab? She asked looking into his eyes when raghu stopped his sweet torment. He cupped her cheeks. " Bahut jald bataonga may. He took her tiny frame in his arms. Whenever he took her in his arms antara felt good. She can stay forever in his arms. His arms tightened around her..shielding her from this world. When she felt his warmth she squeezed more into him and buried her head in his rock hard chest. Inhaling each others scent they stood there in each others arms . "Kiya may ye samjho ki aapney mujhey maaf kiya? Raghu whispered in her ears and in the process he brushed her earlobe with his intoxicating lips. Antara felt another shiver chilling her spine. "Mayney aapko subha hi maaf kardiya thaa . Said antara. "Friends again? Raghu asked . "Friends again she said. Both smiled gazing into each others eyes.
Precap: Raghu didn't come to haweli that night. Worried antara asked rohan. Rohan tells her that bhaai will spend the night under a tree about some blocks away from haweli. Antara asks the reason. Rohan said that bhaai promised her that he will not sleep and keep watch over her. Antara comes to know that he also didn't eat since morning. Antara with some food and a lantern she heads out to look for raghu. Their cute moments coming up. Stay tuned. Cheers!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
loved rantara moments 😊
antu was so angry πŸ˜† called raghu kumbkharan 🀣
Poor raghu
antu went out wit d guy πŸ˜• but raghu πŸ˜ƒ followed
really interesting precap
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...nice update...
liked deir ruthna manaana...
waitin for more...n precap...means more romance...😳...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read all the chapters in one go...n I think I m in love with ur story...
Plz do pm me next tym u update...
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