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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Hi SanjiniπŸ€—
Missed u too
Beautiful update,i loved itπŸ˜›
Rantara moments really cute
Raghu's family knew about Antara's marriage,no need to worry now
I don't know wat 2 say yaar d update's really fantastic n i enjoyed it very much
Precap is very interesting
Eagerly waiting 4 d next update
continue soon😊
Edited by AnjaliRantara - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
hiii sanjani
i am divya new in this forum
i like ur both stories
tum apni stories me raghu ko
jyada hi uncontrolable bana deti ho
bas mouka milte hi kiss
omg itna romantic stories hai tumari
i really love ur stories
carry on
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
welcome back sanjini!!!
lovely update...n quite gd one πŸ˜ƒ
full on rantara romance goin on ❀️...
n antu got admission too in law clg..
coz of raghu πŸ˜› ... awww antara n raghu ki
gharwale toh already green signal de chuke h..
nw want antu to confess sooon...
precap is wowww 😳
nice n update sooon
Edited by ankusanu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: salini143

hiii sanjani

i am divya new in this forum
i like ur both stories
tum apni stories me raghu ko
jyada hi uncontrolable bana deti ho
bas mouka milte hi kiss
omg itna romantic stories hai tumari
i really love ur stories
carry on


Hi divya..welcome to my stories. Thanks alot..please continue to like and comment. Stay tuned darling.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Hello everyone I'm back with my another update. Thanks for your lovely comments. I appreciate it very much. Please read enjoy and comment.
Chapter 11

Time was flying. Antara was really busy nowadays. Her work..tuition and then her part time study. There was no "me" time in antara's life. The other side raghu was busy too. Business meetings. .appointments. .interviewing clients and so on. With his busy schedules he manages to spare a minute for antara. He comes to her cabin or they talk on the phone. Raghu was deeply in love with her but antara just liked him alot. Even Mr and Mrs Mehta loved antara alot. Whenever she comes to Mehta house for rohans tuition she also gives hand in the kitchen. Raghu's mom was really proud of her. Rohan sometimes calls her bhaabi which leaves her embarrassed. Raghu was out of city with important business meeting. Antara gets restless whenever he's not around. I guess she was missing his presence in her life. Today when antara came for tuition. .the Mehta house was being decorated nicely. Antara asked rohan what was the occasion. "Bhaai ki shaadi horahi hai. "Kiya? Antara was shocked. Seeing her expression rohan burst out laughing. Coming near to her rohan asked. "Aapko jalan horahi hai? Antara quickly composed herself. "Nai..may kiyu jalungi bhala? Said antara and looked away. She took a deep sigh when rohan said. "Tomorrow is bhaai's birthday! "Issiliye ye sab taiyaari horahi hai. "Mom dad har saal bhaai ka birthday barey dhoom daam sey manatey hai..like feeding the hungry. .distributing food and clothing to the poor. "Acha? A big grin appeared on her face. "Unoney mujhey bahut saarey gifts diye hai I have to get him something too. Antara thought. "Rohan mujhey woh party ki raat waali kuch pictures chahi hai. Antara said. "Its in bhaai's room go get it..I'm leaving for my date. "Han han jaa na beta..saarey pictures raghu ke kamrey me hai..jaa le aa. Mrs Mehta said. Hesitantly antara went towards his bedroom. Mrs Mehta smiled. Antara stepped in his master bedroom. Without any reason her heart pounded on her. Antara tried to gulp as suddenly her mouth felt dry. Antara looked around for the album. Her eyes caught his messy bed. His denim..vest..shirt and towel were all over the bed! Antara smiled remembering when he threw his wet towel on her face at the campground. She folded all his clothes nicely and made his bed. Suddenly her eyes fell on something under his pillow. Moving the pillow she saw pictures in there. Her eyes widened when she saw the pictures were her and his! They were dancing in the picture. Antara's heart thuded.."why is he keeping my pictures under his pillow? "Kiya chal raha hai uskey dimaag me? Antara was bombarding herself with questions. She chose a picture where they were dancing in each others arms. .her arms were around his neck and his were around her waist. Grabbing that picture she came out. "Mila beta? Mrs Mehta asked. "Ji auntie. .may abh chalti hu. Antara said. "Theek hai..kal party me zaroor aana. Nodding her head and bidding good bye antara left. Whole night antara spent thinking about why he had her pictures under his pillow. Next day was Saturday. Antara had some extra classes in the law college. And raghu was coming back today. She knew he will be really busy today as it was his birthday. "I will wish him when i'll see him tonight she thought. Bidding good byes she left for college. On the other side sitting in his car..raghu touched the saree that he bought for his miss kaul. A black netting saree with copper border..pallu was nice with beads and a deep cut blouse. Raghu smiled thinking how beautiful she will look in this. He arrived home. Mom dad wished him and rohan hugged him tight. Everything was ready for the hungry and the poor. They just had to leave. "Rohan tum mera ek kaam karoge? He asked rohan. "Ha bol na bhaai. Rohan replied. He quickly wrote a note and gave it to rohan. "Give this note and this packet to miss kaul and tell her..nai tu kuch mat kahna..may hi kah dunga. "Abh jaa mera muh kiyu dekh raha hai! "Bhaai may kabutar nai hu..lekin aaj aap dono ke liye kabutar hi sahi. Rohan said like a innocent kid. Rohan left as raghu shook his head. Antara was on break when rohan reached her college. She came running when she saw rohan coming towards her." Kiya huwa rohan? "Tum yaha kaysey?"sab theek hai na? Antara was kind of worried seeing him there. "Sab theek hai lekin I'm not. "Bhaai ne mujhey kabutar bana diya hai. Antara laughed. "Kabutar? "Ha..aur nai toh kiya..ye lo bhaai ka sandesh aur ye taufa. He handed the things to confused antara. "Aur ha shaam ko party hai toh jald aajana warna bhaai cake nai kaatey ga. "Chalta hu. He left antara with an 0 face. She went to a quite and lonely place. Sitting down on the brick bench she opened the letter."Good morning. .sorry may khud nai aa saka..I'm a little busy today. "Taufa bhej raha hu. .issey pahn kar shaam ko party me aajana. "I will wait for you aur ha jab tak aap nai aaoge I won't cut the cake so dont keep me waiting. "See you soon. Raghu. With a trembling hands she opened the packet. She was stunned at the beautiful saree in her hands! Her jaw dropped open when she saw the deep cut blouse. "Ye pahn kar may unkey saamney kaysey jaaongi? All of a sudden antara felt heat sweep over her. Her cheeks were blushing hot. Putting away everything in her bag she headed towards her classroom. Raghu and his family finished feeding the hungry and distributing the kaprey to the unfortunate. Finally they came home. Mom got busy with the food and stuff. The hall was nicely decorated. Soon it was evening and the guests started to arrive. Raghu was desperately waiting for his miss kaul. Meanwhile the law college was locked down . The police detected some terrorist activities around the college. The students were told to stay inside until further notice by the police. "Oh God abh kiya hoga..i'll be so late." I'm not sure if I'll be able to go home tonight. Antara sat down with a sad face. Time was flying. She wanted to call and let raghu know the situation and that she won't make it. But her phone was dead! "Gee I'm stuck! "What if truly he doesn't cut the cake?" Gussa hojaayega mujhsey..patah hai mujhey. Antara had no idea what to do. Time was seven o'clock. Raghu was pacing the hallway. Everyone was enjoying the party. He called antara so many times but her phone was switched off. Even rohan tried but no luck! Raghu was pissed off. Rohan wanted to try calling her home but raghu stopped him. "Rayney do rohan..woh nai aayegi. "Mom ko bolo khana lagay..aur ye cake kaat kar logo ko baant do. "Lekin bhaai..Raghu didn't let rohan finish. "Rohan ..do what I say please. .and no more questions. "I'm going to my room. Rohan opened his mouth to say something when mom stopped him. She knew how ziddi her son was and how angry he can get. Raghu left ."ye sab kiya horaha hai rohan? Mom asked. "Patah nai mom antara phone nai utha rahi. "Toh ghar phone karo na beta. Mom said. "I cant mom bhaai ne mana kiya hai. "Mujhey lagta hai kuch huwa hai warna antara zaroor aati. "Mujhey bhi aysa lagta hai mom. They were interrupted by Mr Mehta. Mom explained everything to him. He also thought something must be wrong. Anyway food was served. .everyone asked about raghu but rohan handled the situation nicely. Rohan was worried about his brother. He cant see him upset and unhappy on his birthday. He grabbed his car keys and drove towards antara's house. Reaching her place he found out about the lock out. Everyone was worried when the phone rang. It was the principal. He told mrs kaul it was safe to come and pick their children. Rohan ran towards his car and drove towards the law college. Speeding up he reached the college. He spotted antara waiting for a cab. Antara came running when she saw him. Rohan opened the door as she hopped inside. "Tu theek hai na? He asked her. "I'm fine rohan. .sorry I couldn't make it to the party. "Kaysi thi party? She asked. Rohan told her every single detail. "Bhaai didn't cut the cake and even didn't eat anything. Antara was feeling guilty. "Ye sab merey kaaran huwa hai na? "Antara we still have time we can still fix this."how?" He's upset aur abh tak toh soh gaya hoga. Antara said feebly. "We have four hours before midnight. .think fast..we can get a cake..you get ready and we'll leave in maybe two hours. Rohan was trying hard to find a way to cheer up his brother and only one person can bring a smile to his brothers face was antara. .his miss kaul. When antara and rohan arrived home the kaul family were already sleeping along with others. "Rohan. .I think I will just bake a cake. .aur tum meri madat karo please. Collecting all the ingredients rohan mixed everything in a bowl while antara preheated the oven. Soon the cake was baking. Antara looked for cake decorations. "Dont worry about the candles we have lots at home. Rohan said. "Theek hai ..keep an eye on the cake i'll go and get ready. Said antara and headed towards her bedroom. Rohan was taking the cake out from the oven when antara appeared on the stairs like an angel. Rohan almost touched the hot cake just by looking at her beauty. "Bhaai is so lucky! "What? Antara said coming near him." Nai kuch nai. He quickly helped her with the icing and decorating the cake. It was 10:30 pm when they left towards Mehta house. Antara was nervous. "Patah nai kiya hoga? She exhaled. The house was quite and empty as all the guests hhad left. Rohan gave her candles and a lighter and showed her to bhaai's room. The door was locked. Thank God rohan had a spare key! Opening the door he said. "All the best..I'm counting on you to bring the smile back on my brother's face. "Jaa andar may kuch der baad aatah hu. Rohan left the panicking antara at the den of sleeping lion! "Oh God please meri madat karna. Taking a deep breath she entered his room. The room was somewhat slightly dark with few scented candles burning on the night stand. Her eyes caught him sleeping without his shirt ..antara felt very uncomfortable. Leaving the trolley she neared his bed. She had no idea how to wake him up. She finally spoke. "Sunye..As soon as he heard her soothing voice he opened his eyes! A excitement ran through his body. He quickly shut his eyes. He wanted her to pacify him..to pamper him. Her perfume was driving him nuts. He so much wanted to see her in that transparent saree. He gulped just imagining her in that saree with deep cut blouse. Antara waited but he didn't move. "Sunye na..She said again. Still no movement. She sat beside him. Her heart was racing like crazy. "Uthye na please. Raghu was enjoying this. Antara reluctantly held his shoulder and shook him gently. "Utho na..please uthjaao..Her voice started to choke. Her eye's were filling up. Raghu felt she was about to cry. So he sat up on the bed without looking at her."kiya hai miss kaul itni raat ko koi kissi ke ghar jaata hai kiya? Antara got up from the bed because he was raising his tone." I'm sorry ..woh mujhey aaney mey der hogayee. "Sirf der nai miss kaul it's too late..very late! His voice brought tears to her eyes. "May ye deney aayee thi aur ye cake mayne khu..khud banaya hai..aapke liye. "Happy birthday to you! She said and handed him the small gift that she brought for him. He didn't take it so she left it on the bed and started to leave when raghu jumped out of bed and blocked her way. Her tears streamed down. Raghu wiped her tears with his thumb. He then scanned her from top to bottom. She looked breathtakingly beautiful. Raghu was mesmerized. Antara kept her gaze lowered as fresh tears formed in her eyes. "Hatye na I have to go. She said. "Aap chalijaaogi toh mujhey cake kaun khilaayga.. ramesh ki biwi? Antara shot her gaze up! " ye ramesh ki biwi se aapko kiya matlab? Raghu burst out laughing! Antara knew he was pulling her leg. He grabbed her hand and made her sit down on the bed. "Waysey aap roh kiyu rahi thi? "Aap chilla joh rahey thay mujh par. "May mazaak kar raha tha yaar..I'm sorry. He said. He lifted her chin up. "You look beautiful miss kaul. Antara blushed and said" thanks and ek aur thanks for this saree. Raghu smiled. Antara was trying hard to avoid his well toned body with six pack and rock hard chest. Raghu detected her uneasiness. He grabbed his vest and while putting it on he asked her. "Abh batah der kiyu huwi ? Antara started her blah blah..while raghu sat there admiring her beauty. She told him everything in one breath." I get it now..you can breathe miss kaul. Antara felt shy. She put 26 candles on the cake and lit it. Raghu came and stood beside her..touching her body with his.Both felt goosebumps. Their gaze met..mahi tu moment. They were drowning in each others eyes when rohan cleared his throat from the doorway. Both of them quickly composed themselves. Mom dad also joined them. Antara was so embarrassed. She never thought his parents will see her alone with him in his room. "Bari pyaari lag rahi hai Antara. Mrs Mehta said and kissed her forehead. Antara blushed more. Rohan was busy taking pictures. "Make a wish and blow the candles mister ya fir ramesh ki biwi ko bulaao. Antara whispered. Raghu smiled and grabbed her hand! Antara was shocked! "Chorye..apney mom dad ke saamney..She twisted her hand that was securely imprisoned in his palm. Ignoring her he said."ok guys I'm gonna make a wish. Raghu closed his eyes and made a wish. His wished to have antara for the rest of his life as his wedded wife. He then blew the candles. Mom dad came and stood beside them. Rohan joined in singing happy birthday song. Raghu cut the cake and looked at antara. "Auntie uncle aap khilaao first. Antara said. Raghu still looked at her and squeezed her hand tighter. He wanted her to feed him first. "Arey nai beta..aap khilaao na first. Mom said..she understood her son's feelings very well. Raghu gestured her to feed him first. Antara took a piece and shoved it in his mouth! He never let her hand go even when mom dad fed him. Blessing him his parents left as it was very late. Rohan fed him and hugged him. "Happy birthday bhaai! "Thanks rohan!" Antara also thanked rohan for his help. She pulled his cheeks. ."Agar tum nai hotey toh may ye sab nai karpaati. "Thank you for bringing a smile on bhaai's face. Rantara covered his face with cake as he ran from there. Raghu locked the door from inside when antara said. "Mujhey bhi chalna chahi hai."itni bhi jaldi kiya hai miss kaul..kal chutti hai relax. "And you didn't feed me very well. He pushed the trolley to his bed and they both sat down. Antara's hand was sore but he wasn't letting her hand go. "Mera haath chorye na. "Nai chorunga! He said."chal abh achi tarah se cake khila and wish me. Antara cut another piece and fed him. He caught her icing covered hand and licked it. Antara felt butterflies as his tongue and lips spread its warmth on her fingers. She felt weak and dizzy. Her breath was dying on her when she pulled her hand! "Kiya kar rahey ho..chorye! Raghu smiled at flushed antara. "You will not wish me? He asked. "Happy birthday! She said. They once again stared into each others eyes. Just happy birthday wasn't enough for raghu. Didn't know why and how antara automatically reached for his cheek and kissed him. Raghu was stunned! Antara realized what she just did. Shying away she lowered her gaze. "It was tasty. Antara looked at him. " I meant the cake. He smiled. Taking a piece he fed her spreading some on her cheeks. Rubbing her lips in the process. Antara's breath hitched. He leaned on her and kissed away the icing from her cheek. Antara almost forgot to breath! He kissed her other cheek eating away the icing. Antara hissed as feelings were arising in her. "Thank you miss kaul. .this was the best birthday I ever had! Antara felt glad and happy. "Aap apna gift kholye na. She said. Raghu opened the gift with a smile on his face. "Wow! "It's beautiful miss kaul! He said excitedly. It was a beautiful frame with their dance wala picture. At the bottom it was written "FRIENDS FOR EVER" "im glad you like it! Antara said while getting up. Raghu stood up and pulled her in his arms. His hands roamed on her bare back. "Ek hug toh banta hai miss kaul! He whispered in her ears. Over shadowed by feelings and emotions antara at last broke the boundaries and hugged him tight. Raghu took a sigh of relief and enveloped her in his arms. She felt safe and secured here. What was happening to her? She was being drawn to him by some kind of Devine force. Who was he to her? Kiya rishta thaa dono ka? She felt like staying there for ever. Resting her head on his chest and wrapped around in his powerful arms she felt complete. She felt tears forming in her eyes. She didn't know why she was crying. Raghu lifted her chin and kissed her beautiful face. Didn't why antara couldn't rebel or resist him. Whatever he was doing she felt it right. He rained her face with his burning kisses leaving her lips for later. "Humey chalna chahi hai. She managed to say in between his kisses. "Hmm. He said. Taking a deep breath he grabbed his keys. Hand in hand they came downstairs. Mom was taking water for dad when she saw them coming down. Her heart leaped with joy seeing her son so happy. Her smile broadened when she saw lipstick on raghu's cheek! Suppressing her giggle she ran to her husband to break the news! Meanwhile rantara were heading towards antara's house. Antara was quite. "Are you ok? He asked kindly. Antara nodded. He stopped the car in front of her house. Opening the door to her side he said" kal baat kartey hai. "Jee...goodnight. she said and left." Goodnight. He said and stood there watching her hourglass figure disappear through the door. Smiling he sat in the car and drove away.
Precap: something happens. .antara ends up with her inlaws leaving raghu devastated. Raghu goes crazy when he finds out Dr kaul plans antara's marriage with her exhusbands brother. Raghu rohan mm ruksana leaves to bring antara back with the help of Mrs kaul. Stay tuned to find out how they enter antara's in laws place and how this four will fool the dulha to be. More fun and romance on the way. Stay tuned my jaans! Mwaah to all!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update πŸ‘
raghu's perfect birthday 😳
antu did so much attempt for him
aww rohan πŸ˜ƒ is really cute brother
rantara moments 😳
raghu's parents r very nice
antu kissed nd hugged him 😳
precap interesting
pls continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Muwaah to you for such a lovely update. Rohan inviting Antara to Raghu's birthday. Raghu gifted Antara a saree. Waa kya baat hai. Antara couldn't come on time. Humare ziddi Raghu ne bhi Cake nahi kaata. Antara kya kya nahi kiya Raghu ko manaane ke liye. Kiss on cheeks & hug. Haaye yaar & Raghu rained Antara's face with kisses. Kya romantic update tha yaar. Aage aur zyada romance likna samjhi?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
fr me it ws d best update uptill nw πŸ˜›...
loved rantara moments... dey were so ❀️...
mom dad rohan all were happy seeing dem happy πŸ‘...
nice update as fr me precap is more intense n happening.
uodate soon ..tkcr
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjinimala


Hi divya..welcome to my stories. Thanks alot..please continue to like and comment. Stay tuned darling.

ya off course
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Posted: 10 years ago
very lovely dear
raghu kitna nautanki hai😲😲
apni nautanki se antara ko rula deta hai
fir chup karwata hai😳😳
precap very scary
waiting for next updateπŸ˜›
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