Originally posted by: sanjinimala
Ria,it was fabulous update as usual ⭐️
Thank you ji for entertaining your readers with your mind-blowing updates 👏
Loved it very much ⭐️
Very well written 👏
The story is progressing really well 😊
Keep writing 😊
"Machmach was always worried about ruku's hand made dishes. She always found machmach as scrape goat to taste her special rayta."
poor MM 😆"he strong wrist was wrapped with a leather belt and hanky. My hands froze just inches above from the broad palm. My eyes widened as I recognized him. Out of shock I stood there motionless staring wide to that hand. Even he didn't respond and waited patoently. With a deep breath I looked up and met two pairs of deep black orbs, almost unreadable and full with mystery, still hold a little chink of guilt."now who is that...big cliffhanger...----------------------------------------im loving rukku-mm friendship n ther bak bak...raghu was loving antu's cookie bfr she came to mumbai...its bcmng more more n intersting...wt will happen wen raghu realise antu hates him...hates him for killing her parents...
Riyuuu meri pyari Yeduuu ...🤗
this update just shaken me inside out ...ohhh it was just something which i was waiting for most eagerly ...the first half was full on mystery about to unleash slowly in front of Raghu ...Hmm exactly... Till now he was totally unaware of the actual face of her godly mother..whatever happens he blindly believe that whatever mai do.. she does it for others well being... but slowly her godly mask is falling down in front of him.and the second half just blew me ...u know u r a wonderful painter who paints such beautiful lively paintings through her words. i loved the fact that Antara's mind just lit up with not any event object or anything else but the Mother Nature has done the miracle. i am just not capable enough to review this awesome pulse calming heart soothing scene.Pampu...U know ur analysis really blew me away sometimes...u put some really amazing points which lead me to aww struck phase... while reading some parts of this review i felt like even i didn't go to such depth while penning down the scene.. but u exactly draws out the true essence in ur review which even i am not capable of... as if like u know me more than i know myself..😆i really don know how this portion of ur update is going to affect other yedis of this forum but for me it just quenched my thirst so much...i am feeling calm feeling happy and tranquil. this is the magic of ur writeup...u just do the wonder in no time ... i loved how hard Antara tried not to think the way Mother Nature was complelling her to think about Raghu but all in vain... the sun changed his ray to bright golden from bloody red and indicated her life...she was not willing to turn back and look at him but still she had to ...she was not intending to catch the ball and smile forgetting everything but she had to ...the happy chirpy giggles of the little boys...the bright golden sunray ...made her bath in happy vibrations after a such a long time ...and the two black intense eyes ...OHHH what can i say about those deep magnetic eyes ...😳 for the first time i think Antara felt the pull the attraction in a different way...she is still confused but again i love her confusion so much 😳jokes apart this cofusion is so deep complex tender yet harsh. she was confused the most today because for the first time she didnt feel any hatred towards him ...she tried hard but still couldnt ...Actually u know... I have the idea of this scene from long ago... there are some scene came into my mind before starting this FF... like the first meet of raghu and antara in kashmir and their encounter in kashmir where raghu drags antara forcefully at a corner to ask her name, their encounter in mumbai where antara was first time drawn by his mouth organ, the train scene where raghu defended the man who was going to throw acid on antara's face and these cricket match scenes..,fir this perticular cricket match scene... the idea came into my mind while i was watching a beautiful sunset view one month ago from my rooftop...just like these some scenes were in my mind way before and i included them here if i get chance there are lot more scenes to come which i didn't included yet... the idea of these scenes comes all of a sudden to me...😆... i have so much in mind and don't know those scenes were convincing or pakao...😆/// anyways i won't pakao you with my pakaoing words... all i want to say that i really love the way u analyzed the whole seq... even i was not capable of thinking ti these level😳bravo Ria...just fantastic ...its for me is so much soul soothing...loved it ...waiting more impatiently for the another bit of ur necter dose in ur next updatetab tak liye bear my rant ...luv u dear n proud to hv u as my frnd in my life...
aww kyaa part is 31
full on rantara...and raghu's bappa...raghu become like a kid in front of bappa...and that innocence made me like a lot...his naughty smile... tubelight brain...so misscall... came finally...antu still nt in mood to give the forgiveness...raghu...work hard...do something hatke and win misscall's smile...😉
Originally posted by: salini143
Arre Antu slaps Raghu, aur koun slapping game khel sakta hai 😉 , inn do ke alwa
DDEJ Ki yaar as jayegi, slapping scene pad kar tera
Aur haan, banner ne mera jite ji red red katal kar dalu
Ayye hot Raghu
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