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oye hoye riiuuu...it was a dhamaka update as usual...whenever i read ur update and raghus dialogue...i just visualise ddej in front of me...
Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr
Hey Riuu...😊...atlast mujhe comment karne ka mokha mila...😃...phewww...
Okay...now back to d chapters......as always mindblowing...👏..👍🏼...Loved it to the core...❤️...Yedi Behna...😳...Thanks andy ji...😳i'l try to summarise all d previous chaptrs which i havnt commented...😊..So Raghu came to kno abt Antu's parents death n a little info on her past...😳...Yup of course... She couldn't hide it forever naa.. Though he just came to know about the half truth only... But it was enough to affect him...Riuu,,,d way u brought it na..i mean d scenes...totally worth it...👏..there were so many ways in which he cud have come to know abt it...even i was contemplating on them...🤔...but d scene which u chose...was a most soul touching-connecting one with a subtlety in it...d pain of loosing parents...😔..4 all 3 of them...I have planned the seq long before.. u may say when the story started... I was thinking that how to reveal antara's truth in front of raghu gradually.. just like the curtain raising one after another... It was clear to me that antara wouldn't be able to reveal the truth herself directly in front of raghu.. she won't be in a state of mind.. I didn't wanna make that a cliche scene as it was one of the turning point of story...the turning point where raghu would get a little glimpse of antara's pain hidden deep inside. so i was thinking for long that how exactly the seq should be... How i can reveal antara's very first truth in front of raghu... After so many thoughts i felt that it would be good that if raghu came to know about the truth all of a sudden.. and he must know from antara... only then he could understood that what actually she was going through... So after so many thoughts i concluded to this seq... hope it looks convincing... I have so many seq planned for future and will reveal as the story will progress...😊U r writings have this effect...dey bring-forth a deep connection with RaNtara...😳...n u always give a surprise element in each of ur updates...😳...Really?!! Is that so?!😆u gave Rukku's POV...i thot it wud b only RaNtara's in d story...but again ur unique ways...😃...🤗...👏...d flow of d story required it...You will get so many charecter's POV here... Not just rantara... The POVs will come as the situation required... Who knows i may have to write DM's POV also🤢.. I really don't wanna do that though, cause thinking at the same line of kajal ki dukan won't be possible for me.. she is such a dark charecter here..,.. Cold, cunning and i really can't endure such darkness..... But who knows about future... for now i am refraining such thoughts...😆n yeh kya......dey never knew...dat d cookies were made by Rhea's Di / relative...i thot atleast dey shud know this...🤔...if not dat it was made by Antu...Nope.. They didn't knew.. Raghu and MM just knew that Rhea brought them fom kashmir. As ruku was so close to Saroj and Rhea so she came to know about antara making the cookie and they couldn't and besides,i wanted to make it surprise for raghu😆... Its always so good to be surprised na?!😆cookies dekhe nahin... ki bas uspe toot padhe...baaki sabkuch bhoolke...😆......haaye...am so waiting 4 d day wen Antu wil bake dem only for Raghu...n dem living as a besotted couple...imagining such scenes 4 now...😳...Kya baat hain.. Everyone has started imagining antu giving cookie to raghu..😆 even pampu was telling me about such things after reading the chap... But its absolutely good to know about ur ideas...😳n there r so many angles which r yet to come...as left pending in d previous chptrs...d Office angle..Aman Sirs n all...(..Maine itna lamba prediction diya us waqt...lekin Madam ne uspe NO COMMEnts likh diya...hmmm...its OK will wait 4 d revelations...😃)...Abhi yee aman kaa kya funda hain is key liye too aap koo agey ki story parna parega... main abhi nahin bata sakti.. suspense khatam hoo jayega naa😳n dis Prashanth...i thot he wud take in a lovey-dovey way...(like us Yediss......)...but d way ur indicating...dara rahi ho yaar...lagta hai ULTI baatein phelayega yeh toh......He he.. Uss prashant kaa chakkar bhi baad mein pata chalega...😆n ur "Mission Sorry"...DDEJ k serial scenes flash ho rahe hain...awww so adorable n wonderful...😳...luvd aajjis interactions...always do...😳...Me 2 loved Ajji always... Wished badly if she could stay in the serial a lil longer😊n e1 d mandir scenes...but yahan Raghu Antu k peeche hai...😃...i didnt expect Raghu to b dere b4 Antu...dat was anothr pleasant unexpected scene from u...Thanks jii😆i think i'll continue my points in next posts...hope u don't miss any with d length of dis...🤢......Don't worry... You surely would know by now that i didn't miss any line😆Keep writing...Yedi Behna...🤗...😳...
oye hoye riiuuu...it was a dhamaka update as usual...whenever i read ur update and raghus dialogue...i just visualise ddej in front of me...
very nice chapter ...the first half was deeply emotional and u hv shown the turmoil in Raghu's mind beautifully.
Thanks madam ji...😆.. glas u liked that part😳kya iss Aman Sir ka koi jurwa hai ??? i can remember he was looking at a photo on his table and ANtu cdnt find out whose pix was that ...so i guess humshakal of Aman sir is a terrorist and my mind is just saying me that this man is going to do some severe wrong soon and our Raghunath will prevent him to do so ...Antara wd come to know that and she wd go mad that if this Raghu is against terrorism then how the hell cd he bomb her parents to death ...Abhi main apna mooh nahin kholne wali jii...😆.. Aap guess karte rahiye... 😉
I think u are thinking about the fact which i mentioned in my last review... About the fact of antara's change in mind about raghu at middle... u are thinking that how it would be possible... well i would say that it will be gradually but unexpectedly... the moment will come in antara's life just like the little ray of warm sun which peeping through the whole of a dark room... like the pleasant small breeze in the suffocating room.. the moment will be the starting of antara's journey towards realizing the actual Raghunath Naik... whom she was stil unaware off... well it will make a bit long time for them to realize each other's truth and accept each other fully... But the journey towards each other is also important as well as reaching the destination...😳
haila main kya kya bak gayee????? RANTS ...lolzzz...Riyyu teri story padke na kya kya guessings aarahe hai mere dimag mein ...hahah 😆 sar chakrane mein tu sach mein mahir hai no doubt...😆
Maine pahele hii kahan tha kii the story is so much complicated... yee too bas suruwat hain jii agey agey dekho hota hain kya...😆wonderful writeup ...waiting eagerly to know what is happening next ...luv u
Kya baat hain sanju... Pahele main chppal kaa demand karti thi too koi nahin deta tha aur abb nahin kiya too tumne mujhe itna cute sandal gift kiya😆
Jokes apart.. Thx for reply😳
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