Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr
Oye Riuuu...🤗...u updated......Thank Goodness for it...😳...n Pampy too...😃...
b4 u loose hope on me......i'll tell only this...that whenever i want to login...a lot of hurdles come n i cant do it...i wud b just waiting wen i wud b able to...bas itna hi...aur nahi sunaoungi apni ghissi-piti kahaani...🤢...mahaul ko bigadna jo nahi hai...hawww...yeh humari Forum ki RaNtara specialised seasoned writers ki story padthi hi...hayee itna sukoon milta hai na...just a goofy smile spreads across my face...will b in total bliss...Chapter ka review detail mein doongi...abhi k liye nahi balki hamesha yaadd rakhna...just love the writings...dont ever doubt it...n dont let the inability of not posting...overpower ur capability of writing...its more than super hit one...Beyond words...gtg...samne k job deadlines meet karte-karte...kahin baar lagta hai ki moon khudh dead na ho jaon...lekin poori tarah "OFF" (Raghu style..😉) ...hone se pehle...har baar comment karne zarrorr aongi...basss u dont loose hope n pateince...😊...luv ya all...❤️...😳..
Originally posted by: sanjinimala
Thanks for updating ria 😃
It was beautiful! 😳
Raghu's dialogues...I have no words...it was fabulous! 👏
Like I said before, no one can write Raghu's dialogues as you do ⭐️
Superb update,it was written beautifully. 👏
The conversation between rantara,I just loved it. 😳
"Pay back" I loved it when Raghu said that 😆
Very nice,can't wait to read more. Thanks for entertaining us with your stories.
Keep writing,hugs 😉
Itna bhi naa ruth jao tum humse
Kahin manate huye sari umar naa lag jayein"
beautiful lines dear..👏
Now coming to the update..
To..wow yaar..fantastic update riu..⭐️
I really loved it.
Ddej ka mandir wala scene yaad aa gaya..😃
Raghu bappa se baat kartey hue kitna cute lagta hai yaar..😳
Raghu antu ko dekhk kisey kho jaata hai..aisa lagta hai jaisey woh apni nazro se antara ki khubshurti pi raha hai..aur nasha sa ho raha hai usey..ab yeh feeling usey acchi lagney lagi hai..😳
yeh raghu bhi na sorry boltey hue bhi apna attitude nahi chorega..bt mujhey bahot pasand hai iska ye attitude..😆
Poor antu..apney aapko control nahi kar paayi..uska pain uska gussa aisa lagta hai may sach may mehsus kar rahi hun..😭is story ko parney k baad may humesha silent mode may chali jaati hun..Mujhey lagta hai antu k parents k baare may jaanney k baad antu k dard ki wajah jaanney k baad raghu ka antu k liye jonoon,uski feelings aur Barr jaayegi..woh antu ko le k aur jyada protective ho jaayega..😛
Last may mera favourite.. raghu ka "OYEE MISSCALL"yaha meri dhadkan tej ho gai yaar..☺️ ..promo wala scene yaad aa gaya...😳 uski aawaz na..abhi bhi sunayi deti hai..😳
Is update may raghu mujhey super cute laga yaar..yeh ladka jaan le lega meri ek din..☺️
Raghu's all dialogues wr superb..👏
Thanks for updating dear.😃
Please continue soon..lv tis story very much..😳 Raghu...❤️ ❤️❤️
jitna dimag ghumana hai na tereko ...ghuma ...am ready to accept everything gladly ...i love TWIIISTTTs dear ...bring on them hhahahahha😆
raha nahi jara ha...am so much THIRSTY ...YyyuuuMmm😆
mera khud kaa dimag ghum raha hain.. main tera dimag kaise ghumaoon?!!🤪... bas confuse hoo key khirki kaa kanch mat tor dena... baki sab feat hain!!🤣
waisey dimag aap bhi kam nahin ghumate hoo jii... aap kaa sathiya par kee too mera almost dimag ghimta raheta hain yee sochkee ki agey kya honey wala hain... 😆
sach kahoon ji too mere koo jyada twist pasand nahin... kahete hain naa... masala is good but if it overddone the food will be spoiled... agey kaa plot soch kee mera dimag already khiskaa huya hain.. don't know kya khichri bana rahi hoon...
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