My continuation of THE story 05/08/14 | Do Dil Bandhe Ek Dori Se

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hello Friends😊

Welcome everyone😳

Let's see where my creative mind will take us today...🤣

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Starts with Renuka Aunty stormiong off followed by mahima.

Jass looks at them and then turns to Shivani.

He apologizes to her on her behalf.

"Old Habbits die hard. I'm SO sorry. I will reason with them. They'll come around"

Jass hugs his sister and congratualtes raghu then leaves..

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rekrn

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hi Jen 😛

Looking forward to your update😃

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Latha tells the family that there is much work to be done as there are two weddings coming up. she ask babs to call the pundit and ask when the auspicious date will be. babs goes o call the pundit...

Sumi is in the kitchen. she smiles. she is thanking God for this new opportunity. she feels happy that finally raghu will get his happiness. she would spend a lifetime repenting for how she treated raghu's family...

Meanwhile, back at the haveli. Renuka aunty is throwing things. she is so angry. Mahima tries to calm her down...

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Agnes

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hmmm...very interesting jen👏

Repented sumi. ..love the idea dear

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Good Jen,

So you have kept Sumi's redemption, enjoy where you are going to take the story.😊

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Renuka aunty is saying that karan cannot marry below his status. she says that this is all raghu's doing. She screams that once again raghu has ruined her life...Mahima tells her that now is not the time to get angry, they have to think about some way to stop karan from marrying ginny. she says that if karan weds ginny then ginny will get all of his money and renuka aunty will be left without anything...

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back at the basti...

Shivani is going up the stairs. she is so happy. finally raghu has confessed his love for her. this is all she ever wanted. she relives the moment when raghu confessed. she smiles. she is not looking where she is going and she misses a step. she trips and was about to fall but raghu caught her in the nick of time. he held her tightly in his arms. they share a passionate eyelock...

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Renuka

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Posted: 10 years ago

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nice one jen ..sumi is good in ur story wow..plz continue. 👏

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time seems to have stopped. Raghu has shivani in his arms. a strand of her hair falls across her face. Raghu removes it and by doing so his fingers brush across her lips. she inhales deeply. they are lost in a world of their own...

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