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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
very nice update uma Di...loving it...šŸ‘...thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
always a pleasure reading your updates..thanks ...šŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Another great update Uma! šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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šŸ˜ŠšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ¼ awesome as always
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
oh no

hope no one mu's raghu n shivani...

nice update uma...

waiting for next part...
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#56
Another great update wonderfully writtenšŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
awesome update as always...šŸ‘šŸ¼

Shivani has gone mad in love for Abhi..who is just using her for her Daddu's property...She is so excited that she is not even listening to Raghu that what he want to say to her...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The story so farā‚¬

During the song and dance programme, Princess Shivani tells her grandfather the King about Prince Abhiā‚¬ā„¢s dream to build a hotel on the school land.. but our prince interrupts and reminds the King about his dream of constructing a school.. the King agrees and says the dream was of princess Shivaniā‚¬ā„¢s father.. Shivani agrees with the Kingā‚¬ā„¢s words and informs that she will convince Prince Abhi about the construction of the school.. Later she informs Prince Abhi about it.. he is furious but hides it wellā‚¬ Prince Abhi acts as if he agrees with the Kingā‚¬ā„¢s plan to build a school on the land, but privately conspires to get the princessā‚¬ā„¢s signature on the land documentsā‚¬

Next moring, our prince Raghu spies a man handing over the documents to prince Abhi.. he goes up swiftly to find princess Shivani and warn her.. she was in the process of plucking a rose from the bush, and very sweetly our prince helps her by plucking all the thorns before they prick herā‚¬ she informs that the rose is for prince Abhi.. just then prince Abhi walks up with the documents and invites the princess to come into his room.. Raghu is perturbed..

Our prince-in-disguise tries to stop princess Shivani from entering the room with Prince Abhi.. He knew that Prince Abhi was upto no good and will take the princessā‚¬ā„¢s signature on the land documents.. he tries to distract her by asking her about the flowers, but princess Shivani gets exasperated with his fumbling words and scolds him.. she walks into the room with Prince Abhi.. our prince does not know what to do.. finally he hatches a plan and enlists the help of Pannatai.. Meanwhile Prince Abhi weaves a false tale to princess Shivani, saying that he wants to open an old peoples home alongwith the school.. princess Shivani is excited by this idea and thinks itā‚¬ā„¢s a great surprise gift for her grandfather.. she signs on the dotted line.. Pannatai interrupts them and engages them in conversation.. and our prince Raghu sneaks in from a window and steals the signed documentā‚¬

In another part of the palace, Prince Jaswant and his greedy wife are stealing the palaceā‚¬ā„¢s antique treasures to sell them and pay off their gambling debts.. they run into Raghu, who was heading for the Kingā‚¬ā„¢s room to show the documents.. Prince Jaswant demands the documents from Raghu.. he and his wife Mahima are shocked to see the contents .. they convince Raghu that they will inform the King about prince Abhiā‚¬ā„¢s misdeed.. but alas, Prince Jaswant goes to Prince Abhi and tries to make a bargain with him.. prince Jaswant tells prince Abhi that he will not inform the king if Abhi pays off his huge debts.. Prince Abhi spots the King and princess Shivani entering the room with Raghu and he turns the tables on Prince Jaswant.. he exposes prince Jaswantā‚¬ā„¢s debts before the King and also weaves a convincing tale about his own activities.. he tears up the documents to prove himself .. poor prince Raghu is dumbfounded and unable to refute Prince Abhiā‚¬ā„¢s story.. he feels upset that because of him, Prince Jaswant was humiliated before his family and also Prince Abhi managed to cover up his misdeed..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Thanks for the lovely write up Uma! I always look forward to reading your princess storyšŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
This is very lovely tale! :)
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