I'M looking for LOVE (part 2- 11 july updated)

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HELLO GUYS I M HEAD TO TOE in love with dyl and dabs so i thought of writing a os with 3-4 parts
part 2- pg2
part 1πŸ˜†

All yours ladies" said Dylan as Thakur gurls started beating chaddha along with LN who have gathered there in the name of excuses to teach chadda a lesson...binni did a great acting...!!

Suddenly tables turned as chaddha suddenly picked up a gun and shouted "Dylan singh Shekhawat...you destroyed my plans...now I will kill you" pointing gun at Dylan. All the Thakur girls looked scared. He pressed the trigger and dabbu fell into dylan's arms

"debjyani..." cried Dylan seeing the girl in his arms who took the bullet on herself. Chandi had called the police and police took chaddha away.

"pagal ladki yeh kya kar diya" sobbed Dylan holding dabbu in his arms.

"aap ...ha...m..mes...ha mmuu...jhe bac...haate ho...aa...aaa...j mm.mmm..aine bacha...li...!!" she said losing her breath

" ddeb..debjyani...don't speak"

"somebody call the ambulance" shouted Dylan

In the ambulance Dylan sat by dabbu's side holding her hand ...tears trickling down his once expressful eyes...

"dabbu.. don't sleep...a little more...tumne aisa kyun kiya...agar tumhe kuch ho gaya ...debjyani tumhe jeena hoga apni family ke liye...mere liye"

Dabbu smiled seeing her hand in his hand .

" doctor please save her" shouted DYLAN as doc ordered ward boy to take her into OT

5 minutes later doc came out of the OT...Dylan rushed to him...

"aap operation kijiye na...bahar kya kar rahe hai" shouted Dylan helding his collar

Ln calmed dyl and doc said "goli dil ke paas stuck hai...a special panel of surgeons is on their way ...we are waiting for them. You fill the form and operation amount"

"papa mere account mein sirf 2 lacs hain..main anant ko call karti hoon"

But dyl handed his card to anji " use it"

6 hours later doctors came out and said "operation was a success...but we cant say anything unless she opens her eyes"

Dylan stood outside ICU staring at once lively dabbu "you will live...you have to live for me" and for the first time in life Dylan broke down on the floor badly.LN came to dyl to assure him

"sab meri vajah se hua ...usne meri maut apne sir par le li"

Suddenly the nurse came out shouting "doc the patient is sinking"

Dylan saw from the icu window and left from there. He reached temple and shouted "she is not yours..she is mine...you cant just take her away...bring her back"

Electric shocks were given to dabbu...first shock...dabbu's heart beat was sinking...second shock, no recovery and finally the third shock...dabbu breathed hard and opened her eyes.

Doc came out and congratulated and allowed them to meet her. Anji called Dylan " main aa rha hoon"said dyl on phone

"really...sir ro rahe the" said dabbu amused as Thakur girls narrated whole story from her gunshot to her being alive.

Dylan barged in "debjyani.." and stared at dabbu

"sir" said dabbu examining dyl and then said " aap tension mat lijiye goli dil par nhi lagi..kyunki mera dill todne ka copyright to aapk..." trailed dabbu as dyl hugged her and started shedding tears leaving dabbu amazed and Thakur girls smiling warmly

"tum pagal ho...merit oh jaan hi nikal gayi thi...tumhe sabki chinta hai maa..papa..sisters par meri nhi hai...main jeete ji mar jaata ..aage se kabhi aisa kuch mat karna" and dyl started sobbing .Dabbu's eyes were also teary and she hugged dyl back

" main tumhare bina nhi ji sakta...main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon..i..i love u a lot"confessed dyl helding dabbu tight. Tears trickled down dabbu's eyes as she smiiled hugging dyl close and confessing " I love u too sir...I love you too"

All the Thakur girls hugged each other and as ln and mamta entered the room " mom dad aapne itna romantic confession miss kar diya" chirped ishu

"kya hua bhai" asked ln confused

"offohh..papa Dylan or dabbu dono ne ek dusre ko I love you keh diya" said chandi

LN and mamta looked towards the duo who were still in each other's embrace oblivious of their surroundings and mamta hugged ln saying "he is the bestest for dabbu"

Finally they separated and looked into each other's eyes smiling warmly. Dylan took dabbu's face in his hands and wiped her tears and so did dabbu and then dyl kissed dabbu's forehead

"ahh.ahhhmmm" ishu cleared her throat and dyl and dabs smiled shyly

"aap sab log bahar jaayiye..inka checkup karna hai" said nurse. Everyone left and dyl took dabbu's hand in his and kissed it saying " I m waiting outside" and left

He and dabbu did the eye talk through the ICU's window when all the girls cornered dyl and started pulling his leg...

TO BE CONTINUED

it was long but next part will be too romantic


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FirSt of all welcome to this forum dear πŸ˜ƒ
Wow what a concept you have chosen for os
Brilliant ...
The direct confession of the feelings ...superb ...
Nice effort
Keep writing more on
Deblen
And do continue this os😳
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πŸ˜›THANX FOR THE APPRECIATION
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Lovely OS...cant wait next part.
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Ohhoho!.. It's so so romantic! Loved your writing... Please write the next part very fast, I'm waiting eagerly for the next part! πŸ‘πŸΌ ... And I hope the same thing happens in the show, so we don't have to wait for a long time for Dylan's confession
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Lovely OS... The confession it's romantic... please update soon ... can't wait for next part !
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Nice one dear.
Wud wait for the next part.
Continue soon :)
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Its wonderful...i want pm from next time πŸ˜ƒ
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Aww confession was sweet nice start
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πŸ˜›so guys i am back with part 2 and very much thanks for the feedback
part2

Debjyani was taken home. She waited for dyl's call with all her sisters pulling her leg.

"Dylan ab kya sharmana call karne se, haq se call kar...she is yours...yeah call her " .

Her phone rang and her face brightened..but chandi mata saw it and started "tere dylan ka call aa raha hai...speaker par daal ham bhi baat karenge apne future jiju se'

"haan..haan...kar lo baat ...lekin yahan par signal weak hai..bahar chalte hai" smiled dabbu coyly and as they reached the door she closed the door and picked the phone

"hello"

."um...um...vooo.."

"Dylan...hello..dylan bhoot ki acting kr rahe ho kya?"

"nhimainvopuchnachahrh thikiurfine" blabbered Dylan like jet...

"?????...kyaaa.??"

Calm down Dylan..just calm down, said dyl to himself and spoke on phone "are you fine dabbu"

"haaann...i am good"

"jaldi se sahi ho jaao,I m looking forward to working with my girlfr.."

"working with my...?" asked dabbu naughtily

"my girlfriend" said dyl confidently

"so I am your girlfriend...mr.boyfriend" giggled she

"are you not?" asked Dylan confused

"no...I am not your girlfriend I m ur premika and u r my prem"

"that's cute..."

"I got it aajse main aapko Dil bulaaoongi"

"dil...???"

"haan Dylan se dyl aur dyl se dil...acha hai na"

" as you wish my princess" smiled dil

"so mere dil...I have a good news for u..main kal se office join kar rhi hoon"

"no...kal tumhara operation hua hai...it is risky"

"main toh aaungi"

"no"

"Yes"

"nooo"

"yes..yes"

"yesss"

"no"

"haan yeh hui na baat" said dil

"main toh aaungi"

"yeh tumhare boss ka order hai debjyani"

"aur ye aapki simran ka order hai"

"simran..??"

"are aap movies nhi dekhte kya...raj vaali simran...arrre DDLJ"

"I hate shah rukh khan"

"I love shah rukh khan"

"well..i love you" "aur kal tum office nhi aa rahi ho"

"main aa rahi hoon aur mujhe ab aur argue nhi karna,bye" said an angry dabbu

"accha...theek hai phone mat kaato"

"theek hai nhi kaat ti"

"tumhe kuch bolna nhi hai"

"kya...files ke bare main" smiled dabbu

"nhi kuch important"

"umm...pc ke bare main"

"Nhiii..yaar"

"toh fir kya bolna tha mujhe"

"kuch nhi ...apna khyal rakhna bye" said angry dil

"arre dil naraaz mat ho..because I so so much love you...saccha wala"

"I love you too"

"I love you double too" said dabbu and dil smiled

"I love you three aata hai bhai"

"yeh kiski aawaz thi debjyani"

"pata nhi dil" she turned and shouted "papa" and cut the call immediately

"aap andar kaise ...aye"

"darwaze se"

"par maine darwaza lock kiya tha"

"humne spare key se khol diya" chirped eshu

"or tumhari prem simran dil waali saari baatein sun li" said anji

so how was this..pls shareπŸ˜‰
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