PaRi Story - Chalo Ek Baar Fir Se - Part 3/4 Page 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Oh my God!!! It was beautiful!!! I can't control my emotions now!!! Parth loved his wife so much! Teni for a change was bearable and good! Wish they had not spoiled the show.

Anyways...this was beautiful! Esp. that little scene of Ipshita and Papa Parth! This gives me so much feels.

Update soon! <3

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Diya_Abhilasha

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Very nice dear 😊

Kaash serial mei bhi aisa hota 😭

I can imagine Ipshita- Parth moments 😊

Parth ko apna shorvari mil gayi😊

Waiting for Parth- Shorvari confrontation.

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FruitToasty

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Posted: 6 years ago

#33

This is some good stuff... Even Teni has developed a backbone... Can't wait to read Parth-Shorvari reunion

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Diya_Abhilasha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#34

And thanks for the quick update.

There are many ways to make this show wonderful. But CVS obsession for one character has ruined this show.

Edited by Diya_Abhilasha - 6 years ago

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Sudha

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Wow that was a super fast second update, rashmi

I was actually wondering what role will teni have in your story, good that you've kept her character as friend who is being a mother to Ipshita as promised by Parth.

And loved the way Parth misses his Shorvari and the pain in his life without her.

So now he's finally spotted her? Eagerly waiting for your next update! Great job 👍🏼

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jyothi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Tats awesome shor and parths meeting

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MIKELA

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Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Molto bello! Mi piace molto questa storia ,e Rashmi sei una brava scrittrice 👍🏼

Non vedo l'ora di leggere, il resto della storia, abbiamo sognato tantissimo, al giorno quando Parth e Shorvori saranno din nuovo insieme, pero, questi maledetti produttori hanno rovinato tutto...Adesso po andare al inferno il loro spettacolo...

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snowflakes2119

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Posted: 6 years ago

#38

Loved reading the chapter. Very well written! A self restrained Teni is what wanted to see in the show. Waiting for Shourvari's return in Parth's life.

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Rashmi

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: xxxlgirl2001
Oh my God!!! It was beautiful!!! I can't control my emotions now!!! Parth loved his wife so much! Teni for a change was bearable and good! Wish they had not spoiled the show.
Anyways...this was beautiful! Esp. that little scene of Ipshita and Papa Parth! This gives me so much feels.
Update soon! <3

Thank you! 😳
The best way to keep Teni bearable is to keep her screen space to minimal 😆

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Rashmi

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: Diya_Abhilasha
And thanks for the quick update.

There are many ways to make this show wonderful. But CVS obsession for one character has ruined this show.

Very true! 🤔
Glad to know you are enjoying it 😃

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