Aha..! The happiest ending..finally humein daddykara mil gaya..loved the way he teased her..rudy's idea worked...yeeey..!! loved it..the epilogue was like sone pe suhaaga..thanks for the pm..would love to read more from u...
Such a beautiful end. Loved it. You explained each and everything so wonderfully well. Epilogue was a treat to read. Keep writing such amazing stories 😊
Beautiful ending yaar...I really loved the conversation between dadi and om...how she made him understand ... that the lies which is used for a good reason had much value than the truth...awww my Rudy baby's idea worked...he is really smart and as well as om lied to get her back... the epilogue was mindblowing yar that gauri is really pregnant and om is going to be dad...it was a perfect one
Absolutely amazing! Loved every bit of this story. You're an awesome story-teller!! The dialogs were extremely power packed, kudos to you! Esp the scene in the 2nd part after Gauri's revelation, it was perfectly described. How I wish to see something like that on the show. Dadi and Om's conversation deserves a special mention too, it was endearing..Read all parts together and it was all the more fun because I didn't have to wait 😆..Hoping to read more of your stories! You're a ⭐️
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