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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Awesome update yar...

I am feeling scared of imagining this happening in the show yar...om is not going to forgive gauri for this

wat all gauri done is for him...for his well being but by protecting him she opened the door for his heartbreak

he was being attached to the imaginary child and wat he had gone through hearing the misscarriage news was too heartbreaking...so his anger is justified

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Arohi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

woow...it's awesome... so perfectly n beautifully written...

Sach a emotional n heart breaking part it is...

eagerly waiting for next update...continue soon...

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

I just read both parts

Very well written dear

2nd part is very emotional.. rula diya

Very heart touching..

Bechara omkara toot gya...crying😭

Feeling very bad for him and gauri also

Waiting for the next part

Gud luck

~Jyoti~

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paru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

its a beautiful and emotional update
i loved itt soo much...
thanks a lot for pm sweety
pls do countinue soon...

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NatluS-Sahiba

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

I have no words... and words justify bhi nahi kar sakenge mere emotions is waqt... beautifully written... feelings, emotions & pain!

You are an amazing writer. 👏

Edited by NatluS - 7 years ago

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maivelli

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

update next part soon its lovelt TS

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Naina

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Such an emotional update. It was beautifully written, and was so heart touching. I don't have enough words for this. 👏

Can't wait for the next part. Post soon!

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Savina

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Part Three Teaser

"Toh phir thik hai" Omkara said with an ache in his heart, and a voice that masked his emotions. She looked into his eyes, already dreading the words that would spill from his lips. He winced in pain as he said those harsh words, "Tod dete iss shaadi ko." Her heart felt icily numb in spite of anticipating what he was to say, but if he was better off without her, she would happily let him go. And so, without any argument on her behalf, she nodded a meek yes.

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Tasnim

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

So the teaser is here..!! Loved it..will be waiting for the next part...

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Rumadiv

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Dear Savina,
I can't have patience please. After reading the trailor i can't wait. Its like the ending is not happiee ending. If happiee ending also there will more emotions n pain. please update ASAP.
With love.
Divya :-)

Edited by Rumadiv - 7 years ago

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